1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习大猫与捕鼠犬强强联合，维持剧院这一方净土1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文When Farrel was young,he had a Rat Terrier(捕鼠犬).He named it RK,short for Rat Killer.The following is how he came across the dog and adopted it.That was sometime in the 1930s.He worked in the booth with the projectionist(电影放映员).He l
2、iked to see the theater from booth.At that time,people usually took a short break between reel(胶卷)changes.Farrel would take this chance to look at the theater audience.The people were usually talking or making a trip to the bathroom during the breaks.The lights were on,but turned down low.Farrel saw
3、 something that shocked him at this time.He actually saw 3 huge rats.They crossed the room and went under the seats.Then the movie was over,and he had to stay behind and clean up.That night he stayed in the projection room and watched from above.He saw several rats running around below.They were so
4、huge that he could see them clearly from above.But when the lights were turned up brighter,the rats all disappeared.4续写原文He told the manager what he saw.The manager said that he knew about the rats.But he couldnt use poisons in the theater to get rid of them.So,Farrel suggested introducing some cats
5、 to the theater at night.The manager agreed to it and asked Farrel to find the cats.And he also asked Farrel to remove the cats in the morning and any dead rats that might be around.Farrel found 4 large cats and took them to the theater.The cats were first kept in cages.Farrel thought they were read
6、y for their duties as night“watchmen”.When the movie was over,Farrel opened the cage and released the new“night guards”.He left and headed home with a little excitement running through his mind.He couldnt help thinking about how many dead rats he would find the next morning.5段首句Para 1：The next morni
7、ng,Farrel opened the front door of the theater,and to his surprise,all 4 cats shot out of the door and down to the street.Para 2：Later that day,Farrels dad persuaded him to borrow a Rat Terrier from the local dog pound(流浪狗收留所).6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了年轻的Farrel 在剧院里发现了几只大老鼠，经过经理同意后带了四只大猫去剧院赶
8、鼠。令他惊讶的是，猫被老鼠吓得夺门而出，老鼠一只没死。后来在他父亲的建议下，他找到了一只捕鼠犬，它是英勇的老鼠杀手，从此成为了Farrel 亲密的朋友。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1：The next morning,Farrel opened the front door of the theater,and to his surprise,all 4 cats shot
9、out of the door and down to the street.由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，Farrel 打开剧院的门，让他吃惊的是，四只猫都冲出了门，跑到了街上”可知，第一段可描写Farrel 惊讶于猫的反应。经理说猫都害怕了大老鼠。10续写思路分析 Para 2：Later that day,Farrels dad persuaded him to borrow a Rat Terrier from the local dog pound(流浪狗收留所).由第二段首句内容“那天晚些时候，Farrel 的父亲说服他从当地的狗收容所借了一只鼠敌”可知，第二段可描写Farrel
10、在狗收容所找到了一只勇于杀鼠的狗，从此它成为了Farrel 亲密的朋友。11续写思路分析 猫夺门而出Farrel惊讶没死一只鼠经理不奇怪父亲建议找了只狗狗英勇杀鼠成为亲密朋友12续写素材 行为类.解释：explain/make clear.决定做某事：decide to do sth./determine to do sth./choose to do sth.情绪类.害怕：be scared of/be afraid of/be frightened of.奇怪的：strange/weird/odd13续写素材 高分句型1.He felt very strange,because they
11、should be lazy after eating the rats.（运用了由because引导的状语从句）高分句型2.He explained that he had tried that before,but the rats are so big that the cats are scared of them.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句和由sothat引导的状语从句）高分句型3.When he arrived at the theater,he opened the door.（运用了由when引导的状语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现The next morni
12、ng,Farrel opened the from door of the theater,and to his surprise,all 4 cats shot out of the door and down to the street.He felt very strange,because they should be lazy after eating the rats.He went into the theater and wanted to know how many rats the cats caught.But he could not find one dead rat
13、.Farrel told the manager what happened to the cats.The manager laughed.He explained that he had tried that before,but the rats are so big that the cats are scared of them.16范文呈现Later that day,Farrels dad persuaded him to borrow a Rat Terrier from the local dog pound(流浪狗收留所).With doubt running throug
14、h his head,he left the dog at the theater.The next morning,Farrel got up and ran to the theater without having any breakfast.When he arrived at the theater,he opened the door.He saw six dead rats on the floor.The dog was standing there and shaking his tail.He appeared very proud of himself.After tha
15、t,Farrel decided to adopt the dog and they became close friends.17范文译文第二天早上，法雷尔打开剧院的大门，令他惊讶的是，四只猫都冲出了门，跑到了街上。他觉得很奇怪，因为他们吃了老鼠后应该很懒。他走进剧院，想知道猫抓了多少只老鼠。但他找不到一只死老鼠。法雷尔告诉经理猫发生了什么事。经理笑了。他解释说，他以前也试过，但老鼠太大了，猫都害怕它们。那天晚些时候，法雷尔的爸爸说服他从当地养狗场借了一只鼠梗(流浪狗收留所).他心中充满了疑惑，把狗留在了剧院。第二天早上，法雷尔起床，没有吃早餐就跑到剧院。当他到达剧院时，他打开了门。他看见地板上有六只死老鼠。狗站在那里摇着尾巴。他看起来很自豪。在那之后，法雷尔决定收养这只狗，他们成为了亲密的朋友。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
