1、1 天津天津市红桥区市红桥区 20162016- -20202020 年五年高三二模英语试题汇编年五年高三二模英语试题汇编- -书面表达专题书面表达专题 2020年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题 第二节：书面表达（满分第二节：书面表达（满分 2525 分）分） 61.假设你是李津，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教 (tutor) 的广告， 欢迎中国学生参加。请你写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍； 2.参加意图； 3.希望获准。 注意： 1.词数不少于 100字； 2.可以
2、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, _ _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Jin 【答案】Dear sir or Madam, 2 Im Li Jin, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chines
3、e language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and Id like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and Im excellent at it. Besides, Ive been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I hope I will be accepted as a me
4、mber of yours. Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生就国际中学生家教组织招聘兼职中文家教的广告写一封申请信。 【详解】第一步：审题第一步：审题 体裁：体裁：应用文。 时态：时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：结构：总分法。 要求： 1.自我介绍； 2.参加意图； 3.希望获准。 第二步：列提纲（重点短语）第二步：列提纲（重点短语） happened to read；native tongue；a good command of spoken and
5、 written English；introduce Chinese culture. 第三步：连词成句第三步：连词成句 3 1.I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet 2. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and Im excellent at it. 3. Besides, Ive been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written Engli
6、sh. 4. Im willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇第四步：连句成篇 1.表示文章结构顺序：自我介绍；参加目的；希望获准 2.表示并列补充关系：For me；Besides,；and 第五步：润色修改第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：
7、I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet；如非谓语动词：employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language；如宾语 从句：I know that you welcome students from China.等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为 文章增色添彩。 2019年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题 第二节：书面表达（
8、满分 25 分） 61. 假设你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你校学生会的英语角网站上正在就“新时代要不要学习雷锋精 神”进行讨论。请你根据以下内容要点在讨论区留言。 （1）新时代需要雷锋精神； （2）结合实例说明如何向他学习； （3）号召大家努力学习，培养社会责任感。 注意： （1）词数不少于 100； 4 （2）可根据内容要点适当发挥，以使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； Recently, some people have raised doubt about learning from Lei Feng. _ _ 此处不能答题 答案 One possible ver
9、sion: （给分把握：1. 要点是否齐全；结构层次是否清晰；语言是否准确地道。 2. 以15分为基准分，5分一档， 尽可能拉开档次，突出优秀；严把标准，有理有据。） Recently, some people have raised doubt about learning from Lei Feng. Should we still need to learn from him? The answer is surely “yes”. Our society calls for the spirit of Lei Feng. “To live is to serve the people”
10、 perfectly explains the real meaning of the long-lasting spirit. Nowadays, with volunteering spirit spreading throughout the world, we students can make use of our spare time to do some voluntary work for those in need and show great concern to people around us. All we need to do is to help others w
11、hole-heartedly. We teenagers need to be people who promote the long-lasting spirit. So it is high time that we developed sense of social responsibility and studied hard so that we can live up to our countrys expectations. Im sure everybody can make a difference. Only in this way can we build a more
12、harmonious society. The world needs love and care. Lets do as Lei Feng did. 2018年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题 第二节：书面表达（满分 25 分） 61. 暑假就要到了，你们打算于六月二十日在你们班教室举行同学聚会，假设你是班长李津，请代表 班写一封不少于 100 词的邀请信，特邀你们曾经的外教 Mark 那天晚上准时参加。 1.告知聚会的时间和地点： 5 2.介绍聚会中的活动； 3.阐述被邀请人参加的必要性。 注意： 1.可适当加入细节，以
13、使内容充实，行文连贯； 2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mark, Summer holiday is coming soon, so _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Jin 答案 One possible version: Dear Marks, Summer holiday is coming soon, so we want to hold a party on the evening of June 20, 2018 in our classroom. It would be pleasant to have you there. So interesting
14、will this party be that you cant miss it. For one thing, we will have a big meal, sing the popular songs and play games. For another, it also provides a good opportunity for you to meet many friends that you havent seen for a long time What an important thing it is for us to get your participation!
15、First, you are not only our teacher but our best friend who always shows your care to students in need. Second, we havent seen each other for a long time and 6 we are eager to see you. The party wouldnt be complete without you! The party will begin at 7: 00 p.m. Come on and join us! We are looking f
16、orward to seeing you! Yours, Li Jin 2017年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题 第二节：书面表达（满分 25 分） 61假定你是中学生李津。一个来自英国的中学生代表团在你校举办英语文化节（English Culture festival） 期 间来访，并受邀观看英文戏剧表演（English Drama Show）。请你根据以下写作要点与要求代表学校写 一篇欢迎辟： 1）表示对客人的欢迎； 2）介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容、时间、地点等） 3）表达对客人的祝愿。 注意： 1）词数：不少于
17、100； 2）可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3）开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear British guests, _此处不能答题 _ Thank you. 答案 One possible version: 7 Dear British guests, Its my great honor to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school. We are excited to have you here during our English Culture Festival. As scheduled, we
18、 have English Drama Show this evening. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening. Most of the plays we will perform are by classic authors, such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens. The show will begin at eight
19、 oclock tonight in the school hall. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in it. I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence. We hope youll have a pleasant time during your stay here. Thank you. 2016年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（二模）英语试题 第二节：书面表达（满分第二节：书面表达（满分 2525 分）分） 61. 假设你
20、叫假设你叫李津李津，你，你校上周五组织了一次全校性的图书义卖活动。请你根据以下要点，给你的美国笔校上周五组织了一次全校性的图书义卖活动。请你根据以下要点，给你的美国笔 友友 Jack 写一封电子邮件，告诉他此次活动的有关情况。写一封电子邮件，告诉他此次活动的有关情况。 1活动的目的活动的目的； 2活动的时间、地点和方式；活动的时间、地点和方式； 3你对本次活动的感悟。你对本次活动的感悟。 注意：注意：1词数词数不少于不少于 100 字；字； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头开头和结尾已经和结尾已经写好，不计写好，不计入入总词数。总词数。 Dear Jack
21、， _ 此处不能答题此处不能答题 8 Best wishes to you! Yours， Li Jin 答案答案 One possible version: Dear Jack, How are you doing recently? I miss you very much. Now Im so excited that I cant wait to share with you an unforgettable experience. Last Friday, our school held a book sale, aimed to raise some money to help t
22、hose in need. During the course of the after-class activity, we gathered on the playground to sell books, which were collected ahead of time. Luckily, a great many students took an active part in this program and we got a large amount of money. I believe our generous help is sure to have a good effect on children in need, especially those in the mountainous areas or poverty-stricken districts. Through our efforts, we can not only share what we have with them, but also make their life more colorful. We show our love, which makes our world go round. Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Jin
