1、PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评Unit 1My friend and I I have a good friend. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. Im 11. Hes older than me. Hes 150 cm tall. Im 148 cm. Hes taller and stronger. Hes 43 kg and Im 41 kg. Hes heavier. We like summer best. We like sports, too. On Saturday, we play ping-pong.
2、On Sunday, we play computer games. How happy we are!【要领点评】写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比较，通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。句型：因为涉及两个人的比较，不要忘记使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B。注意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比较。不要一味指出不同
3、，还要列举相同之处。根据下面的表格中信息，写一篇文章，要求使用比较级。NameSarahLilyAge1112Height1.6m1.62mWeight45kg43kgShoesSize36Size37Sarah and lily are my friends. Sarah is 11 years old, and lily is 12 years old. Lily is older than Sarah. and lily is taller than Sarah . but Sarahs shoes are size 36.lily s shoes are size 37. Lilys
4、feet are bigger than Sarahs. 点评：表格类的比较，一定要注意人称的比较，看清楚是和谁比，不能一味的一味的就用“I”. 表格里面列出来的比较事项，尽量要写出来，就算没哟写出来，也要在句子里面有体现。 注意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比较。不要一味指出不同，还要列举相同之处。Unit 2A Bad Cold Im not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is
5、sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复，好去上学的愿望。时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数，动词别忘加s。句型：要用feel 加形容词，和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have+表示
6、的疾病的单词。注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一个单词，以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写得病的情况。表示吃药时，通过用take some medicine，不用eat。词汇量要控制在4060之间。My Weekend I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I washed my clothes and went to a park. I did my homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, I c
7、leaned my room and visited my grandparents. I played football and watched TV on Sunday afternoon. I was very tired, but I was very happy. My last weekend I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I walked to my grandparents home. I cleaned the house with them. In the afternoon, I cooked dinner with
8、 my grandmother. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and watched TV, then I went to the library and read books in the afternoon. In the evening, I washed my clothes. My last weekend was very busy. Bu it was very happy. 【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了我的周末活动。时态：我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。Unit3My holidayI
9、went to Beijing by plane on my holiday. Every day I had fun with my parents. We went to the park and went swimming. We saw elephants. And we ate good food. We also took many pictures. We will be back home tomorrow. I was very happy.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态
10、来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+其他主语+will+动词原形+其他注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例：eat 的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。假如你是Amy，你和你的家人一起去了一个美丽的乡村。你们在山上野营并且吃了许多当地的美食等。请根据以上提示写一篇文章。 I went to a beautiful village with my family last week. We went there by bus. Its very far, but I felt
11、excited. The hills were very tall and there were green trees. We took a lot of pictures and ate lots of delicious food. We had a good time there.Uni4Now and then Before, I was short and shy in class. I didnt like exercise and I couldnt ride a bike. But I can go cycling now. I also like playing sport
12、s. My favourite sport is badminton. And I am active in class and have lots of friends. I am different now and I am happy. Before, I was short and quiet. I couldnt do well in my study and I didnt like playing sports. but I am different now. I am taller and active .And I become interesting in studying. I like swimming and camping. I often go cycling on weekends with my friends.点评： 对于现在和过去的对比，过去一定要用过去式，现在的就用一般现在式，一定不能搞混淆。
