1、书面表达书面表达高中英语高中英语 应用文写作应用文写作-建议信建议信PART1Dear Jack,I am sorry to hear that youre having trouble adjusting to your high school life.Im writing to offer you some useful suggestions.Actually,many freshmen are confused about high school life,so there is no need to worry about it too much.To begin with,I s
2、uggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities,which can help you make more new friends.In this way you wont feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting.Besides,it would be wise if you make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.As a teenager,it is neces
3、sary to study well.I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you.思思1.：思思句 型 亮 点句 型 亮 点简单句变复合句简单句：Secondly,you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.升级复合句：Besides,I suggest that you make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.句 式 拓 展句 式 拓 展1.I am sorry to he
4、ar that youre having trouble adjusting to your high school life.(运用了that 引导的宾语从句)To begin with,I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities,which can help you make more new friends.(运用了that 引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)思思 读后续写读后续写PART1Step 1Step 1Read the textRead the text1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给
5、段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Monday started out great.I woke up on time,ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my first hour math test.I was confident of getting good grades.Then I left my house.Ten minutes later,I was settled with my friends on the school bus.We were busy chatting about how w
6、e spent our weekend.At one stop,Fat Ryan got on hurriedly.He tripped over someones foot accidentally and THUMP!He fell flat onto the floor.Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily.Ryan struggled to his feet,dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat.He tried to laugh with us
7、,but his face was burning with embarrassment.The rest of the morning flew by.I did well in my math test.I read two more chapters of To Kill a Mockingbird in English class.It wasnt long before there went the lunch bell.I met my friends from the cheerleading team(啦啦队)in the dining hall.Then I couldnt
8、help but notice Ryan a few tables away,sitting all alone.He caught me looking.I smiled at him quickly and looked away.When we finished eating,we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that nights football game.After a little practice,we nailed the cheer,so we decided we only
9、needed to go through it one last time.Again,just like the rest of my day so far,the cheer was going great.I raised my leg for one last toe touch.RIIIPPP!I felt my jeans split down the middle of my backside.I froze.I had no idea what to do but stand still.Then I heard people burst out laughing,and I
10、saw them pointing at my torn jeans.Trying to cover myself with my hands,I tried to laugh too,but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Then I saw Ryan running towards me._Paragraph 2:That night,after the cheer at the football game,I found Ryan._Ste
11、p 2Step 2SummarySummary【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了同学Ryan由于被绊倒而遭到作者和其他同学的嘲笑，而后来作者也遇到了尴尬事，牛仔裤从中间裂开了，这时，Ryan迅速过来帮助，令作者非常感激的故事。Step 3Step 3Read the endingRead the ending【详解】由第一段首句内容“然后我看到Ryan朝我跑过来。”可知，第一段可描写作者担心Ryan会报复，事实是，Ryan是来帮忙的。由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，在足球比赛的欢呼声过后，我找到了Ryan。”可知，第二段可描作者找到Ryan后，向他道歉并致谢，并成为好朋友。Step 4Step
12、4Find the cluesFind the clues续写线索：担心报复帮助解决致歉感谢成为好友开心Step 5Step 5Write the endingWrite the endingParagraph 1:Then I saw Ryan running towards me.Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily.I thought this would be his chance to shame me.I lowered my head,my face burning
13、 with embarrassment.But unexpectedly Ryan didnt laugh.Instead,he approached me from behind,took off his jacket swiftly and offered it to me,signaling to me to cover my torn jeans.Without any delay,I did it.Struggling against my tears,I did want to express my gratitude to him but courage failed me.In
14、 total silence,I left the courtyard.（承上启下）Paragraph 2:That night,after the cheer at the football game,I found Ryan.I thanked him,giving the jacket back to him and telling him the cheer went great.Then gathering my courage,I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct on the bus and thanked him aga
15、in for his helping me out of the desperate situation.Ryan,with a broad smile,patted me on the shoulder and told me to forget about that,joking he fell like that a lot.Hearing that,I was amused and convinced that he was someone I would be friends with.Honestly,Monday was a great day indeed!（呼应前文）词 汇
16、亮 点词 汇 亮 点struckshame unexpectedlyapproached signal sb.to do.Without any delayStruggling against my tearsexpress my gratitude to himcourage failed mewith a broad smilepatted me on the shoulder 1.I lowered my head,my face burning with embarrassment.(运用了独立主格)2.Then gathering my courage,I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct.（运用了现在分词做状语)思思 THE END
