1、1 经历感受类写作 该类写作描述个人经历,常以短文或日记等文体呈现;以一般过去式为主, 按照事件发展的顺序来记叙。可以用一些与时间相关的副词如 then,later,next 串联句子。至于感受部分,同学们平时可以多积累相关的单词或短语。 基本框架 1开头(beginning)引出主题 2主体(body)介绍事件 3结尾(ending)发表感受 常用词块 1an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 2to my joy/delight 令我高兴的是 3see sb.off 为某人送行 4a five- day tour 为期五天的旅行 5live a.life 过
2、着样的生活 6win the first prize 获得一等奖 7think highly of 高度赞扬 8set a good example for sb.给某人树立好的榜样 常用语句 精彩开头 1Last week I went to mount Emei in Sichuan province with my family. 上周我和家人去了四川省的峨眉山。 2I will never forget the experience when I went to Beijing last year. 我永远不会忘记去年去北京的经历。 3Last night I was busy pre
3、paring for my test when I heard a loud noise. 昨天晚上我正忙于准备考试,突然我听到一个很大的声音。 正文佳句 1On the hot afternoon of last Saturday,Li Yu went downtown and waited from 2 one store to another. 上周六的一个炎热的下午,李玉去了市中心,从一家商店到另一家商店。 2I looked in the direction of the call and saw a boy falling into the river. 我朝呼叫的方向看,看见一个
4、男孩掉进河里。 3 Throwing the fishing pole, I dashed over like an arrow, jumped into the river and swam very quickly towards the boy. 我扔下钓竿,像箭一样冲了过去,跳进河里,飞快地向男孩游去。 余味结尾 1However,maybe all of my efforts are not made in vain. 然而,也许我所有的努力都没有白费。 2How I wish I could go back to enjoy middle school life once more
5、! 我多么希望我能再次回到中学生活中去! 3But they will remain a happy memory all my life. 但它们会成为我一生的快乐回忆。 你的美国笔友 Bob 对钓鱼很有兴趣。请你根据以下要点,写出你和你的爸 爸暑假期间某天去钓鱼的经历,通过电子邮件发给 Bob,让他分享。要点包括: 1所带器具和食物等; 2钓鱼过程; 3一天的收获和感受。 注意: 1词数:80 左右; 2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:沙蚕 clam worms 鱼钩 fishhook 3 【参考范文】 Dear Bob, How are you!Im glad to write
6、 the letter to tell you something about fishing. On a sunny morning in summer,my father and I drove to the seaside to fish.We took some clam worms, some bread and water as well.On arriving at the seaside, I felt comfortable.Bathed in the sea wind, I felt relaxed.Then we took our fishing poles out, p
7、ut clam worms in the fishhooks and threw them into the sea.Then we waited patiently.After a while, father got a fish.However, I lack such knowledge of fishing.So my father constantly gave me some advice,which benefited me a lot.Then I fished a lot. At five oclock,we returned home,feeling very happy. Yours, Li Hua