1、Part 4 Writing 写作题目 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jack 来信询问中国新农村建设的发展状况。请你根据 下列要点给他写一封回信介绍中国农村的一些新变化。内容包括: 1.居住环境方面的改善; 2.文化生活水平的提高; 3.邀请他来参观体验。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I am delighted that you are interested in the changes of our countryside. I sincerely hope you will pay a
2、visit soon. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 主题 农村新变化 体裁 说明文 人称 第一人称 时态 以一般现在时为主 布局 第一部分:点明主旨; 第二部分:居住环境、文化生活的变化; 第三部分:邀请 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. n.十年 2. adj.经济的 3. adj.便利的,方便的 4. 全心全意 5. 改革开放 6.as we all know 7.take place 8.make efforts 答案 1.decade 2.economic 3.convenient 4.heart and soul 5.reform and opening-up
3、6.众所周知 7.发生 8.努力 .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)在过去的 40 年里,我可爱的家乡发生了很大的变化,使得它呈现出崭新的面貌。 In the past 40 years, great changes in my lovely hometown, which makes it take on a new look. (2)我们周围的空气更清新,天空更晴朗,水也更干净。 Fresher air, clearer sky and cleaner water . (3)由于许多家庭都买了自己的车,村民们可以四处旅行。 Villagers can because many f
4、amilies have bought their own cars. (4)如果你喜欢,我会带你游览我的家乡,欣赏它的和谐和美丽。 If you like, Ill guide you around my hometown and its harmony and beauty. 答案 (1)have taken place (2)are around us (3)travel around (4)appreciate 2.句式升级 (5)将(1)的定语从句改为分词作状语 In the past 40 years, great changes have taken place in my lo
5、vely hometown, . (6)将(2)改为完全倒装句 (7)将(3)改为含有 convenient 的句子 (8)将(4)改为分词作状语 If you like, Ill guide you around my hometown, its harmony and beauty. 答案 (5)making it take on a new look (6)Around us are fresher air, clearer sky and cleaner water. (7)It is convenient for the villagers to travel around beca
6、use many families have bought their own cars. (8)appreciating 连句成篇 参考范文 Dear Jack, I am delighted that you are interested in the changes of our countryside. In the past 40 years, great changes have taken place in the countryside, making it take on a new look. Old houses have been replaced with new a
7、nd tall ones full of good facilities. The roads become wider and wider with various trees and flowers on both sides. Moreover, the local government has made great efforts to control the environment pollution.Around us are fresher air, clearer sky and cleaner water. Whats more, it is convenient for t
8、he villagers to travel around because many families have bought their own cars. In their spare time, they can enjoy different kinds of activities to relax themselves such as sports, singing, dancing and reading. In a word, the farmers are living a happier life in China.If you like, Ill guide you aro
9、und my hometown, appreciating its harmony and beauty. I sincerely hope you will pay a visit soon. Yours, Li Hua 写作积累 1.living conditions 生活条件 2.transportation n.交通工具;交通运输系统 3.be equipped with 装备;配备 4.private cars 私家车 5.keep pace with 与并驾齐驱 6.in person 亲自 7.convenient adj.方便的 8.We should make special
10、 efforts to improve the investment environment so that an increasing amount of foreign capital can flow into our hometown. 我们应该作出特别的努力来改善投资环境,以便越来越多的外资能流入我们的家乡。 9.It is convenient to take the underground to most places. 乘坐地铁到大部分地方都很方便。 10.During the last decades, the high-speed railway has developed
11、 rapidly in China. Especially,the opening of the Beijing-Shanghai high-speed railway indicates that China has been ahead of the rest countries of the world in the technology of the high-speed railway. 近几十年来,中国的高速铁路飞速发展,特别是京沪高铁的开通表明中国的高铁技术 已领先于世界其余各国。 11.As we all know, Chinas economics has changed g
12、reatly since the reform and opening-up. 众所周知, 自从改革开放以来,中国的经济状况已经发生了很大的变化。 12.As can be seen from this table, great changes have taken place in our hometown in the past several years. 从这个表格中可以看出,在过去的几年里,我们的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 实战演练 () 假设你是红星中学高二的学生李华,你的英国朋友 Peter 想了解中国近 40 年来发生 的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待。请你给他回封邮件,内容包括
13、: 1.居住环境的变化; 2.出行方式的变化; 3.对中国未来发展的期待。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Yours, Li Hua 答案全解全析答案全解全析 实战演练实战演练 Dear Peter, In your last e-mail you said you wanted to learn about changes of Chinese peoples life in the near 40 years. Since China opened its door to the world
14、, life has become much more convenient. Lets take living conditions and transportation as examples. 40 years ago, most people lived in small houses in China where winter is cold and long. Now, people live in large houses equipped with heating systems. Bicycles used to be the main transportation. Now private cars have become household items. In the future, Chinese people will keep pace with the latest science and technology development.I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day. Yours, Li Hua
