1、书面表达专题Part 1 中英文句子表达差异一、语序不同她每周末在家写作业。She every weekend at home do homework. She does homework at home every weekend. 中文句子语序：人物 时间 地点 做事英语句子语序：人物 做事 地点 时间二、状语表达1. 时间、地点状语前加介词她每周末在家写作业。 She does homework at home every weekend. 我每天早上大概 6 点半起床。 I get up at about 6:30 every morning. 她 是 1990 年 出 生 的 。 S
2、he was born in 1990.我住城东路 26 号。I live at 26|， Chengdong Road.例外：每天：every day/night今天早上：this morning2. 汉语由大及小|；英语由小及大她出生于 2019 年 9 月 29 日早上八点。She was born at 8 oclock on the morning of September 29th|， 2019.我来自中国河南省郑州市金水区。I am from Jinshui District|， Zhengzhou City|， Henan Province|， China.三、动词形式 （受人
3、称、时间、态势影响） 她每周末在家写作业。She does homework at home every weekend. They do homework at home every weekend.她昨晚上写作业了。 She did homework last night.我明天写作业。 I will do homework tomorrow.他正在写作业。 He is doing homework.主语为第三人称单数时|，动词要用单三形式(主语)常见的第三人称单数：1. 人称代词 he/she/it 是第三人称单数2. 单个人名、地名或称呼作主语|，是第三人称单数3. 指示代词this/
4、that 做主语时|，是第三人称单数4. 单数可数名词或 “this/that/the+单数可数名词”作主语时|，是第三人称单数5. 不可数名词做主语|，是第三人称单数6. 当数字或字母作主语时|，看作第三人称单数练习：1. Jack (love) his mother very much.2. Mary and Lucy (come)from the same class.3. The milk (be)in the fridge.4. “2” (sound) like “too”.5. The lion (be) a very dangerous animal.6. Kaifeng (be
5、)an old city. 7.That (be)my best friend.Part 2 英语初学者写作易犯错误1. 汉语式思维 (漏掉动词、句子顺序、“一句话”的理解)The ID card in the drawer. The watch on the dresser. The notebook on the table. A set of keys under the sofa.We by bus to school.我是一名中学生|，今年 12 岁了。I am a middle school student|， I am 12 years old now. I am a middl
6、e school student. I am 12 years old now. I am a middle school student and I am 12 years old now. 2. 动词形式用错(单复数|，时态|，语态) She is good at sports and study hard. But they dont happy.3. 固定搭配出错And I like play football.4. 人称代词错误Please take they to Hefei. Please look at she.5. 状语表达 (忘记介词、顺序错误)Her birthday i
7、s January.Mo Yan was born(出生于) in Shandong|， Gaomi.6. 单词拼写错误找出下列句子中的错误|，并改正。1. What this in English? 2. We plays sports every day. 3. Let he watch TV. 4. June often go to see movies. 5. Hes birthday is May. 6. At Monday to Friday we go to school. 7. What about play basketball? Part 3 写作训练营U1 My name
8、 is Gina.自我介绍：基本信息U2 This is my sister.介绍家人U3 Is this your pencil?询问物品：失物招领 U4 Wheres my schoolbag?询问物品：物品方位 U5 Do you have a soccer ball? 体育运动：爱好U6 Do you like bananas?饮食方面：爱好U7 How much are these socks? 询问价格U8 When is your birthday?介绍生日：基本信息介绍人U9 My favorite subject is science. 校园生活：爱好科目请以“My Best
9、 Friend”为题|，根据下面提示内容|，写一篇短文来介绍你最好朋友的情况。1.姓名|，年龄|，职业等情况|；2.他(她)的家庭成员及基本情况|；3.他(她)对运动和食物方面的爱好。要求：1.语言准确得当|，条理清晰|；2.不得出现真实人名和班级等相关信息|；3.字数 50 字左右。学生作文：My Best FriendMy best friend is Jim. He is 12 years old and he is a student. He has a very big family. There are 5 munbers in his family. There are his
10、parents|， his grandparents and him. He likes play sports very much. He likes play basketball and baseball. For breakfast|， he likes eggs|， broccoli and carrots. For lunch|， he likes rice|， beef and chicken. For dinner|， he likes ice-cream|， hamburgers and apples. This is my best friend Jim.中考一档作文标准：
11、 符合题目要求内容完整层次结构清晰表达清楚语言无误修改后：My Best FriendMy best friend is Jim. He is 12 years old and he is a student.He has a very big family. There are 5 people in his family. They are his parents|， his grandparents and him. His father is a doctor and his mother is a teacher.He likes playing sports very much a
12、nd his favorite sports are basketball and baseball.For breakfast|， he likes eggs|， broccoli and carrots. For lunch|， he likes rice|， beef and chicken. For dinner|， he likes ice-cream|， hamburgers and apples.This is my best friend Jim.“介绍人” 作文小贴士：个人基本信息家庭成员情况运动饮食喜好校园课程生活介绍校园生活请根据英语图片和关键词提示完成一篇英语短文|，题
13、目已给出。要求：1.不得出现真实的人名、姓名|；2.关键词必须全部用上|；3.可结合自己的实际情况适当发挥|；4.词数 50 左右。My School Life学生作文：My School LifeMy school life is very busy. At 6:30 I have a breakfat. For breakfat|， I like eating bread and hamburgers. At 7:00|， I have math. I think its boring. The teacher says it is useful. Then at 8:00|， I hav
14、e Chinese. Its easy and fun. At 9:00|， I have geography. I think its difficult but interesting. At 10:00|， I have history. I think history is very useful. Then at 11:00|， we have English. Its my favorite subject. Our English teacher|， Mrs.Li. She is very kind and fun. Lunch is from 12:00 to 1:00. Th
15、en I have P.E.|， we play sports|， my favorite sport is basketball|， so I play basketball with my friends. Then I do my homework. This is very busy school life!修改后：My School Life My school life is very busy.At 6:30 I have breakfast. For breakfast|， I like eating bread and hamburgers.From 8 oclock in
16、the morning to 3 oclock in the afternoon|， I have 8 classes. And of all my classes|， English is my favorite because my English teacher|， Mrs. Li|， is very kind and fun.After class|， I play sports with my friends. My favorite sport is basketball. At six|， I go back home and do my homework.This is my
17、busy school life!“介绍校园生活” 作文 小贴士：信息要点要全面模仿课文要适度句子表达要清晰 介绍房间根据实际情况|，描述一下你的房间。重点介绍一下物品的位置。50 字左右。学生范文：My Room This is my room. Its sma l but tidy.Open the door|， and you can see a bed|， a table and a chair. My toy dog is on my bed and the volleyball is under the bed. My books are on the table and my s
18、choolbag is on the chair. My ID card and keys are in the drawer. I like reading books|， doing my homework and listening to music in my room every day.My room is not big|， but I love it very much.“介绍房间” 作文 小贴士： 开头-中间-结尾This is my room. Its sma l but tidy/lovely. Welcome to my room.具体介绍物品时：注意介绍顺序句子书写时
19、：不要忘记be 动词【参考答案】Part 1 中英文句子表达差异1. loves2. come3. is4. sounds5. is6. is7. isPart 2 英语初学者写作易犯错误1. What this in English?Whats2. We plays sports every day.play3. Let he watch TV.him4. June often go to see movies.goes5. Hes birthday is May.His in May6. At Monday to Friday we go to school.From7. What about play basketball?playing
