1、动作链教你轻松玩转读后续写STARTPlease describe the following picture and video.Tom cooked the duck.Tom added some carrots,mixed them and took a sip.Please describe the following picture and video.The two pandas hugged.The old panda dashed forward,raised his son up and hugged him tightly.重结果更要重过程Tip:Tip:拆解动作，拆解动作
2、，形成形成动作链动作链将将结果性结果性的动作，的动作，拆解拆解成更细致的成更细致的连贯性的微动连贯性的微动作作，使动作结果，使动作结果过程化过程化，形成形成动作链动作链。How to divide the action into small parts(slow motions)句式一：句式一：S+V1,V2 and V3比如“打车去火车站”这个动作 =拦车+上车+告诉目的地 He _ a taxi,_ in with his suitcase _ the driver,“Go to the railway station,please.”中英文区别:中文中可以出现一系列动词，英文中不允许，所
3、以英文写作非常依赖。stoppedjumpedtold句式一：句式一：S+V1,V2 and V3“把肉扔给狼”=拿出+瞄准+扔 He _ the meat,_ the wolf and _ it straight to the wolf.took outaimed atthrewHe glanced at the cup,_ and said,“Thanks.”=先看一眼奖杯，深吸一口气，说道：“谢谢！”。took a deep breath句式一：S+V1,V2 and V3男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏。=冲向湖边+脱掉衣服+跳入水中 The boys _ excitedly to the lake
4、,_ their clothes and _ into the water.rushedtook offjumped句式一：句式一：S+V1,V2 and V3仿写：主+V1,V2,and V3.在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容点击此处添加标题在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容点击此处添加标题1.她登上她登上(board)飞机，坐在座位上，寻找她的书。飞机，坐在座位上，寻找她的书。2.女孩停止了啜泣女孩停止了啜泣(sob)，从女人身边退了
5、，从女人身边退了(step back)回来，回来，开始唱歌。开始唱歌。_The girl stopped sobbing,stepped back from the woman and began to sing.She boarded the plane,sat on her seat and then looked for her book.2.My father patted me on the shoulder and encouraged me never to give up my dreams.My father patted me on the shoulder,encoura
6、ging me never to give up my dreams.1.Mary saw the ring on the table and felt a little bit shock.Seeing the ring on the table,Mary felt a little bit shock.3.The child was moved by the story and began to cry.Moved by the story,the child began to cry.Sentence pattern 2:非谓语非谓语Doing A(+doing B)，sb did st
7、h.Sentence pattern 3:非谓语非谓语Done，sb did sth.Polish(用非谓语作状语)同一对象同时发出不同动作例：我难过地挂断电话。=放下电话+坐下,全身发抖/哭泣I put down the telephone and sat down,shaking/sobbing.句式二：句式二：S+V1 and V2，+doing/done 或或 doing/done,S+V1 and V2=抬起头+举起双臂,大喊“我可以做到！”He held up his head and raised his arms,_ loudly,“I can do it!”句式二：句式二：S
8、+V1 and V2，+doing/done 或或 doing/done,S+V1 and V2yelling他从墙头往外看。他从墙头往外看。她递给我一张纸巾。她递给我一张纸巾。=把梯子靠墙放好，他爬上去+往外看。=看到我哭，她抽出纸巾+递给我。_the ladder against the wall,he climbed and looked out.Seeing me crying louder and louder,she silently pulled out of a piece of napkin and _ it to me.non-verb(doing/done作状语作状语)，
9、S+V句式二：句式二：S+V1 and V2，+doing/done 或或 doing/done,S+V1 and V2PuttinghandedHow to make your continuation writing vivid?题材题材Skill 1:描述一系列的动作。如果是同一个主语做了两个以上动作，可用:主+谓1,谓2 and(then)谓3 Skill 2:当出现一系列动作，而且前后几个动作逻辑主语一致时，还可采用:1.非谓语,主+谓1 and 谓22.主+谓1 and 谓2,非谓语主动:doing 被动:done动作链:一连串的动作构成画面情绪描写教你轻松玩转读后续写STARTF
10、eelingadj.adv.Feelingadj.adv.开心惊讶难过困惑痛苦好奇紧张自信激动羞愧生气焦虑失望自豪happydelightedhappilydelightedlysadsadlypainfulpainfullynervousnervouslyexcited excitedlyangryangrilydisappointeddisappointedlysurprisedamazedsurprisedlyamazedlyconfusedconfusedlycuriouscuriouslyconfident confidentlyashamedashamedlyanxious anx
11、iouslyproudproudlyMy mom takes care of me patiently.My mom talks to me gently.Observe the sentences carefully to find out the ruleSkill 1:Use adverbs to make actions more emotional.使用副词让动作更具情感。1.Nervous and scared,Peter started to deliver his speech.2.Confident and determined,David tried his best to
12、 run.3.Depressed and helpless,Eric burst in tears.Observe the sentences carefully to find out the ruleSkill 2:Adj.1 and adj.2,sb.did sth.怀着.和.的感情，某人做.1.既开心又激动 2.既难过又沮丧 3.既紧张又焦虑 4.既担心又害怕 5.既坚定又自信 6.既惊讶又感动 7.既生气又失望 8.既疲倦又饥饿 常用搭配Delighted and excitedSad and frustratedNervous and anxiousWorried and scar
13、edDetermined and confidentSurprised and touchedAnnoyed and disappointedExhausted and hungryTips:使用两个意义相近的形容词进行搭配。Task 2:Complete sentences with appropriate adjectives.1._(感到坚定和受到鼓舞的）,David raised his head,looking at me with gratitude.（2022全国1卷）2._(感到放松的和快乐的),David waved at me immediately after cross
14、ing the finish line,conveying his happiness and gratitude.（2022全国1卷）3._(既惊讶又感动),Mr.Alder believed what I said,giving me a second chance.(2023广东一模)4._(感到开心和兴奋的),he received the admission letter from Guangzhou University.Determined and inspiredRelaxed and delightedSurprised and touchedDelighted and ex
15、citedObserve the sentences carefully to find out the ruleSkill 3:So+adj.+be+主语+that从句某人是如此的.以致于So happy is Tom that he jumps highly.So scared was Tina that she burst into tears.1._that I heard my heart pounding strongly.我非常紧张，能听到我的心剧烈地跳动。2._that she burst into laughter.可莉非常开心，突然大笑起来。Task 3:Complete
16、the following sentencesSo nervous was I So delighted was Klee 例2:1.She felt a great sense of anger welling up in her heart and surging through her.她感到一股强烈的怒意在内心升腾2.Judging from her voice,it was evident that she was trapped in great concern/worry.从她的声音判断,很明显她陷入了极大的忧虑之中.Sb情绪sbssbsbssb情绪引导启发，句型探索 无灵主语“
17、I felt happy.”无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语(换主语):“开心(的情绪)抓住了我”(加介短):“一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我”(加并列):“开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我”我开心:Delight seized me.A wave of delight seized me.Delight and excitement seized me.1.情感状态的抽象名词情感状态的抽象名词+谓语谓语+sb.Fear gripped the village.Courage deserted him.Anger choked my words.A wave of nervousness washe
18、d over him.A chill of horror suddenly swept over him.Excitement seized him.整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中。整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中。他失去了勇气。他失去了勇气。我气得说不出话。我气得说不出话。一阵紧张感涌上他。一阵紧张感涌上他。他突然感到不寒而栗。他突然感到不寒而栗。他好兴奋。他好兴奋。情绪名词固定动词seize/catch/take hold of 抓住 strike/hit surround 围绕着tear.into pieces 把.撕碎well up in 涌入come over 包围/支配envelop 笼罩overw
19、helm 压倒,使难以承受sweep/flood/rush over 袭来choke 噎住，堵住sb+as/when sb do sth无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb+as/when sb do sth (当某人做某事时，一股.情绪涌上心头)a burst/wave/surge/sense/flush of+情绪名词情绪名词 (一阵/一种.向某人袭来)常见的情绪名词常见的情绪名词：开心开心:delight/joy/pleasure愤怒愤怒:anger/fury/rage/annoyance悲伤悲伤:sadness/sorrow/grief害怕害怕:fear/panic/terror/ho
20、rror震惊震惊:shock/astoninshment/surprise/amazement绝望绝望:despair/hopelessness感激感激:gratitude/appreciation钦佩钦佩:admiration/respect失望失望:disappointment激动激动:excitement满意满意:satisfaction/contentment轻松、宽慰轻松、宽慰:relief/comfort愧疚、懊悔愧疚、懊悔:guilt/regret沮丧、抑郁沮丧、抑郁:frustation/depression羞愧、尴尬羞愧、尴尬:shame/embarrassment紧张、焦虑紧张、焦虑:nervousness/anxiety/怀疑、不确定怀疑、不确定:doubt迷惑迷惑:confusion/puzzlement/勇气勇气:courage自信自信:confidence
