1、读后续写基本流程 Tips for writing: 1. Thorough reading 2. Creative plotting（构思） 3. Swift drafting 4. Careful polishing 5. Neat copying 续写 合理 流畅 生动 高级 丰满 整洁 读后续写基本要求 requirements 续写 Writing Practice 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 Our unplanned travels were pure joy until this day. I
2、t was day eight of a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest, a two-week festival held in Munich, Germany, and Switzerland for Alps hiking. We wanted to book two rooms in Munich. Knowing none were available, we chose to try our luck and find a hotel along the freeway. At Freiburg (a German city 278 k
3、m west of Munich), we found the local hotel rooms were all booked for a festival. So we journeyed merrily down the road to find rooms. To our surprise, all the hotels we contacted were booked up. There was no room for us in Germany. So we went across the border into Switzerland to Basel. A large cit
4、y in another country would provide two rooms for us, we thought. It was in Basel that our bad luck began. I drove while my wife and son burned up their phones in broken self- taught German looking for two rooms. I rolled up to a stop sign and the GPS said, Turn left. Looking at the road signs, I scr
5、atched my head (挠头挠头) because something didnt seem right. But, of course, I followed the command of my GPS pilot. Quickly it was clear that we were no longer on a road, but train tracks. “Calm down,” I instructed my wife and son. “Ill simply drive a bit until I can get off the tracks and back on a r
6、oad.” This calm was short-lived as our teenage son, Mitch, noted, “Dad, there s a train behind us!” While we were processing this dilemma, another tram appeared in the distance. Our car was not pressed flat like a soda can. I eased it off the tram tracks onto a crowded pedestrian- only(行人行人 专用的专用的)
7、square. Hundreds of people were enjoying their weekend outdoors. We were safe, but obviously not where cars were allowed. The best plan I could think of was to (丢弃丢弃) the rental car. What a stupid idea! Paragraph 1: About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car
8、 with his stick. _ _ _ _ Paragraph 2: We were freed from our painful experience, but still had no place to sleep for the night! _ _ _ _ 写作过程 Writing Process 体裁：记叙文 时态：一般过去时 原文核心内容解读：一家人外出旅行去参加慕尼黑 啤酒节，路途困难重重，很难预定到房间的故事。 1. 解题思路 When：It was day eight of a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest. Where：
9、Munich(Germany) Freiburg(Germany) Basel (Switzerland ) who ： I /my wife/my son, Mitch/ an elderly gentleman 2. 文章脉络 2. 文章脉络 What: We want to book two rooms in Munich but none were available. At Freiburg, all the hotels were booked up and there was no room for us so we decided to head for Switzerland
10、 to Basel, hoping to find two rooms. It was in Basel that our bad luck began. Following the command of my GPS pilot, we were no longer on a road but train tracks. Eventually, I drove my car off the tram tracks onto a crowded square where cars were not allowed. 两段首句定一框两段首句定一框 根据续写的根据续写的第一段首句与第二段第一段首句
11、与第二段 首句首句确定确定第一段的框架第一段的框架。 （我们找到了停车处我们找到了停车处） 二框二首正能量二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正 能量结尾来确定能量结尾来确定。 （我们最终找到了住所）（我们最终找到了住所） 3. 写作思路 词 1）笼统词变具体词 2）单词变短语 3）词汇派生 4. 高分精炼 1）笼统词变具体词 笼统词笼统词 具体词具体词 beautiful handsome (英俊的), attractive (吸引人的), graceful (优雅的), fine (精美的) glad excited (兴奋的), pleasant (
12、愉快的), joyful (欢喜的) important vital (至关重要的), critical (决定性的), significant (意义重大的), primary (首要的), profound (深刻的) bad mean (卑鄙的), evil (邪恶的), selfish (自私的), disgusting (令人厌恶的) good excellent (优秀的), awesome (令人惊叹的), outstanding (杰出的) poor Poorly-dressed(穿着破烂), be in rags(衣衫褴褛), needy (贫困的) very terribl
13、y (极度地), extremely (极其), highly (非常), greatly (大大地) 2）单词变短语 单词单词 短语短语 like have a passion for look stare at/glare at begin get down to stand Struggle/spring to ones feet raise put forward desire long for use make use of decide make up ones mind 3）词的派生 前缀 示例 un- 不；非 unconsciously (无意识地), untruth (谬误)
14、 in- 不；非 illogical (不合逻辑的), irrelevance (不相关) non- 无；没有 nonsense (废话), non-stop (直达的；不停的) dis- 不；非；相反 dishonest (不诚实的), disappear (消失) re- 又；再；重新 reapply (再申请), reassuring (令人放心的) anti- 反对 antifreeze (防冻剂), anticlimax (扫兴的结局) auto- 自己(的)，无人操作（的） autobiography (自传), automatic (自动的) Tom is a boy. He i
15、s a student. He works hard. That makes his parents happy. Tom, a boy, who is a student, works hard, which makes his parents happy. Being a student, Tom, a boy, works hard, making his parents happy. Being a good student, Tom, a clever boy, works especially hard, making his beloved parents extremely h
16、appy. Being a marvelous learner, Tom, an intelligent teenager, works especially hard like a honeybee, making his beloved parents extremely happy. 4. 高分精炼 罗列罗列 合并合并 简化简化 美化丰满美化丰满 替换、文学替换、文学 句句 For example: 无灵主语 1. My pen involuntarily hesitates. 我丌知该从何处下笔。 2. Anxiety tore the boy into pieces. 这个男孩焦虑丌
17、安，整个人都崩溃了。 3. The thick carpet killed the sound of my footsteps. 我走在厚厚的地毯上，一点脚步声也没有。 4. All attempts to find rooms failed. 寻找房间一切尝试都失败了。 5. The astonishment robbed me of the power to say anything. 我震惊得说丌出话来。 4. 高分精炼 Paragraph 1: About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the wind
18、ow of our car with his stick. Hearing the knock, I rolled down the window with my heart beating wildly, wondering what would happen to us. “Why did you park your car here without permission?” asked the gentleman, confused. Feeling embarrassed, I explained to 5. 范文赏析 参考范文（一） 5. 范文赏析 him the dilemma w
19、e were faced with. Much to our surprise, not only did the gentleman guide us to a parking lot but also he showed us around the city, where we saw a large number of people dressed in festive costumes. It was then that we felt a sense of relief. Paragraph 2: We were freed from our painful experience,
20、but still had no place to sleep for the night! I scratched my head again, desperate and extremely exhausted. Having sensed our awkward situation, the gentleman politely asked, “I live alone, would you mind staying with me tonight?” “It is so kind of you to offer us accommodation! Sir!” I replied, 5.
21、 范文赏析 feeling excited and grateful. We had fun with each other and never before had we had such a wonderful night. As you can see, next time you are in great trouble, keep in mind that God will open a window for you when he closes the door! 5. 范文赏析 About that time an elderly gentleman approached and
22、 knocked on the window of our car with his stick. Sheepishly I rolled down the window and heard these serious words, “Sir, you can t be here in that car.”Yes, I explained why we were there. Make your way slowly and carefully to that street, he said nicely, pointing his stick to an opening 100 yards
23、and hundreds of people away. I thanked him and drove our car through the crowd. It took a while. We got a number of glares from the walkers. But we made it out. We guessed our way back to the freeway without the use of GPS. Paragraph 1 参考范文参考范文（二）（二） We were freed from our painful experience, but st
24、ill had no place to sleep for the night. Mitch got back on his phone, wanting to do anything that would get him out of the car because he was reaching his breaking point. Success, he announced after booking a room at a nearby hotel. At the front desk, I realized that my son failed to mention the only available room was the most expensive one in a first- class hotel, costing thousands of dollars! 参考范文参考范文Paragraph 2 Thanks for your attention !
