1、Part 4Part 4 WritingWriting 写作题目 假定你是李华, 请根据下面表格中的内容提示,为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文,介绍你最崇拜 的一位中国科学家梁建英。 1.出生时间:1972 年 4 月 出生地点:山东省 2.职务:中国高铁总设计师 3.主要经历 (1) 1995 年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作; (2) 2007 年研制出国内首列时速为 300350 公里的劢车组; (3) 2017 年,“复兴号”以 350 公里的时速正式投入运营,在高铁运营领域取得了新的突破。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:高速列车 G-S
2、eries High-Speed Train 思路点拨 主题 介绍最崇拜的一位中国科学家 体裁 说明文 人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主 布局 分两个部分:主体部分介绍梁建英的职务、出生年份、主要经历;结尾表达自己的感想。 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. 对的酷爱 2. n.奉献,献身 3. n.创新,革新 4. 对做出了极大的贡献 5. 现代技术 6. 对高质量产品的渴望 7. 献身于 8. 开辟新的领域 9. 带来突破 10. 科学方面的专业知识 11. adj.艰苦的;勤勉的 12. vt.激励,激发 答案 1.a passion for 2.devotion/
3、dedication 3.innovation 4.contribute greatly to 5.modern technology 6.a desire for high-quality products 7.devote oneself to 8.break new ground 9.lead to the breakthrough 10.expertise in science 11.painstaking 12.inspire .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)梁建英于 1972年 4 月出生于山东省。 Liang Jianying was born . (2)梁建英是中国
4、高铁总设计师。 Liang Jianying is Chinas High-speed Railway. (3)梁建英于 1995年毕业。 Liang Jianying . (4)自从毕业后她一直致力于研究中国高速列车的发展。 She researching into the development of Chinas G-Series High- Speed Train since graduation. (5)2007年她研制出国内首列时速为 300350 公里的高速列车。 In 2007, she developed the first G-Series High-Speed Train
5、 in China which was operated 300350 kph. (6)2017年,“复兴号”以 350 公里的时速投入运营。 In 2017, CHINA STANDARD EMU with the speed of 350 kph. (7)高铁运营领域取得了新的突破。 in the operation of the High-speed Railway. (8)梁建英为我们树立了一个好的榜样。 Liang Jianying . (9)她的艰苦奉献和革新精神激励着我们努力学习,将来为祖国的发展做出贡献。 Her spirit of to study hard and the
6、development of our country in the future. 答案 (1)in Shandong Province in April 1972 (2)general designer of (3)graduated in 1995 (4)has been devoting herself to (5)at the speed of (6)were put into service (7)A new breakthrough was made (8)has set a good example to us (9)painstaking dedication and inno
7、vation inspires us;contribute to 2.句式升级 (10)用同位语合并句(1)和句(2) (11)用 since引导的时间状语从句合并句(3)和句(4) (12)用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句合并句(6)和句(7) (13)在她艰苦奉献和创新精神的激励下,我们会努力学习,未来为祖国的发展做出贡献。(用过去分词 短语作原因状语) 答案 (10)Liang Jianying, general designer of Chinas High-speed Railway, was born in Shandong Province in April 1972. (
8、11)Since she graduated in 1995, Liang Jianying has been devoting herself to researching into the development of Chinas G-Series High-Speed Train. (12)In 2017, CHINA STANDARD EMU were put into service with the speed of 350 kph, which made a new breakthrough in the operation of the High-speed Railway.
9、 (13)Inspired by her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation, we will study hard to contribute to the development of our country in the future. 连句成篇 参考范文 Liang Jianying, general designer of Chinas High-speed Railway, was born in Shandong Province in April 1972. Since she graduated in 1995,sh
10、e has been devoting herself to researching into the development of Chinas G-Series High-Speed Train. In 2007, she developed the first G-Series High-Speed Train in China which was operated at the speed of 300350 kph. In 2017, CHINA STANDARD EMU were put into service with the speed of 350 kph, which m
11、ade a new breakthrough in the operation of the High-speed Railway. Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. Inspired by her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation, we will study hard to contribute to the development of our country in the future. 写作积累 1.Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980
12、, is a world-famous basketball player. 2.In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2015 CCTV Moving China Award. 3.Deng Yaping, whose hobby is playing ping-pong, has devoted herself to the sport after graduation. 4.Li Keran, a famous painter and art educator, developed a personal style o
13、f landscape painting. 5.Not only is he devoted to his research, but also he concerns himself with the welfare project. 6.In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal, he became the idol of the youth. 7.Not only is she very strict with herself in her study and daily life, she is als
14、o always ready to help others. 8.It is his hard training and his perseverance that lead to his breakthrough and success in swimming. 9.Nie Er is considered as one of the greatest musical geniuses in the history of China and will be remembered by the Chinese people forever. 10.Deng Yaping sets a good
15、 example to us, so all of us show great respect for her. 实战演练 () 假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 John 来信,想要你介绍一下中国作家莫言,以便他们学校的师生了解 他。 内容要点如下: 1.出生时间:1955 年 2 月 17日。地点:山东省 2.职业:作家 3.简介: (1)童年时在家乡小学读乢,后来辍学; (2)在农村劳劢多年,之后在工厂工作,还当过兵; (3)1981年开始创作,之后发表了许多作品,如蛙; (4)2012年获得诺贝尔文学奖。 参考词汇:诺贝尔文学奖 the Nobel Prize in Literature 注
16、意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案全解全析答案全解全析 实战演练实战演练 Dear John, I am more than delighted to receive your letter. Now let me introduce Chinese writer Mo Yan to you. Mo Yan was born in Shandong Province on Feb. 17th, 1955. He spent his childhood in his hometown going to primary school but later dro
17、pped out. After working in the country and then in a factory for many years, he joined the army. Since he began to write stories in 1981, he has been devoted to writing, publishing a number of works such as Frog. To his credit, in 2012 he became the first Chinese writer to win the Nobel Prize in Literature. If you want to know more, please dont hesitate to let me know. Yours, Li Hua
