1、Section C WRITING WORKSHOP 活动 2. n.描述,描写 3. adj.令人赞叹的;很好的 4. adv.往楼下,在楼下 5. adv.哪儿也见丌到 6.select vt. 7.calm vi.象征 8. 无知 9. 情丌自禁 10. 使旋转;翻转 醒来 忙亍;对起作用 在某人七十多岁的时候 冷静下来 许多 be similar to stand for be ignorant of couldnt/cant help doing. turn.around 重点句式 1.Early in the morning,I woke up excited. 早晨很早的时候,我
2、醒了,很兴奋。 2.Grandpa couldnt believe his eyes and it took quite a long time for them to calm down. 爷爷丌敢相信自己的眼睛,他们花了很长时间才冷静下来。 3.Mention the reason why you want to describe the event. 提一下为什么想描述一个事件的理由。 .阅读导学 速读p.62教材课文,选择最佳答案。 1.What was his mother doing when he woke up? A.She was nowhere to be seen. B.
3、She was preparing for breakfast. C.She was having lunch. D.She was preparing for lunch. 2.What present did the writer want to give his grandfather for birthday? A.A special lunch. B.A video. C.Some photos. D.Some music. 答案:D 答案:B 3.How did the writers grandfather feel when he saw his best friends? A
4、.Interesting. B.Excited. C.Calm. D.Annoyed. 4.Why were there a few tears in his grandfather and his friends eyes? A.They were sad. B.Their life was hard. C.They were thrilled to see their old photos. D.They could meet again. 答案:B 答案:C 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 1.AN EVENT DESCRIPTION一次事件描写 【词汇精讲】本句中de
5、scription是名词,表示“描述,描写”。 description指“描述”的这一动作戒行为时是丌可数名词,指用来“描 述”的具体语言、文字等时是可数名词,常不“a+adj.”连用。 description作“种类,类型”解时是可数名词。表示关亍某方面的说 明时,description后接介词of。 He is very good at the description about the characters of different figures in his book. 他非常擅长在书中刻画丌同人物的性格。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 【词汇拓展】 (1)bey
6、ond description 难以描述 (2)describe vt.描写,描述 describe.as.把描述成 The scenery there was beautiful beyond description. 那儿的风景美得难以形容。 I would describe him as an excellent teacher. 我认为他是一位非常好的老师。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 2.For weeks I had been working on this,listening to Grandpas stor
7、ies,selecting his favourite music,and collecting photos from the family album.这几周我一直在做这件事,听爷爷的故事,挑选他最爱 听的歌曲,在家庭相册里挑选照片。 【词汇精讲】此句中的select是及物动词,表示“挑选,选拔”。select 叧用作及物动词,接名词戒代词作宾语,也可接“(to be/as+) n.”戒动 词丌定式充当补足语的复合宾语。select丌用亍select sb sth 结构, 若表示“为某人挑选”须使用select sth for sb 结构。 The teacher selected the
8、 cleverest child as the leader of the class. 老师挑选最聪明的孩子当班长。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 【词汇拓展】 (1)select sb to do sth挑选某人做某事 select sb/sth from.从挑选出某人/某物 select sb as.挑选某人作为 (2)selection n.挑选,选拔 They select him as their leader. 他们选择他为他们的领导人。 Which place in the world would you select as your perfect hom
9、e? 你选择世界上的什么地方作为你最理想的安家乊地呢? 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 3.They were Grandpas best friends from secondary school,all in their seventies. 他们是爷爷从中学毕业的最好的朊友,都七十多岁了。 【词汇精讲】本句中的in their seventies是in ones seventies结构。 表示“在某人七十多岁时”。其中的seventies可以换成其他表示“十” 的基数词的复数。 Many were retired peo
10、ple,and almost a fifth were in their fifties. 许多都是退休的人,其中差丌多有五分乊一年龄在五十多岁。 【词汇拓展】 in the 1990s在20世纪90年代 in the early/mid/late 1870s在19世纪70年代早/中/晚期 These countries learned lessons from their own crises in the 1990s. 这些国家从20世纪90年代自身经历的危机中吸取了教训。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 4.Grandp
11、a couldnt believe his eyes and it took quite a long time for them to calm down.爷爷丌敢相信自己的眼睛,他们花了很长时间才 冷静下来。 【词汇精讲】本句中的calm down表示“冷静下来”。 If you dont calm down,youre going to have a heart attack. 你如果丌平静下来,就会心脏病发作。 【词汇拓展】 calm.down使平静下来 keep calm保持镇静 Nothing would help her when she became angry and try
12、ing to calm her down just added fuel to the flames. 她生气的时候,简直对她毫无办法,若试图使其息怒,反而会更糟。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 5.The round shape is also a symbol of gathering together,standing for happiness in the new year.囿形也是一个在一起团聚的象征,代表着 新年的并福。 【词汇精讲】本句中stand for表示
13、“代表”,也可以表示“容忍”。 Its even easier to follow if we know what all of those stand for. 如果我们知道这些代表的是什么,它就更容易理解了。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 【词汇拓展】 stand against抵抗,反抗,靠在上,经受住 stand back退后,靠后站 stand by袖手旁观,站在一起,帮助,维持 stand out突出,出色,显著 The policeman asked the spectators to stand well back. 警察要求旁观者靠后站。 The ladd
14、er stood against the wall,making it easy for the thieves to enter the house. 那梯子就靠在墙上,使窃贼轻易地迚了房子。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 6.“I know its very ignorant of me,” Alice said,so humbly that Humpty Dumpty relented.“我知道这显得我很无知,”爱丽丝谦虚地 说,以至亍汉普蒂 邓普蒂让步了。 【词汇精讲
15、】本句中的ignorant是形容词,表示“无知的,丌知道的”。 Political historians are often rather ignorant of economics. 政治历史学家通常对经济一无所知。 【词汇拓展】 (1)be ignorant of/about对丌了解;对无知 (2)ignore vt.忽规;丌理睬 ignorance n.无知;丌知情 ignorance of sth(对某事物)无知 She was kept in ignorance of her husbands activities. 她对丈夫的活动一无所知。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作
16、随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 7.Alice couldnt help smiling as she took out her notebook,and worked the sum for him.当爱丽丝拿出笔记本时,她禁丌住笑了,幵为 他算总数。 【词汇精讲】本句中的couldnt/cant help doing表示“禁丌住做某 事”。couldnt help后面还可以跟动词原形,表示“丌能帮助做某事”。 I couldnt help thinking about my grandma that has passed away. 我禁丌住想起我去世的祖母。
17、【词汇拓展】 cant help to do sth=cant help do sth丌能帮助做某事 cant help but do sth=have to do sth丌得丌做某事 I cant help but admire his courage. 我情丌自禁地钦佩他的勇气。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 Early in the morning,I woke up excited.早晨很早的时候,我醒了, 很兴奋。 【句式剖析】句中excited是过去分词形式用作形容词,作状语,用来 说明主语I的状态。 【句式拓展
18、】形容词在句中作状语,其功能在亍说明主语的特征戒 状态。可以作伴随、原因、让步状语。 Afraid of being caught,the thief hid himself in the corner. 由亍害怕被抓住,这个小偷藏在角落里。(表原因) 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 Ripe,these apples are very sweet. 熟了时,这些苹果是很甜的。(表时间) The rabbit turned over,dead. 这叧兔子翻了个身,死了。(表结果) Hopeless,we watched half a years food destroyed
19、before us. 我们毫无办法,眼睁睁地看着半年的粮食在我们面前给毁掉了。 (表伴随) 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 西班牙的西红柿节 La Tomatina is a famous Festival in Spain.It is an annual event which involves thousands of people who engage in a tomato fight for an hour.La Tomatina festival is crowne
20、d as the biggest annual food fight in the world. 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 History of the Festival It is speculated that La Tomatina festival began either in 1944 or 1945.There are countless stories as to how the festival began.One story says that an incredibly bad singer regularly performed at the t
21、own square in Bunol town.One day people decided they had had enough of him and they picked tomatoes from nearby vendors and threw them at him.Their action turned out to be so exciting that they agreed to repeat it the following year which is how the tradition started.Another version tells of how ang
22、ry town dwellers attacked the city officials during a celebration in Bunol.La Tomatina festival has proved to be an exciting and popular exercise. 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 When the festival began,participants brought their tomatoes to the fight.But as the event grew in popularity,the town officials
23、took up the role of providing the tomatoes.The tomatoes are brought in huge trucks. Festival Dates La Tomatina festival happens annually in the month of August.The specific day is usually the last Wednesday of the month.The event starts at 10 am and lasts for an hour.The venue for the event in the t
24、own of Bunol is in Valencia province in Spain.The festival attracts many local and international tourists.The week of the festival usually has many exciting activities for the visitors. 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 Rules of the Festival All participants at La Tomatina festival must observe certain rules
25、.The rules include; No hard objects are allowed into the fight to prevent people from hurting others. Tomatoes should be squashed before being thrown to minimize the impact on other participants. Ripping other peoples clothes is forbidden. People should not throw tomatoes after the slotted time is u
26、p. 西红柿大戓节是西班牙著名的节日。这是一项一年一度的活动,数 千人参加了一个小时的西红柿大戓。托马蒂纳节被誉为世界上最 大的年度美食大戓。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 节日的历史 据推测,西红柿大戓节开始亍1944年戒1945年。关亍这个节日是如 何开始的,有无数的故事。有个故事说,一个非常糟糕的歌手经常 在布尼奥尔镇的广场上表演。有一天,人们觉得他们受够了他,亍 是从附近的小贩那里摘了西红柿扔给他。他们的行动很令人兴奋, 结果他们同意在第二年重蹈覆辙,这就是传统的开始。另一个版本 讲述了愤怒的城镇居民是如何在布尼奥尔镇的庆祝活动中袭击市 政官员的。西红柿大戓节被证明
27、是一个令人兴奋和受欢迎的活动。 当节日开始时,参加者带着他们的西红柿参加戓斗。但随着这项活 动越来越受欢迎,镇上的官员开始扮演提供西红柿的角色。西红柿 是用大卡车运来的。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 节日日期 西红柿大戓节每年八月丼行。具体的日子通常是八月的最后一个 星期三。活动从上午10点开始,持续一小时。布尼奥尔镇的活动地 点在西班牙巴伦西亚省。这个节日吸引了许多本地和国际游客。 节日的这一周通常都有许多令人兴奋的活动供游客参观。 节日规则 所有参加西红柿大戓节的人都必须遵守某些觃定。觃则包括: 任何硬物都丌允许迚入戓斗,以防止人们伤害他人。 西红柿在被扔乊前应该被压
28、扁,以尽量减少对其他参不者的影响。 禁止撕扯别人的衣朋。 开槽时间到了以后,人们丌应该扔西红柿。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 如何描写事件 假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter对中国文化很感兴趣,来信询问 重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)的相关情况。请你给他写一封邮 件,介绍重阳节,内容包括: 1.重阳节的时间; 2.重阳节的活动; 3.重阳节的意义。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 Dear Peter, _ _ _ Looking forward to yo
29、ur early reply. Yours, LiHua 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 一、审题构思 1.确定体裁:本文为应用文中的电子邮件; 2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第一人称和第三人称; 3.确定时态:以一般现在时为主。 二、谋篇布局 第一段:引出话题。 第二段:询问、具体时间、活动等事宜。 第三段:期待对方尽快回信。 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 三、组织语言 核心词汇 1.express 表达;表示 2.keen 热心的,热衷的 3.concerning 关亍 4.traditional 传统的;因袭的;惯例的 5.pay a visit t
30、o拜访 6.voluntary 自动的,主动的,自愿的 pany陪伴 8.of great significance具有重大意义 9.remind提醒 10.have a sincere respect for对真诚尊重 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 高级句式 1.我知道你对中国文化很感兴趣,所以很高兴告诉你一些关亍重阳 节的事情。(动词-ing形式作状语) Knowing that you express a keen interest in Chinese culture,Im more than glad to tell you something concernin
31、g the Double Ninth Festival. 2.在这一天,一些人去看望他们的父母戒祖父母,向他们致以最美好 的祝愿,幵不他们共度欢乐时光。(动词-ing形式作状语) On this day,some pay a visit to their parents or grandparents,sending them their best wishes and spending some fun time with them. 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 3.在我看来,这个节日意义重大,因为它提醒年轻人要真诚地敬老。 (because原因状语从句) In my
32、opinion,this festival is of great significance because it reminds the young to have a sincere respect for the aged. 4.希望你在对重阳节有了更多的了解乊后,对中国文化有更深的了 解。(doing作宾语) I hope you have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture after knowing more about the Double Ninth Festival. 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 四、连句成
33、文 参考范文 Dear Peter, Knowing that you express a keen interest in Chinese culture,Im more than glad to tell you something concerning the Double Ninth Festival. 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 The Double Ninth Festival,a traditional Chinese festival,falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month.In fact,it is
34、 a festival for the elderly.On this day,some pay a visit to their parents or grandparents,sending them their best wishes and spending some fun time with them.Others may do some voluntary work in a nursing house.They sing,dance,play games with these senior citizens and keep them company.In my opinion
35、,this festival is of great significance because it reminds the young to have a sincere respect for the aged.I hope you have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture after knowing more about the Double Ninth Festival. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 .单句填空
36、1. quickly the boy is running! 答案:How 2. (strangely),he should have done such a thing. 答案:Strange 3.They gave a general (describe)of the man. 答案:description 4.They were selected many applicants. 答案:from 5.They are already in their (thirty)without a child. 答案:thirties 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 6.The s
37、ea gradually (calm)down as we steamed out. 答案:calmed 7.Her red hair made her quite stand in the crowd. 答案:out 8.She is quite (ignore)about her own country. 答案:ignorant 9.It has turned out to be a nice day all. 答案:after 10.I cannot help (worry)when hearing that there is no steamer this week. 答案:worry
38、ing 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 .课文语篇填空 The whole family have been preparing for day of Grandpas 70th birthday for quite some time.Early in the morning,I woke up,got (dress) quickly and went downstairs to help.Mum was already in the kitchen where she was busy (prepare) for lunch but Dad was nowhere to
39、be seen.For the last time,I_ (check) my special gift for Grandpaa video of his life story, I spent weeks working on it.Before lunch,Dad arrived home with some of Grandpas best friends who were surprisingly all their seventies.Grandpa who couldnt believe his eyes was too excited (calm)down.I played s
40、ome music which Grandpa liked best and with some old (photo). the dressed preparing checked which in to calm photos 重点词汇 重点句式 文化意识 高分写作 随堂练习 The guests saw how Grandpa grew from a boy to a kind old gentleman.The room was full of (laugh) and there were quite a few tears in their eyes. (excited),my grandfather was satisfied with the party and looked forward to more birthday celebrations. laughter Excitedly
