1、Module1 Unit1 Teenage Life Reading for writing 拓展讲义（教拓展讲义（教 师版）师版） A Letter of Advice(建议信建议信) 写作思路： 1. 点明写作目的：就某事/问题提建议 2. 阐述具体建议，并说明理由； 3. 希望建议被采纳并有所 帮助。 建议信注意事项 第一段：弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受 第二段：说明建议的内容（是什么） ； 提出具体建议的原因（为什么） ； 指出采纳建议的益处（怎么 样） 第三段：避免笼统的期待和祝愿 尽量避免重复; 考虑句子之间的整合; 避免句式生搬硬套; 灵活使用连接词; 注意把握情感，精准表 达思想
2、 （建议信高分秘笈：一定要关注情境（建议信高分秘笈：一定要关注情境;要有合乎关系情境的开头和结尾；建议信的语气一定要视双方要有合乎关系情境的开头和结尾；建议信的语气一定要视双方 关系地位等调整；内容可以升华，思维品质和文化品格方面的提升是拿高分的关键）关系地位等调整；内容可以升华，思维品质和文化品格方面的提升是拿高分的关键） Sentence Structure and commonly used sentences: Beginning 1. I am writing to express my views concerning 2. Learning / Knowing that, Id
3、like to give some suggestions, which I think should 3. Its my pleasure to offer you some advice on Body 4. My suggestions are as follows. 5. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest / recommend that you 6. I think it would be more beneficial if you could 7. If I were you, I would 8
4、. Meanwhile, whats more; in addition; additionally; Moreover; furthermore; More importantly End 9. I hope you will find these proposals helpful / practical. 10. I hope my suggestions will be of some help. 11. I would appreciate it if you would consider my suggestion/ give my suggestions your favorab
5、le consideration. (Looking forward to your reply.) 12. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 样题试写： 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter 所在学校开始教授中文课，但他发现学习中文很困难，写信向你征 求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信,内容主要包括: 1.实际上很多新生对于中文学习感到困惑,因此不必过多担心; 2.建议: (1)参加中文学习班; (2)看中文书刊、电视节目； (3)学唱中文歌曲； 3.希望建议能对他有帮助。 注意:1.词数 80 左
6、右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Hearing youre having trouble learning Chinese, I felt upset. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 主题 就汉语学习给朋友提建议 体裁 应用文 人称 以第一、二人称为主 时态 一般现在时 布局 第一段:进行安慰,表明写作目的; 第二段:根据提示给出如何学习高中英语的建议; 第三段:希望建议适合朋友 Peter. 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. adv.实际上 2. 初学者 3. v.建议；推荐 4. 汉语学习 5.
7、焦虑；担心 答案：1. actually 2. beginner 3. recommend 4. Chinese learning 5. anxious .本单元及衔接课语块、语法（定语从句）运用 1.完成句子 (1)实际上,很多初学者觉得汉语学习是很困难的，你没有必要太过于焦虑。 Actually, Chinese learning is , so you neednt feel . (2)我建议你报名参加课外活动,你可以从老师那里学习并且和同学们练习。 I recommend that you and it can help you learn from your teacher and
8、practice with your classmates. (3)此外，学唱中文歌曲也是一个好主意，因为这样做你可以更容易地学习并且记住中文单词。 Besides, are good ideas, because by youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. (4)我希望我的建议能适合你。I hope my suggestions will . 答案 (1)a little difficult for beginners; too anxious; (2)sign up for some Chinese courses; (3)
9、learning and singing Chinese songs; doing so; (4)be suitable for you 2.句式升级 (5)将句(2)升级为含有定语从句的句子 (6)将句(3)升级为含有“it 作形式主语”结构和含有定语从句的句子 答案 (5) I recommend that you sign up for some Chinese courses, where you can learn from your teacher and practice with your classmates. (6) It should be a good idea to
10、learn and sing Chinese songs through which youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. . 连句成篇 Dear Peter, Hearing youre having trouble learning Chinese, I felt upset. First, Then, Besides, Best wishes, Li Hua One possible version: Actually, Chinese learning is a little difficult for beginner
11、s, so you neednt feel too anxious and Im writing to offer you some advice. First, I recommend you sign up for Chinese courses, where you can learn from your teacher and practice with your classmates. Then, watching TV programs and reading books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible
12、will be also helpful. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, through which youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. Hope my suggestions will be suitable for you and try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua 深度拓展实战演练（含建议类型的杂信） ： 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的 Glo
13、bal Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见请你依据以下内容给 主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1说明你是该报的忠实读者 2赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人 成功故事 3提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意：1词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 One possible version: Dear editor-in-chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very m
14、uch mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both news from home and abroad so that, by simply going through the pages, I can learn all important things going on during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. As a student, I sincerely hope that Global Mirror will introduce articles to guide us in our English learning, and may it be even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua
