1、专题一 求助信 经典案例 假定你是李华，乘坐 FL753 航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司 写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括： 1行程信息； 2钱包特征 3联系方式。 注意：1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 范文： Dear Sir/Madam, （说明身份和行程信息）Im Li Hua, a passenger of your flight FL735 from Hangzhou to London this afternoon. (利用同位语表达行程信息，独特地道) Unfortunately, I found my wallet lost when
2、arriving at the airport of London. (非谓语 动词做宾补十省略句式，准确说明所发生的事情) Therefore, I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favor to find it back. （说明钱包特征）My lost purse is red with my name attached to the back， which contains my ID card and two bank cards. ( with 宾补结构which 引导的非限 制性定语从句, 不仅准确地描述了钱包的特征，而且
3、表达地道高级) Most importantly, as it was a birthday gift that my father had given me, I am very anxious about it and wondering whether it was left aboard. （希望得到帮助，说明联系方式）I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to help me recover it. You can reach me by calling 09783654. Im eager for your time
4、ly help. Yours, Li Hua 题型分析：题型分析： 考情分析考情分析 题型解读题型解读 写作步骤写作步骤 求助信，话题常涉及人 际沟通，生活与学习的 困惑等， 求助信应开门见山， 直截了 当地把你遇到的难题或者 困惑等，并向对方求助。应 注意： 向别人征求意见， 态度一定要诚恳，语气委 婉；把握时态，应用一般 现时描述自己目前存在的 困难， 用一般将来时描述自 己得到帮助后的进步。 首段：说明身份，提出 写作目的。 主题段落：说明困难， 青对方帮助 尾段：表达期盼之情。 体裁体裁 人称人称 时态时态 要 点 结 构 图 要 点 结 构 图 开头点题 （说明写信 目的） 1. 自
5、我介绍 2. 提出求助内 容 应用文 (求助信) 第一人称 （IWe ） 第二人称 一般现在时 主体段落 （要点一个 也不能少， 可 适 当 拓 1. 具体分点说 明遇到的内 容 (you) 展） 尾段（巧妙 收尾） 1. 提出请求 2. 约定见面时 间并表达感 激之情 高分词汇： 1. anxious adj焦急的 2. anxiety n焦虑 3. bother nv困扰；烦扰 4. trouble nv麻烦 5. confused adj. 困惑的 6. confusing adj令人困惑的 7. difficulty n困难 8. upset adj.不安的 高分短语： 1. be f
6、aced with面对 2. do sba favour 帮某人忙 3. have troubledifficulty 做有困难 4. lose heart 失去信心 5 lendgive sba（helping）hand 帮助某 人 6. turn to for help 向求助 高分句型： 一、开头句： 1. Im writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favour. 我写信是想问您能否帮助我。 2. Im wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with 我想知道你是否
7、能费心帮我 3. Im sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助 4. I am wondering if I could ask you some questions regarding 我想知道我是否能问您一些与相关的话题 二、中间句： 1. I dont feel quite accustomed to the life here 我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活。 2. I long to learn English well, but
8、 I dont know how, which makes me upset. 我渴望学好英语，但我不知道怎么学，这使我很烦恼 3. I cant concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。 4. Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help. 面对如此多的困难，我不得不向您求助。 三、结尾句： 1.
9、 Im eager to get your timely help. /Im eager for your timely help 我渴望得到您及时的帮助。 2. I will be very grateful if you could help me. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour / lend me a hand. 如果您能帮助我我会非常感激 满分巧模版： Dear _, I am _(自我介绍). Im writing to ask whether you could do me a favour （说明自己身份，提出
10、写信目的） I have had much difficulty/trouble in_（交代自己面临的困 难） Besides, Im very upset that_（提出令自己苦恼的问 题） Whats more, I dont know_（进一步说明自己的困 境） Im wondering if you could be so kind as to_ so that（请求 对方帮助） In the meantime/At the same time, I beg you to_ so that（再次请求对方的帮助） Id appreciate it if you could lend
11、me a hand（表达对得到对方帮助的感激） Im looking forward to your early reply. Your sincerely, Li Hua 练习 1 假定你是李华， 你要和父母一起外出进行一周的春节旅行， 请你给在你市留 学的英国朋友 Peter 写一封电子邮件，请他帮你照顾你的宠物鹦鹉。 要点如下 1提出请求； 2期待回复。 注意：1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 范文： Dear Peter, How are you getting on these days? Im
12、writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favour and take care of my pet parrot, Andrew. With the Spring Festival is approaching, my parents and I have planned to go travelling during the vacation, which lasts a week. Therefore, no one can feed Andrew in our absence. Besides, I have been train
13、ing it to speak English for several weeks. Not wanting to stop the teaching process, I really hope that you could help me teach it English. In this case, not only can you help me, but you can get great fun from it. Im eager to get your timely reply. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour
14、to look after my parrot. Yours, Li Hua 练习 2 假定你是李华，自从升入高三以后，你感觉学习压力更大了。请你根据以下 要点给你校英文报“Solving problems”栏目写一封电子邮件，介绍你的现状，并请 求帮助。 1每天在校约 9 个小时，几乎没有课外活动时间； 2每晚写作业到 12 点左右，睡眠严重不足； 3父母期望高 注意：1词数 100 左右 2可以适当增加细节，以使 行文连贯。 Dear Editor, _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 范文： Dear Editor, Im a Senior three student. I m no
15、w in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to get up at six, arrive at school before 7: 20, stay for about nine hours of classes, and keep doing homework until 12: 00 or so at night. As an energetic boy, how eagerly I hope to play basketball to enjoy
16、 myself, however, I can hardly spare a minute. Even worse, I dont sleep well so I always feel sleepy in class. Besides, the high expectation from my parents also puts great pressure on me. What can I do to reduce the pressure? Im looking forward to your advice. Thank you for your generosity and kind
17、ness! Yours, Li Hua 练习 3 假定你是李华， 前不久听了美国文学教授 Mr Smith 关于“读英语文学作品， 提高英语运用能力”的讲座，受益匪浅，但仍有一些问题不是很清楚，所以写信 向他求助，内容包括 1自我介绍； 2请教读文学作品时要注意什么； 3请他为你推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。 注意：1词数 100 左右 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Smith, _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 范文： Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Li Hua, a Senior Three student, The other day,
18、 I attended your lecture on Read English literary works to improve your ability to use English which has benefited me a lot. But in some aspects, I still need your help, so Im writing to you today. First, could you be so kind as to tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English literary
19、works, learning vocabulary, grammar, culture or something else? In addition, whats the correct order to deal with the different aspects? Whats more, I was wondering whether you could recommend some good works which are suitable for Senior Three students. Id appreciate it if you could do me a favour! Yours, Li Hua
