1、20202020 盐城三模作文指导：对待孩子的犯错盐城三模作文指导：对待孩子的犯错 盐城三模的作文话题是关于如何对待孩子的犯错，这个作文是有话可写的。但要特别 提醒考生：尽量从材料中挖掘思路要点，同时在文章中有意重复照应材料中的主题。 题目： 指导： 新闻基本都是：某人做了某事，评价/反馈 本文就是：父母处理孩子的错误（父母处理孩子的错误（by doing.), 赢得网民的赞许（可以赢得网民的赞许（可以 which.或非谓或非谓 语）语） 概要： A naughty childs parents treat their sons misbehavior by making apologies,
2、 compensating and cleaning walls with him, which won them floods of praises from netizens. (30wds) 正文： I applaud the parents response to their childrens misbehavior.(表示赞成直接用 applaud 了） It will not only awaken him to the serious consequences but also serve as a reminder that due punishment is the pri
3、ce to pay for his mistakes.（not only.but also.句型，两个理由 都是从材料中挖掘，考生尽量要照顾材料内容） Frankly, it takes skills to discipline children when they make mistakes.（it takes .to do.是 一个经典句型）First, clear rules should be set to help children know right from wrong so that they can hold themselves accountable and follo
4、w rules even when no one is watching.（利用 so that 作为结果拓展）Second, it is necessary for parents to link the consequence with the misbehavior whenever possible, which can nip the bad behavior in the bud. （利用非限制性 定从作因果拓展， 本文的拓展手法没有一个是重的。 Nip sth in the bud 把扼杀在萌芽中） In a word, the parents teaching by example encourages their son to behave well and prevents him going astray. So it is worth following suit. （最后一段有意照应材料主题， 最后一句很简洁，长短结合比较好。）（128wds) 范文：
