1、高考英语作文1.写作考情解读2.写作升级3.实战演练4.Q&ACONTENTS1PART ONE 写作考情解读03考情考点解读-写作文体分类1记叙文写人、写事2议论文话题类、现象类图片类、图表类34应用文 书信、日记演讲稿说明文 人物、地点 事物、方法考情考点解读-作文评分标准Fast and effective creation of your presentation覆盖了所有内容要点和要求；覆盖了所有内容要点和要求；内容：10分应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语言：10分有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅全文结构紧凑流畅结
2、构：5分内容+语言1515分结构考虑+4-5分“总分25分“卷面美观“字数要求“内容10分；语言10分；结构5分 内容+语言1515分结构考虑4-5分卷面定印象如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次考情考点解读高考作文采用总体评分方式高考作文采用总体评分方式：1.1.覆盖了所有内容要点和要求；覆盖了所有内容要点和要求；2.2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；3.3.具备较强的语言运用能力；具备较强的语言运用能力；4.4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅分，全文结构紧凑流畅考情考点解读-写作五档档次档次内容内容语言语言组织结构
3、组织结构要求要求A档9-10分9-10分4-5分覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑B档7-8分7-8分3分虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯 C档5-6分5-6分3分虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。D档3-4分3-4分1分漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性E
4、档0-2分0-2分0分明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容；较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解；缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯2PART TWO写作升级9一：语言第一位（语言高级）语言第一位（语言高级）二：内容第二位（要点齐全）内容第二位（要点齐全）三：结构第三位（文章分段）结构第三位（文章分段）三三原原则则高级词汇和句式修辞手法有效的连词名人名言或谚语作文升级写作思路内容升级语言升级开头-正文-结尾审题立意词汇+句型升级写作升级作文升级2.1 写作思路作文升级-写作思路0101写作前写作前0202写作中写作中0303后写作阶段后写作阶段作文升级-写作思路作文升级-写作思路结尾
5、开头正文引入主题01阐明观点02引出下文03开头作文升级-写作思路-开头 Hearing the news that you plan to develop a new app of students sharing clothes,I feel truly proud of your novel idea.Personally speaking,I am willing to share my clothes on your app.The reasons are as follows.正文内容恰当1.把题目变成问题2.找出题目中的关键词内容充分1.具体事例2.个人经历3.类比立意深远1.扩
6、大范围2.扩大范畴作文升级-写作思路-正文 话题：假货的危害内容升化立意深远To harm original bondholders.(cant attract and remain customers)To harm consumers(harm consumers suffering financial and emotional loss)To harm national morality(cant set an example for the young)话题：假货的危害To harm original bondholders.+lose money,lose reputationTo
7、 harm consumers.+poor quality goods,financial loss作文升级-写作思路-正文SummaryFinal comment功能总结直接总结首尾呼应让步提出解决方案发出呼吁预测将来发展评论In summary,I strongly hold the opinion that artificial intelligence will dominate human soon.It is time for us to lay more emphasis on its development and find out how to utilize it prop
8、erly.作文升级-写作思路-结尾 作文升级-写作思路Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.请根据漫画的内容谈谈看后的感受。你的作文需包含：1.描述图片的内容2.谈谈你的看法作文升级-写作思路-实战演练 Vividly depicted in the picture is a mother helping her daughter wash feet and a daughter taking the servic
9、e for granted and almost forgetting to celebrate Mothers Day without the remind of the newspaper.It ironically reveals a commonly-occurring phenomenon that children are spoilt,ignorant of paying off parents love and care.As far as I am concerned,considering the shrinking scale of Chinese family,the
10、only child is usually treasured.Parents are ready to do whatever they can to ensure their childs living condition,even helping them wash feet.No wonder the children are becoming selfish under such education.However,it will lead to serious consequence to not only the family but also the society.作文升级-
11、写作思路-实战演练开头：引入主题阐明观点引出下文 Firstly,children are robbed of the opportunity to take care of themselves,thus losing the living ability when they grow up.They will find it difficult to stay independent without their parents care.Secondly,basic respect to parents is replaced by the idea to regard parents a
12、s servant,let alone pay back love and care,causing parents to feel heartbroken.Whats more,when children lose the ability to respect and love people,the world of this question will be horrible to live.After all,as the famous saying goes,Everyone is born equal instead of being someones slave.As conseq
13、uence,this phenomenon is definitely harmful.Healthy environment of a family should be created simply by refusing to treat your child as a king or queen.作文升级-写作思路-实战演练正文：内容升华立意深远结尾：总结 发出呼吁2.2内容提升作文升级-写作思路神奇的STREEC（裸奔法）STREEC因为和英文里的裸奔streak的发音相同，所以也叫“裸奔法”。STREEC可以帮助我们快速记住下面12个单词：Skill（技能）&Efficiency（效
14、率）Technology（科技）&Safety（安全）Right（权利）&Responsibility（责任）Environment（环境）&Health（健康）Employment（就业）&Money（钱）Culture（文化）&Fun（乐趣）每一行第一个单词的首字母拼在一起，就是STREEC。有了STREEC，覆盖了人类生活中最常见的方面，我们便可以把抽象，难以理解，或者难以找到论点支撑的话题迅速具体化，让思考点子的过程变成顺藤摸瓜的过程。作文升级-内容提升-审题立意作文升级-内容提升-审题立意一起来看看下面这个作文题目吧Suppose you are asked to give advi
15、ce on whether to attend college at home or abroad,write an essay to state your opinion.You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.神奇的STREEC（裸奔法）的运用Skill（技能）&Efficiency（效率）Technology（科技）&Safety（安全）Right（权利）&Responsibility（责任）Environment（环境）&Health（健康）Employment（就业）&Money（
16、钱）Culture（文化）&Fun（乐趣）根据STREEC，可以从以下这些点来写：Skill（提升技能，可以说到国外的一些教育做得比较成熟，能够提升我们的学术技能，语言技能等。同时，一个人到国外念书，还能够提升我们的一些生活技能，如独立生活的能力以及对不同环境的适应能力等）Employment（因为有着国外留学的背景，也可以增加我们的就业竞争优势）Culture（去到国外，我们还能够接触到不同的文化，传播中国的文化，了解中外文化的差异，开阔自己的眼界等）Fun（去到国外留学同时也是一种有趣的生活体验，不仅体验到其他国家的教育，还能去到喜欢的国家，体验更多的来自学习，旅游，交友等等的乐趣）作文升
17、级-内容提升-审题立意2019年1月写作试题 作文升级-内容提升-审题立意2019年1月II.Guided Writing(25)Directions:Write an English composition in around 150words according to the instructions given below.假如你是明启中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。作文升级-内容提升-审题立意神奇的STREEC（裸奔法）的运用Skill（技能）&Efficie
18、ncy（效率）Technology（科技）&Safety（安全）Right（权利）&Responsibility（责任）Environment（环境）&Health（健康）Employment（就业）&Money（钱）Culture（文化）&Fun（乐趣）Dear Li Nan,Hearing the news that you plan to develop a new app of students sharing clothes,I feel truly proud of your novel idea.Personally speaking,I am willing to share
19、my clothes on your app.The reasons are as follows.To begin with,it will be wonderful for me if I learn that someone that I barely know of can share my happiness of wearing my clothes.It feels like you are emotionally connecting someone in your clothes.Then I may naturally wish to know more about tha
20、t particular“someone”and probably further deepen our relationship.In the end,a good friendship between me and my clothes mate might be built based on our common clothes.Whats more,if other students can try my clothes through the app,in turn,I also can try their new clothes.Therefore,students can wea
21、r different types of clothes without actually spending any money.作文升级-内容提升-审题立意愿意共享衣服Fun：乐趣、交友Money：省钱 Whats more important is that sharing my clothes will take full use of them.In todays material society,there are so many parents who prepare lots of clothes for their beloved children for different
22、occasions,such as a dress for the party,gym suit for indoor sports.Moreover,the clothes can only realize their true value after they are put on a persons body.To summarize,sharing my clothes on your app benefits others and me.Yours,Li Hua作文升级-内容提升-审题立意Efficiency：衣服充分利用2.3语言提升作文升级-语言提升语言升级词汇升级A句型升级B作
23、文升级-语言提升具体性原则stir/stimulate students interest in study arouse students passion in learning make students self-motivated in acquiring knowledge.新颖性原则the approach of the Internet erathe emergence of the digital agethe advent of big data age.短语优先As opposed to making the team a united one,we spend too m
24、uch time on developing individual skills.词汇升级例例1:make students like study；010203例例2:the arrival of the age of information例例3:We spent too much time developing individual skills and we dont spend any time making the team a united one.作文升级-语言提升-词汇升级.副词Seemingly meaningless little thought or ideas can
25、potentially explode into great projects when acted upon.并列Fragile yet sternerSeemingly fragile yet sterner词汇升级例例4:Some little ideas seem meaningless,but they have a potential to explode into great projects when acted upon.040506例例5:the grass is not only fragile but also sterner.例例6:He is a wise man,
26、and inspires me a lot.押韵Wise and witty,he has inspired me a lot.作文升级-语言提升-词汇升级 The drawing above depicts a miracle:a group of seemingly fragile but tenacious grass can even push upward the huge rock above them.The power of a single blade of grass is weak,but if thousands of grass straighten their un
27、yielding backbones together,they can overturn big rocks and gain the blue sky and sunshine for growth.作文升级-语言提升-词汇升级语言点评具体新颖高级1.Seemingly-It seems that/to be2.fragile 同义转化 weak,tender,slight,sensitive,vulnerable3.tenacious 同义词转换 strong;firm;persistent;preserving 4.straighten their unyielding backbon
28、es 挺起不屈的脊梁作文升级-语言提升-词汇升级B分类分类A词汇词汇C积累积累作文升级-语言提升-词汇升级排比句非谓语动词常用谚语其他强调句倒装句 with复合结构定语从句状语从句名词性从句被动句 8作文升级-语言提升-句型升级38一：肯定不如双否好一：肯定不如双否好二：陈述不如倒装妙二：陈述不如倒装妙三：主动不如被动巧三：主动不如被动巧三三不不如如作文升级-语言提升-句型升级例例1:The postman comes on time every day.010203The postman never fails to come on time.Not only can travelling
29、relax us,but also broaden our horizons.The main problem now is how this can be prevented from happening again.例例2:Travelling can not only relax us,but also broaden our horizons.例例3:The main problem now is how we can prevent this from happening again.肯定不如双否肯定不如双否好好陈述不如倒装陈述不如倒装妙妙主动不如被动主动不如被动巧巧作文升级-语言提
30、升-句型升级40一：巧用非谓语一：巧用非谓语二：二：妙加同位语妙加同位语三：三：排山倒海句排山倒海句加加分分句句作文升级-语言提升-句型升级040506例例4:Nowadays,we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridges the gap among different races or cultures.The great wall,a living proof of our splendid past,will be our first destination.We have got to study har
31、d,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.Nowadays,we can easily travel from one place to another,thus bridging the gap among different race or cultures.巧用非谓语巧用非谓语妙加同位语妙加同位语排山倒海句排山倒海句作文升级-语言提升-句型升级例例5:The Great wall is a living proof of our splendid past,s
32、o it will undoubtedly be our next destination.例例6:We have to study hard to realize our dream.作文提升-卷面篇-书写卷面升级衡水体3PART THREE 实战演练2019年12月普陀一模写作试题 实战演练2019年12月 普陀一模II.Guided Writing(25)Directions:Write an English composition in around 150words according to the instructions given below.如今，许多家长焦虑地守在孩子身边、
33、监视孩子的一举一动，被称之为“直升机父母”(helicopter parents)，还有“扫雪机父母”(snowplow parents)，轰隆隆地扫除孩子通往成功道路上的所有障碍，让孩子免遭失败、挫折。对此，学校校刊特辟专栏对此进行讨论，请以李华为名投稿，用身边的例子描述这两类家长，并谈谈对此的看法。事例一：频繁打电话、偷看日记手机失败之处:缺乏信任，子女受伤、疏远事例二：帮助写论文、竞赛失败之处：剥夺成长机会应该成为怎样的家长：智慧、大度、理解实战演练 In response to the heated discussion in the school newspaper column,I
34、d like to share with you my opinion on two kinds of parents:helicopter and snowplow parents.Helicopter parents,as its name suggests,monitors their kids all the time.So anxious about their children are they that they feel like staying above their head forever.If you are“lucky”enough to have such pare
35、nts like my deskmate Wang Lei,you are likely to receive their calls once every two hours,asking questions like what you are doing and who keeps you company.I cant remember how many times Wang Lei has complained to me about his parents stealing into his room and peeping at his diary and cellphone,whi
36、ch has almost driven him mad.The helicopter parents often end up with a worsening relationship with their children,because lack of trust will hurt their feelings.实战演练交代背景，阐明目的身边例子描述失败在哪里 Snowplow parents,on the other hand,often do a wonderful job clearing all the obstacles on their childrens way to
37、success.They may feel relieved if their kids are spared from suffering losses and failures.I used to envy my friend Linda because her father was a professor,who could give her a helping hand in her academic research paper and English speech contest.But Lindas fading interest in her thesis and contes
38、t reminded me of the old saying“no pain,no gain”.Those snowplow parents fail to understand the fact that hardships,setbacks and failures are essential parts on the road to success and maturity.A tree cannot become tall and strong without the bath of rainstorms.These two kinds of parents often fail i
39、n their education,despite their love and care.What we need are wise parents,who are broad-minded and empathetic.Love alone is not enough;wisdom is also badly needed when parents get along with kids.实战演练事例到议论的过渡失败在哪里看法：应该做怎样的父母1.多写多练，至少保证每周一篇的练笔。2.关注作文的各类题材，关注身边的热点话题。3.写完一篇作文后，注重分析与改进，反思可以提升的方面。4.适当地积累一些好词好句，多学习好的范文。写作备考建议备考建议4PART FOUR Q&AQA&Q&A
