1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习圣诞雨夜的奇迹：安娜、莫莉与胡安的温暖故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Maybe there is a Father Christmas!Anna stood anxiously staring at the pouring rain while little Molly looked up at a pretty doll in the window of the toy shop on the edge of town.Mummy,Molly said,thats the doll I would like Father
2、 Christmas to bring me.A tear rolled down Annas cheek and she knew it would be impossible this year.They were supposed to start a new life in Spain one and a half years ago before her husband Tim was cruelly taken from them by a car.Their small amount of savings were quickly spent on Tims funeral co
3、sts and necessities,leaving her in heavy debt.To her relief,the local people had helped to support her through these difficult times and especially Juan,owner of the local grocery store,a single man,who would often put something special into her shopping bag,even though he himself had been going thr
4、ough a difficult period his mother died of cancer and he was busy handling the sale of his mothers house on the edge of town.4续写原文As the rain stopped,Anna and Molly started walking home.She was thinking about buying an umbrella after paying the rent with her upcoming wage when Molly shouted excitedl
5、y,Mummy,whats that on the road?Anna looked down and saw a bag lying in the water,which was obviously lost because of the sudden rain.They got home and dried themselves before Anna focused on the bag.Opening it and seeing bundles of money inside,she stood back in shock and cried,Is this a present fro
6、m kindness?I can pay off my debt,buy Mollys favorite doll and my new umbrella.”Then reality set in,Anna was a very moral person and would never steal even the slightest little thing,let alone bundles of money.She went to bed with all thoughts in her mind.5段首句Para 1：Early next morning,Anna headed whe
7、re she decided to go.Para 2：At supper,Anna had an unexpected visitorJuan with gift boxes in his hands.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公安娜和她小女儿莫莉生活得很艰苦，但是当地人尤其是当地杂货店的老板胡安经常帮助她们，在一个圣诞雨夜，安娜看到路上的一大笔钱犹豫过后还是将其交给警察，后来发现钱是胡安的，后来胡安作为报答给小莫莉一个洋娃娃的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：
8、位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1:Early next morning,Anna headed where she decided to go.由第一段首句内容“第二天一早，安娜去了她想去的地方。”可知，第一段可描写安娜将钱交给警察。10续写思路分析 Para 2：At supper,Anna had an unexpected visitorJuan with gift boxes in his hands.由第二段首句内容“晚餐时，安娜遇到了一位不速之客胡安，手里拿着礼品盒。”可知，第二
9、段可描写钱的主人报答安娜。11续写素材 续写素材 交给警察舒心感谢送礼感悟12续写素材 续写素材 行为类.弄清楚：figure/find out/make sense.记录下来：kept note of/write down/go on record 情绪类.感谢：Thank for/show ones appreciation/show ones gratitude/be grateful.高度称赞：think highly of/give high praise of13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1 After figuring out what had happened,the pol
10、icemen kept note of her information and thought highly of her.这句话运用了宾语从句。高分句型2.Stepping out of the station,Anna felt a fresh breeze on her face,making her relieved and comfortable.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。高分句型3 That morning,because of the sudden rain,he was so hurried to get on the taxi that he lost his bag.这句
11、话运用了sothat引导的结果状语从句。14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现Anna walked directly to the police station.After figuring out what had happened,the policemen kept note of her information and thought highly of her.She felt a little shy and said,“The huge money would be a great help for me to get through the difficulties,but t
12、he owner would get into great trouble,instead.”Stepping out of the station,Anna felt a fresh breeze on her face,making her relieved and comfortable.16范文呈现Seeing Annas surprised look,Juan told her that he was the owner of the bag and he came to show his thanks.That morning,because of the sudden rain,
13、he was so hurried to get on the taxi that he lost his bag.Thank you so much for your help.Juan said to Anna and then turned to Molly,handing her the boxes Here you are,little girl.After opening the boxes,Molly cried with great joy,Mom,look!Here it is!The doll Father Christmas brings me!Looking at he
14、r happy daughter,Anna smiled,murmuring Maybe there is a Father Christmas!17范文译文安娜直接走到警察局。在弄清楚发生了什么事后，警察们记下了她的信息，并对她评价很高。她有点害羞，说：“这笔巨款对我度过难关有很大的帮助，但店主反而会惹上大麻烦。”走出车站，安娜感到一阵清新的微风拂过她的脸，让她松了一口气，也很舒服。看到安娜惊讶的表情，胡安告诉她，他是包的主人，他来表示感谢。那天早上，因为突然下雨，他匆匆忙忙地上了出租车，结果把包丢了。“非常感谢你的帮助。”胡安对安娜说，然后转向莫莉，把盒子递给她。“给你，小女孩。”打开盒子后，莫莉高兴地哭了，“妈妈，看！给你！圣诞老人给我带来的娃娃！”看着她快乐的女儿，安娜微笑着喃喃自语：“也许有圣诞老人！”18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
