1、20212021 届新高考英语二轮复习届新高考英语二轮复习 书面表达书面表达+ +短文续写短文续写（二）（二） 题组一：题组一： 1.请你根据下面英文短诗的内容展开适当的想象,写一篇英 文短文鉴赏这首诗。 My Teacher Mr Moore My Teacher Mr Moore Theres a teacher Mr Moore Who is lovely and thirty-four. Always encouraging us to try, He leads us to a world of why. We all admire him more and more. 注意: 1.
2、词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使 之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。 “I will have revenge(复仇) on him, and make him regret what he did to me,” said Philip to himself, his face red with anger. Stephen, who happened at that moment to walk past and hear him talking to himse
3、lf. “Who is that you want to take revenge on?” asked Stephen. Philip looked at his friend and said, “You remember my new ball given by my father? Look! It is punctured! It was farmer Robinsons son who did this!” Stephen asked him why young Robinson had ruined it. “I was walking and kicking my ball.”
4、 Philip replied, “By accident, when I was opposite the gate, my ball bumped over a bucket of water left in the pathway by him.” “He came up and began to yell at me. I assured him that what I had done was an accident, and that I was terribly sorry for it. I also offered to fetch another bucket of wat
5、er for him. But despite all I had said, he took a nail out of his pocket and twisted it into the ball, as you see. I will make him pay for this.” “Honestly speaking,” said Stephen, “he is already punished for what he has done, because nobody likes him and he often walks around alone. He is just a lo
6、nely and miserable boy. This will be enough revenge for you.” “But the ball is my favorite gift and I enjoy playing with it so much” murmured Philip. “Now Philip,” said Stephen, “I think you can act better than him in terms of getting revenge. I will tell you what happened to him not long ago.” “A w
7、hile ago he saw a bee hovering about a flower. He caught the bee and was going to pull off its wings for fun. The bee, of course, stung him. The pain made him so angry that, like you, he decided to get revenge. He got a stick, and pressed it into the beehive (蜂巢).” “Immediately the whole swarm of be
8、es flew out and stung him so badly that he had to spend a few days in bed.” “So you see, he was not very successful in getting revenge. What if he could act better and forgive the bee for stinging him?” asked Stephen. Paragraph 1: “I must say,” replied Philip, “that your advice seems very good”._ _
9、_ _ _ _ _ Paragraph 2: A few days afterward, Philip saw this young Robinson fall as he was carrying home a heavy log of wood._ _ _ _ _ _ _ 题组二：题组二： 1.假定你是李华,得知你校外籍老师 Peter 计划不久回英国, 他想给母亲一份有中国文化特色的礼物。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 推荐礼物; 2. 推荐原因; 3. 表达祝愿。 注意: 1.写作词数应为 80 左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, _ _ _
10、_ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 2.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Look inside any family home in the evening, and you might see a typical enough scene: Mom and Dad, each on their own laptop or tablet, streaming movies, catching up on work or maybe answering emails on their smartphones. Meanwhile, one child is ch
11、atting online with one school friend while texting another. The other is playing a video game with a friend on the other side of the city at the same time. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. According to some experts, the effect of technology on huma
12、n relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships. It appears to be the case that many people would much rather spend time with their electronic gadgets (电子产品) than with one another. Young people say it is difficult to get their parents attention and
13、 they have to compete with smartphones, tablets and other technology. However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships. Just over half of
14、 the 2,253 people surveyed agreed that technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members and 47 percent said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point
15、to seek their own interests. Family members who might otherwise have sat in separate rooms can now be in the same one while still occupying a different mental space. Look back at our typical family scene above. Is it any different from four people reading their own books? Or is it driving families a
16、part? Where technology will lead us remains to be seen. Yet there is no need to worry. As a matter of fact, how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 答案以及解析答案以及解析 题组一： 1.答案： The poem narrates a popular and responsible teacher from different pers
17、pectives. When I close my eyes, it seems that I have seen Mr Moore in the flesh. Mr Moore tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, students should not only know what, but also understand why. So, instead of giving the students answers immediately, he encourages
18、them to think by themselves whenever he puts forward questions. What a wonderful world of why he leads the students to! He is such a learned person that the students all admire him very much. 2.答案： “I must say,” replied Philip, “that your advice seems very good. So come with me please, and I will te
19、ll my father what happened to the ball, and I think he will not be angry with me.” They went, and Philip told his father what had happened. He thanked Stephen for the good advice he had given his son, and promised Philip to give him another ball exactly the same as the first. A few days afterwards,
20、Philip saw this young Robinson fall as he was carrying home a heavy log of wood. It was too heavy for him to lift up again. Philip ran to him, and helped him to put it on his shoulder again. The boy was embarrassed to be treated so kindly when he had ruined Philips ball the week before! He said that
21、 he was very sorry for his behavior. Philip went home quite happy. “This,” he said,“ is the best revenge I could take, in returning good for bad.” 解析： 通过阅读所给文章可知,Philip 因为农夫 Robinson 的儿子用 钉子刺穿了自己新买的球而非常生气,扬言要报复他。 Stephen 劝他说没有人喜欢 Robinson 的儿子,他经常一个人 走来走去。他只是一个孤独可怜的男孩。Stephen 还告诉 Philip,几天前 Robinson
22、的儿子被蜜蜂蛰了,就去打蜜蜂巢,结 果被一大群蜜蜂蛰了,不得不在床上躺了几天的事情。 续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:“我得说,” Philip回答说,“你 的建议似乎很好。 ”所以后文应该是讲述 Philip 放弃了报复的 计划,告诉了父亲实情,Philip 的父亲感谢 Stephen 给他儿子 的忠告,答应 Philip 再给他买一个球,和第一个一模一样的。 第二段开头是:几天后,Philip 看到 Robinson 的儿子在把一根 沉重的木头搬回家时摔倒了。本段应该写 Philip 帮助了 Robinson 的儿子,Robinson 的儿子为自己几天前的行为道 了歉,Philip 高高兴
23、兴地回了家,认为以德报怨就是最好的报 复。 最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右。 【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。 如 :be angry with; good advice; the same as; tooto;embarrassed 等高级词汇;He said that he was very sorry for his behavior.宾语从句等高级句式。 题组二： 1.答案： Dear Peter, Knowing that youd like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before retur
24、ning to England soon, Im happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. As is known, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication. Besides, with strong Chinese cultural characteristics, Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a f
25、avorite choice for ladies of your mothers age. Im sure your mother will definitely like one. Best wishes to your family. Yours, Li Hua 解析： 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外籍老师Peter写一封 建议信。 【详解】第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方 式安排所写内容。 要求: 1.推荐礼物; 2.推荐原因; 3.表达祝愿。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) s
26、elect a Chinese gift, recommend, have the longest history, Chinese cultural characteristic, a favorite choice, definitely 等等。 第三步:连词成句 1. Knowing that youd like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, Im happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. 2. As is known
27、, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication. 3. Besides, with strong Chinese cultural characteristics, Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. 4They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mothers age. 5.Im sure your mother will defin
28、itely like one. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问 题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 表并列补充关系:besides。 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 【点睛】高分句型 1 Knowing that youd like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, Im happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.使用了非谓语动词作 状语。 高分句型 2 As
29、is known, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication.使用了定语从 句。 2.答案： Nowadays family members are often found lost in their own electronic products. (要点1)Some experts fear that technology can affect family relationship for lack of face-to-face communication. (要点2)However, a report has found technology benefits family bonds in that it makes members closer and provides private mental space as well. (要点3)Actually, not technology itself but peoples attitude towards it influences family relations. (要点4)
