1、How to correct a composition,短文改错解题技巧,学 习 目 标,1）了解高考短文改错题的错误设置规律 2）掌握短文改错的改正方法 3）提高篇章结构分析和语言纠错的能力 4）培养学生的规范答题习惯,考纲解读,高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错题设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。,高考短文改错的短文通常只有110个词左右，文体多为第一/三人称记叙文、应用文(以书
2、信为主)。所选取的语言材料贴近实际生活，多为考生所熟知，且话题贴近学生，有的带点幽默，有的包含教育意义。文字浅显易懂，材料中没有生僻、超纲的词汇；句子结构简单，基本上是简单句和并不复杂的复合句；语言地道，符合英语语言习惯。各种错误所占比例为,命题特点,Is it difficult for you to correct errors in a sentence?,Practice,Rules Try to find the mistakes in each sentence. You may discuss with your deskmates.,1. It is difficultly f
3、or me to write in English. 2. When the air move, we have wind. 3. Ill get good marks in all my subject. 4. I have made great progresses in my study. 5.Unfortunate, she was ill yesterday . 6. I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term. 7.There are a blackboard and some deskes in the clas
4、sroom.,moves,is,subjects,progress,difficult,Unfortunately,us,主谓不一致,名词单复数,名词单复数,系动词后用形容词,修饰整个句子用副词,代词格,主谓不一致,8. Neither you nor I is wrong. 9. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. 10. He was very happy because of he passed the driving exam.,am,a,就近原则,固定搭配,连词介词缺或误,1. I can go to home now. 2. I
5、 like playing piano. 3. I am fond at English.,the,Wrong word,Missing word,of,Unnecessary word,高考短文改错的考察方式（格式要规范）,设疑方式 错词（8）、漏词（1）、多词（1）,助记口诀： 动词形，名词数。 形副级别和转换。 代词格，细领悟。 介词短语须关注。 习惯用法要记住。 冠词连词缺或误。,sentences,passages,考什么？,词法： 句法： 主谓语在数上的一致；名词性从句、定语从句、强调句型、句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。 e.g. The airs we breathe
6、 in is getting dirtier and dirtier. 语篇（行文逻辑）: (难点) 1.上下文的时态是否一致 e.g. I was only four when she passes away. 2.上下文中的代词是否一致，主要是代词的格与数的错误。 e.g. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. 3. 上下文中的逻辑是否一致 e.g. ：Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I learne
7、d that I had to be more patient and little aggressive（有进取心的 ）.,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。,高考具体要求,初试牛刀,Our English teacher begin
8、to teach us in 2013. She had taught English for more than two year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully, but we consider her as our friend. She is really good teacher. We are love her very much. Were sure well get in well with each ot
9、her.,began,has,years,us,with,beautiful,a,on,动词形,名词数,代词格,介词短语要牢记,还要注意形和副,冠词连词常光顾,Practice,难度只相当于高一下学期学生英语作文,1. 浏览全文，掌握大意。Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .,2.先易后难, 找出明错。Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.,3对照考点, 深入审读. Read the passage for the third time, che
10、ck the answers and correct the difficult ones.,新高考短文改错 应试策略及答题原则,三步走,新高考短文改错 应试策略及答题原则,1.标点符号不改。 2.大小写不改。 3.词序错误不改。 4.单词拼写不改 。 文中出现带汉语注释的词， 在句中不可能用错。,（1）忠实原文原则（不改原文的原意） （2）一对一原则（一错一词） （3）错误以改动最少原则 （4）虚词（冠词、介词、连词和感叹词）以添加或者删除为原则 （5）实词（名词、代词、形容词、副词、动词和数词）以改变形式为原则,新高考短文改错 应试策略及答题原则,实战演练,When I was a chi
11、ld, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately（不幸地）, on the development of industrialization(工业化), the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have
12、been shown that global warming（全球变暖） has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we ll live to regret it.,2015全国高考试题英语卷I (略有改动),When I was a c
13、hild, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately （不幸地）, on the development of industrialization（工业化）, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies ha
14、ve been shown that global warming（全球变暖） has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we ll live to regret it.,2015高考英语卷I （为降低难度，请把以下划红线部分改正）,th
15、ought,the,with,serious,air,Many,find,our/the,and,动,冠,连,介,动,形/副,名,形/副,动,代,The more we practise, the easier it will be!,对策,熟记课本上的必背词汇，扫清生词障碍。这无论对阅读速度还是改错能力的提高都会大有帮助。 One cannot make bricks without straw. 巧妇难为无米之炊。,Homework,1. Review what we have learnt today 2. Finish a proofreading exercise,试试看高考真题(2
16、014新课标),Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed （自身传种） where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small
17、in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,,,Nearly five years bef
18、ore, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed （自身传种） where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.
19、 There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,高考真题(2014新课标),ago,of,years,have,a,everywhere,tasty,many,wonderful,
