1、 八年级上册 Unit4 Whats the best movie theater? SectionB 3a-4 Self check (Writing - My Town) Sun Yat-Sen Memorial Secondary School 王馨爽 Which group will win? Group One 1 2 Group Two 3 Group Three 4 Group Four Do you love writing ? . . What problems do you have while writing ? Nothing to say ? ! I cant get
2、 a full mark ! ! X A video appreciation: Which place is it? （欣赏一段视频并回答问题） What do people have in that place? 1. New York City (My town:你所在的城镇) 2. They have a favorite restaurant, a favorite bar, a favorite coffee place. （最喜欢的地方） Who can write the best composition? Is that you?! Writing Task （这节课的写作任
3、务） Hi,everyone! Im Taylor Swift from New York. Ill going to Zhongshan next week. I hear that Zhongshan is a wonderful city, so could you write something to introduce your town first? For example, the most beautiful views, the most delicious food, some interesting places like parks，moutains, shopping
4、 malls and so on. Oh, maybe Ill go to watch a great Chinese movie with you!Is that you? Let me know your town better! 享受生活，热爱生活！生活中最美好的事物往往就在你的身边，请以你所在享受生活，热爱生活！生活中最美好的事物往往就在你的身边，请以你所在 的城镇“的城镇“My town”为主题写一篇作文，内容包括：”为主题写一篇作文，内容包括： 1. 描述自己所在的一个城镇，例如描述自己所在的一个城镇，例如a city, a town or a neighbourhood； 2.
5、详细介绍你最喜欢的详细介绍你最喜欢的12个地方或事物，并说明原因个地方或事物，并说明原因 (places/things, the reason why you like them) 3. 呼吁大家热爱生活，善于发现身边美好的事物（呼吁大家热爱生活，善于发现身边美好的事物（appeal to sb. to do sth.） 4. 使用使用adj as an example; such as; just as; like; that is; a good case in point . . superlatives can make our composition better 1）first,
6、second, last（不推荐，原 因：俗） 2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗） 3）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 4）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 5) others: however; not only . but also.; in fact; generally speaking; in my opinion; no matter how; . . A full mark compo
7、sition 15 Check up Before Writing 1. 审题：审题：Analyze the question carefully 2. 构思：构思：Brainstorm 3. 列提纲：列提纲：Outline After Writing While Writing White up 3 3 Writing Rules NO.3 赏析满分作文范文 I live in a beautiful place named Xiaolan, a small town in Zhongshan. Im proud of it. How wonderful Xiaolan is! There
8、are so many things you can do here. Let me show you! To start with, the best book store is Summer Book Store. Different kinds of books are interesting. My friends like going there to take photos. Futhermore, if you want to see a big movie, you can go to Wanda Cinema, the best one here. For example,
9、the seats here are the most comfortable. It has the best service, too. In my opinion, its service is better than any other cinema. Last but not least, Xiaolans water is the third best in Zhongshan. Therefore, why not love it? If you go to my town, you will absolutely like it,too! Welcome to Xiaolan!
10、 Welcome to my most wonderful town! Im waiting here for you! 享受生活，热爱生活！生活中最美好的事物往往就在你的身边，请以“My town”为主题写一篇短文， 内容包括： 1. 描述描述自己所在的一个环境，例如a city, a town or a neighbourhood； 2. 介绍介绍你最喜欢的12个地方或事物，并说明原因说明原因 (places/things, the reason why you like them) 3. 呼吁呼吁大家热爱生活，善于发现身边美好的事物（appeal to sb. to do sth.） 4
11、. 使用adj&adv的最高级最高级去完成作文! Show Time Write a composition to introduce a city in China to Taylor Swift. Tell her which one you think is the best? And why? Homework Good, better, best, Never let writing rest, Till writing is better, And better is best. Bad, worse, worst, Never fight against, Get better and better, And you can write the best. 没有最好，只没有最好，只 有更好！有更好！ THANK YOU Sun Yat-sen Memorial Secondary School Speaker: Wang Xinshuang
