1、写作写作辅导辅导 【写作任务】【写作任务】(Unit 2 Writing) 假如你是 Colin，一直受肥胖困扰，为此你看过不少医生。去年夏天，你感 觉身体很不舒服，从那时起你痛下决心减肥请你写一篇短文，介绍自己的经 历。 【思路点拨】【思路点拨】 1. 定基调定基调 体裁：体裁：记叙文 时态：时态：以一般过去时为主 人称人称：以第一人称为主 2. 列提纲、写句子列提纲、写句子 列提纲列提纲 写句子写句子 过去状态及肥胖原 因 I was fat for many years. I saw many doctors. (1) The doctors all said I was fat _(是
2、因为 我吃了太多的快餐食品) and got little exercise. 减肥之路 Last summer I didnt feel well. (2) To be healthy, _(我决定停止吃快餐 食品) and start to do sports. (3) _(做这些对我来说不容易). My parents and friends kept saying, “Colin, come on! Dont stop!” With their help, I made it. 目前状态 (4) _(我变得越来越健康了). My life is different now! 3. 巧衔
3、接巧衔接 当上下文有因果关系时， 可以用 for 或 because 来衔接， 这样可使文章更加顺 畅和自然。 4. 成篇章成篇章 _ _ _ 答案答案 2. 列提纲、写句子列提纲、写句子 (1) because I ate too much fast food (2) I decided to stop eating fast food (3) Its not easy for me to do these (4) I have become healthier and healthier 4. 成篇章成篇章 I was fat for many years. For this I saw
4、many doctors. They all said I was fat because I ate too much fast food and got little exercise. Last summer I didnt feel well. To be healthy, I decided to stop eating fast food and start to do sports. Its not easy for me to do these. My parents and friends kept saying, “Colin, come on! Dont stop!” With their help, I made it. I have become healthier and healthier. My life is different now!
