1、 2021 届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作精准练届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作精准练 （5）求助信）求助信 1.假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。 于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Kate 写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下: 1.作业多,没有时间运动。 2.压力大,难以入睡。 3.希望得到 Kate 的帮助。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 你可以适当增加细节,以使上下文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 2.假如你是高三学生李华,你想选择一所外地的大学,而你的父母想让在本市上大学,你很苦恼, 请给你在中国留学的美国朋友 Tom 写一封求助信,主要内容
2、包括: 1. 你的苦恼 2. 你和父母各持己见的理由 3. 询问 Tom 的建议 注意: (1)词数不少于 100; (2)可以适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。 Dear Tom Long time no see. As it wont be long before I graduate from high school, I have to choose an ideal university in advance, which makes me really annoyed. _ _ _ _ _ _ 3.假定你是学生会主席李华,你需要设计一张关
3、于英语社团纳新的海报。 你想请外籍教师 Mr Smith 来帮忙策划。请根据以下提示,用英语给 Mr Smith 写一封求助信。内容包括: 1.求助事由; 2.希望指导; 3.感谢帮助。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr Smith, _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 4.定你是李华,最近,你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。 请给你的英国朋友 Alex 写一封邮件,向他 求助。内容包括: 1. 你的困难; 2. 寻求帮助。 注意: 1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 5.假定你是李华
4、,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。 于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Kate 写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下: 1.写信目的; 2.你的问题; 3.希望得到 Kate 的帮助。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以当增加细节,以使行文连贯. Dear Kate, _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 答案以及解析答案以及解析 1.答案： Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam
5、, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So Im writing to ask you for help. Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers an
6、d my parents makes me extremely stressful because I dont want to let them down. What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, Im anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Yours since
7、rely, Li Hua 解析：高分句型一:Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. 译文:我遇到了一些困扰我的问题. 分析:which 引导定语从句. 高分句型二:What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. 译文:最困扰我的是,我每晚都很难入睡. 分析:what 引导主语从句,that 引导表语从句. 2.答案： Dear Tom Long time no see. As it wont be long befor
8、e I graduate from high school, I have to select an ideal university in advance, which makes me really annoyed. My parents and I failed to reach the agreement on whether to go to another city for further education. In my parents eyes, Im still the little boy who is so fragile and innocent that I cant
9、 be away from home. They believe without their tending, my life will be in a mess. However, I have been a young adult and anxious about independence and liberty. I have determined to prove myself via leaving for the university away from Tianjin. Furthermore, living in a strange but new city can not
10、only broaden my horizon but also improve my communication ability. For you have been away from America and studied in China for a few years, I really need your advice on how to persuade my parents to be in favor of my ideal and convince them that I can intend to my safety and health. Looking forward
11、 to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 3.答案： Dear Mr Smith, Im writing to ask you for help, hoping that you will do me a favor. As you know, every year we hold an activity, appealing to new members to join a variety of student societies. Im keen to organize an English club and throw English parties if
12、possible. What I should do is put up attractive posters. Ive been told that no one else can design a better poster than you. Would you please do me the favor to help design the poster? If you agree, I will come to your house at your convenience. Id appreciate it if youd like to offer me a helping ha
13、nd. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 4.答案： One possible version: Dear Alex, With the college entrance examination approaching, my anxiety about the English learning is increasing, So I am writing to seek some guidance on how to improve it. English writing is really a big challenge for me
14、. First of all, my vocabulary is not large, which makes it impossible for me to choose right and authentic words and phrases. Besides, English grammar becomes a bottle-neck of my English writing, the sentences I construct being much more like a Chinese sentence than an English one. Should you be kin
15、d enough to give me any help, I would be grateful to you. Yours, Li Hua 解析：该题要求考生根据所给信息写则一封求助信,属于半开放性的作文,考生有一定的发挥 空间。考生在解答此题时,首先要注意该文的体裁为书信,语言相对来说较正式。其次,求助的 内容要齐全。根据要点可适当增加细节以及过渡性语言,以使行文连贯。 5.答案： Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Ex
16、am, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So Im writing to ask you for help.(点明书信目的) Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. 【高分句型一】First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation fro
17、m the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressed because I dont want to let them down. What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night.【高分句型二】(陈述所遇到的问题) Faced with the above problems, Im anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to
18、solve these problems?(希望得到她的帮助) Yours sincerely, Li Hua 解析：高分句型 1.Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. 句子里,修饰先行词 some problems ,用关系词 which 引导定语从句 trouble me a lot. 我遇到了一些困扰我的问题. 2.What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. 句子里,What 引导主语从句 troubles me most; that 引导表语从句 its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. 最困扰我的是,我每晚都很难入睡.
