1、Book Travel around Unit2 Writing 1. 进展顺利 2. 令人惊叹的景象 3. 迫不及待做某事 4. 多语，超过 5. 在现代，在当代 6. 知道，了解 9. 被称为 10.引领某人做某事 11立刻，马上 12. 收到某人的来信。 go well an amazing sight cant wait to do more than in mordern times know about be known as lead sb to do sth right away hear from sb Revision回顾课文短语 . 回顾原文句型回顾原文句型 1.我听说它
2、是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待的想去。我听说它是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待的想去。 2.对于我来说，兵马俑的故事几乎令人难以置信。对于我来说，兵马俑的故事几乎令人难以置信。 3.我们还计划去西安的其他几个地方。我们还计划去西安的其他几个地方。 Ive heard that it is an amazing sight, and I cant wait to go. To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable. Were also planning to visit several other places
3、in Xian. 4.我爸爸和我都期待去陕西历史博物馆，因我爸爸和我都期待去陕西历史博物馆，因 为为 My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum, because 5.我们将坐火车，十月假期开始前一天离开。我们将坐火车，十月假期开始前一天离开。 Were taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins. 1.【写作思路】（一审、二定、三明确、四分段）【写作思路】（一审、二定、三明确、四分段） （1）
4、一审：确定写作体裁和主题）一审：确定写作体裁和主题 体裁体裁:应用文应用文-告知信告知信 主题：告诉他自己的假期旅行计划及安排。主题：告诉他自己的假期旅行计划及安排。 （2）二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息）二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息 相关）相关） 时态：一般将来时（对于即将到来的旅行的计时态：一般将来时（对于即将到来的旅行的计 划）划） 一般现在时（一般描述）一般现在时（一般描述） （3）三明确：明确写作要点）三明确：明确写作要点 要点：要点： 旅游时间和目的地旅游时间和目的地 具体的旅游计划（交通方式、旅具体的旅游计划（交通方式、旅 游景点、旅行的目的和意义）游景点、旅行
5、的目的和意义） 旅游的心得体会旅游的心得体会 （4）四分段（与写作要点息息相关）四分段（与写作要点息息相关） 结合写作要点，整体分为三个段落，其中结合写作要点，整体分为三个段落，其中 第二段为主体部分，详细叙述。第二段为主体部分，详细叙述。 ()Preparation for writingWords and phrases 1._ 利用 2._ 如下 3._ 游览 4._ 出发 5._ 七日游 6._ 欣赏风景 7._ 动身去某地 8._名胜古迹 take advantage of as follows take a tour set out/off a seven-day trip enj
6、oy the scenery leave for places of interest 9._ 和一起 10._ 即将来临 11_ 乘公共汽车 12. _旅游景点旅游景点 13._度假度假 14._ 15._(了解了解)当地文化当地文化 16._拓宽知识面拓宽知识面 around the corner take a bus together with tourist attraction be on holiday/vacation 入住（旅馆）入住（旅馆）/退房退房 check in/out understand the local culture broaden ones knowledg
7、e . While-writing 假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上 海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail， 分享你的出 行计划。 要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上 海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。 2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设 施，购买纪念品。 3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠， 欣赏上海全貌。 4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数100左右。 参考词汇：high speed railway高铁 book 预 订 Disneyland 迪 士 尼 乐 园 recreation fa
8、cilities游乐设施 souvenir纪念品 Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠 Step 1 List the outline of the passage. I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family. What we shall do every day while in Shanghai. How about the plan for your winter holiday? paragraph1: Paragrap
9、h2: paragraph3 Step 2 List phrases and sentences. _ vt. 网上预订 _ 登记 _ 提前 _ 同时 _ 四天的旅行 book online in advance at the same time a four-day trip check in 2.Sentences 随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上 海旅行四天。(as) As the winter holiday is coming, I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family. 到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休 息，酒
10、店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才 有足够的精力去参观上海。(so that) Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance, so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai. 下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们 可以欣赏到上海的全景。(from which) We will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afte
11、rnoon, from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai. Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words. as，so that，besides，from which Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? As the winter holiday is coming, I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family. Here is my plan. We are leav
12、ing Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2:00 p.m. on Jan.21st. Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance, so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai. On the second day, we are going to the Disneyla
13、nd to experience all kinds of recreation facilities, and buy some souvenirs at the same time. On the third day, we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning. Besides, we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.
14、On Jan.24th, we will take the high speed railway back to Liling. How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Wang Ming 【活学活用】 假定你是李华,最近你在魅力中国城(Charming China) 的投票活动中幸运地抽到了几张去四川旅行的优惠券,你想 邀请你的英国朋友Tom在国庆节期间和你及你的家人一起 去四川游玩。内容要点如下: 1. 出发及迒回时间; 2. 旅行安排:上午看熊猫,下午游览
15、当地名胜古迹。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,丌计入总词数。 I m glad to tell you a piece of good news. Fortunately, I have got some tickets from Charming China recently, which will give me some discounts on travelling to Sichuan. With the National Day around the corner, I want to invite you to
16、visit Sichuan with my family. Dear Tom, How is everything with you? We will start at 8:00 am on October 1st and return at 5:30 pm. In the morning, we will admire pandas, which are native to China. Their clumsy behaviours will make you burst into laughter. After a delicious meal, we will visit some local monuments and wonderful places of interest. If you can come, I m sure you can have a good time. Best wishes for you! Yours sincerely, Li Hua Looking forward to your arrival.
