1、Lets watch a video together!Whats the video about?Its about travelling!Look at the pictures and guess where it is.PairsNew YorkCairoLondonBeijingHuizhouLondon EyeHouse of ParliamentTower of LondonNational GalleryBig BenThe Tower BridgeBuckingham PalaceDAD(Dashanzi Art District)798艺术区艺术区the Great Wal
2、l长城长城Summer Palace颐和园颐和园the Palace Museum故宫博物院故宫博物院Temple of Heaven 天坛天坛Happy Valley欢乐谷欢乐谷Louvre Museum卢浮宫Champs-Elyses香榭丽舍大道Eiffel Tower埃菲尔铁塔Arc de Triomphe凯旋门Honghua LakeXunliao BayMount LuofuWest Lake I have been to London London is in the south of England.Its the capital of England.There are a l
3、ot of interesting places to visit in London.I have visited the BigBen and London Eye.I have also seen the Buckingham Palace.I have eaten fish and chips in a resturant.It tasted delicious.I can speak English so I have talked to people in English.London is an amazing city.I have had a wonderful time t
4、here.Where is London?Where has the writer visited?What has the writer eaten?What elsehas the Writer done?How did the writer feel about the trip?Its in the south of EnglandBig Ben,London Eye and Buckingham PalaceFish and chipsTalked to people in Englishhad a wonderful timeWhere is.?Where have you vis
5、ited?What have the you eaten?What else have you done?How did you feel about the trip?如今，旅行已经成为人们生活中一个如今，旅行已经成为人们生活中一个重要的部分，同学们也有许多旅行的重要的部分，同学们也有许多旅行的经历。请以经历。请以 I have been to _为题，介绍一次游览经历。为题，介绍一次游览经历。（80词左右）词左右）要求包括：要求包括：1.简单介绍这座城市。简单介绍这座城市。2.介绍在这座游历经历。介绍在这座游历经历。3.你对于这次旅行经历的感受。你对于这次旅行经历的感受。下笔前考虑几个问题
6、：下笔前考虑几个问题：1.人称人称 2.时态时态 3.文章结构文章结构 第一人称第一人称一般过去时；现在完成时一般过去时；现在完成时beginningbodyendingStep 1 审题审题:1.简单介绍这座城市。简单介绍这座城市。Where is.?.is _of.Descibe this city.Step 2:Step 2:2.介绍在这座城市的游览经历。介绍在这座城市的游览经历。What famous places in.have you visited?What food have you eaten?What else have you done in.?London EyeHou
7、se of ParliamentTower of LondonNational GalleryBig BenThe Tower BridgeBuckingham Palacehave afternoon teaeat fish and chipstalk to people in EnglishI have visited_I have seen _.I have had _.I have _.the Big Ben and London Eye.the Buckingham Palace.fish and chips talked to people in English3.你对于这次旅游经
8、历的感受。你对于这次旅游经历的感受。你对这座城市的感受。你对这座城市的感受。.is a very wonderful city.is one of the most beautiful cities in the world.你的体会。你的体会。I really had a good time in.I really enjoyed myself in.Step 2:Step3 Outline：Beginning简单介绍城市：简单介绍城市：.is.Body旅途中的游览经历旅途中的游览经历：I have visited_.I have seen _.I have had_.I have _.En
9、ding你的感受：你的感受：I really _ in.I have been to.with my parents._._._._.I hope to go there again.作文的评价标准作文的评价标准:1.要点要点是否完整是否完整,要点不全要扣分要点不全要扣分;2.过渡过渡是否自然是否自然,是否用到了表转折、表是否用到了表转折、表递进、表选择等等的过渡语；递进、表选择等等的过渡语；3.语法语法是否正确是否正确;4.用词用词用句是否有亮点用句是否有亮点;5.书写书写是否工整是否工整.如何使文章更出色？如何使文章更出色？1.合理利用连接词：合理利用连接词：not only.but al
10、so,because,so,however,but,with,or.example1:原句：原句：I have visited the Big Ben and London Eye.I have visited not only the Big Ben but also London Eye.Example 2:原句：原句：I have talked to people in English.I can speak a little English,so I have talked to People in English.2.写好过渡句。写好过渡句。For example:1.简单介绍伦敦这
11、座城市。简单介绍伦敦这座城市。2.介绍在伦敦的游览经历。介绍在伦敦的游览经历。介绍完伦敦，要接着写在伦敦的游览经介绍完伦敦，要接着写在伦敦的游览经历之前，需要过渡句。历之前，需要过渡句。There are a lot of interesting places to visit in London.How to write a composition abouta travlling experience?*Read the demands carefully.Think before you write.*Try to polish your writing while you are correcting it.*Make sure you have neat and beautiful handwriting.
