1、读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。60-year-old Richard Olsen had retired from his work.He was very interested in adventure and hunting.This time he hunted on a land near Watford City,N.D.,in the underpopulated western part of the state. In a cold winter, he tried a new spot and forgot to bring
2、 his cell phone.He hiked more than half a mile with two dogs to a harvested wheat field.Eyes fixed on the horizon in expectation of another pheasant（野鸡）taking flight,Richard stepped on a thin crust（硬层）of snow on a canal.It collapsed and he dropped.Realizing that he was in trouble and was going to hu
3、rt himself, Richard was suddenly picking up a lot of speed. His left leg hit first, and he lay on his side to reach for his shotgun,unloaded it and used it as a walking stick.When he was partly up,he slipped and slid back down,because one of his feet got stuck between two rocks.Richard told himself
4、that if he didnt get himself out of the canal,he wasnt going to have a very good night.Richard got his foot free and climbed more slowly and cautiously out of the canal.Richard immediately realized the difficulty of the task before him.The accident occurred at about 2 pm,and it was nearly 5 pm with
5、the road far away and the sun setting.Richard focused on crawling to safety. Even with his guns support, hopping was impractical. Instead, he sat down and pushed himself backward less than 40 inches at a time with his good leg. He was stubborn and sure that he must hold on. He was tired out and had
6、more frequent breaks. Temperatures dropped below zero overnight, and his gloves and boots got wet.His hands and feet soon were completely numb.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph 1:Richards dogs had been playing in the field and eventually came up to him._Paragraph 2:However,gleams of daylight remainedRichard
7、saw the seventh car._文本解读一、原文的语篇要素二、原文主题60岁的退休老人理查德奥尔森喜欢冒险和狩猎。在一个寒冷的冬日，他带着两条狗去一个人烟稀少且陌生的地方猎杀野鸡，但不幸伤了腿。天气寒冷，日光渐逝，他必须想办法爬到路边求助过往的车辆。本文的主题是“冒险和坚毅”。三、原文的情节脉络发展四、主人公理查德的性格特点五、捕捉续写点六、构思情节发展水行政立法执法工作不断加强。完成了大连市节约用水条例（草案）制订工作。开展了打击“涉河违法行为”专项执法行动，共完成河道采砂巡查45次，立案51起，清除行洪障碍25万m3，全市水事秩序进一步好转。根据故事的主题、情节、人物性格和伏笔，
8、原文呈现了故事的“起因经过高潮”部分：理查德外出狩猎遇险，想办法自救但未成功，挣扎许久后变得疲惫不堪、手脚僵硬。续写的两段分别是故事的“后续”和“结局”部分：理查德的两条狗来到他的身边帮助他。这两条狗会做什么？理查德会有什么感受？他又会怎么做呢？第七辆车的车主如何救助理查德？理查德会有什么样的结局？使用括号图和流程图构思情节：参考范文Paragraph 1:Richards dogs had been playing in the field and eventually came up to him.Seeing their owner in bad situation, the two d
9、ogs surrounded his body to warm him while barking wildly.Moved and motivated,Richard finally struggled to one side of the road with the help of his dogs. Exhausted and painful as he was, he still tried to wave down a driver for fear that he might lose consciousness at any time. He waved and the dogs
10、 barked wildly but with no reply from any car.With six cars speeding by and the daylight fading out,a wave of frustration and helplessness gradually swallowed him up.Paragraph 2:However, gleams of daylight remainedRichard saw the seventh car.Gathering all his strength, he waved his hands wildly agai
11、n, hoping for good luck. Fortunately, this time the car stopped. The driver rolled down the window, and when he saw Richards situation, he got off instantly,rushed to Richard,assisted him in coming into the car and drove to hospital at full speed.In a weak voice,Richard extended his heartfelt gratit
12、ude.Finally,Richard got rescued and cured. From then on, whenever he went hunting in new spots, he would take his cell phone and any time he was confronted with a terrible situation, he would encourage himself to stick to the end with this accident.【模拟导练】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One Sund
13、ay last year, eight of us hiked for a couple of hours through the desert near San Diego to reach Thunder Canyon Cave. We had to abseil (沿绳滑下) through an icy waterfall to get inside, so we put on our wetsuits and lowered ourselves 30 feet down. By 11：00 am,we were inside.After we climbed further,we r
14、eached a nine-inch crack.Having moved for four hours,I was tired and wet.The group leader,Luca, was guiding three cavers. One of them, Steve got stuck in the crack. There was 10 minutes of pulling and pushing until Steve was free. He was tired and needed to leave. Luca, assuming Id been through the
15、crack before, guided Steve through the cave for another 15 minutes to an exit.I was the second from last to go through.I didnt realize that Luca wasnt thereif Id known, I wouldnt have attempted the crack, as I needed an experienced guide.The challenge is to put your feet first down the length of the
16、 crack,and then move your body sideways to swing along,before dropping five feet to the floor of the next space.On my first attempt,I knew I wouldnt make it through,but the group encouraged me to try again.I didnt want to inconvenience anyone by having to make the long trip back through the cave,so
17、I backed out and took off my wetsuit.In just my T-shirt,I tried to slide through again but my hips (臂部) were trapped. My feet were hanging on the other side and my left arm supported my body.My hand rested on a wooden board that had been left covering boulders (巨石) to protect cavers from slipping. L
18、uca returned and the team tried everything to shift me as I mentally focused on escape.After two hours my arms weakened, so I slid further into the crack, where the gap was only 8.5 inches wide.My body weight was on my left hand,my back and chest touching the cold stone walls.The guy behind me,Jim,t
19、ried unsuccessfully to pull me back.Of course,I was blocking his escape,too.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph 1:With the risk of the low body temperature,the group supplied me with their own jackets._Paragraph 2:After eight hours,Luca found the rescue team._Paragraph 1:With the risk of the low body tempera-t
20、ure, the group supplied me with their own jackets. However, they were of no use for me to warm up. Frightened and exhausted,I was drifted in and out of a dreamlike state. To keep me awake, Jim, whose escape was blocked by me, tried to crack jokes and I tried my best to listen to what he was telling
21、and struggled to give a response. As time went by, it took me longer and longer time to hear the outside. I knew that there was little hope that I could survive. Noticing it, Luca decided to turn to a rescue team for help without hesitation.Paragraph 2:After eight hours, Luca found the rescue team.
22、On their arrival, the team rushed to me. They first examined the spot and then attempted to jack the board near my hand to drag me out, but in vain.Luca kept on encouraging me while the rescue team used specific tools to drill and even rub part of the rock to free my hips. With their help, I managed to move my feet and climb out of the gap. The moment I was free, I was so thrilled that I nearly forgot to thank all the rescue workers when I was sent to the nearest hospital.It was a unique experience, from which I realized that it was teamwork that really counted.
