1、应用文写作专题 江苏省苏州市 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期中试题 66. 假如你是某报编辑，昨天收到一位学生来信。请根据来信的内容和所给的要点提示用英 语写一封回信。 Dear Editor. I am a hard-working girl and want to be the top student in my class. But in exams. I always make many careless mistakes. I really worry about it. What should I do to improve my performance in exams
2、? Best regards Yours sincerely. Li Fang 要点提示： 1.收到来信，获悉信中所提到的有关情况； 2.劝慰该生不要压力太大并提出合理建议（至少两条） 3.信的开头已经给出并不计入总分。 Dear Li Fang, From your letter, I can see that _ _ _ _ Best wishes Your sincerely Editor 【答案】Dear Li Fang, From your letter, I can see that you spare no effort in your academic pursuit, but
3、 somehow, you fail to attain ideal scores due to your carelessness. I suggest you take things easy and unload your mental pressure. Here is how. Firstly, after each exam, carefully analyze the mistakes youve made. Were they really committed simply because of your casualness, or you had some loophole
4、s in your subject knowledge? If the reason is the latter, you need to recap what youve learnt and do some targeted exercise to enhance your weak points. Secondly, enlist help from teachers, parents and peers. They may have encountered the same problems before and will likely offer you some practical
5、 solutions. Hope the above advice helps. Best wishes Your sincerely Editor 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生作为编辑给一位学生来信。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时、完成时和一般将来时等。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.收到来信，获悉信中所提到的有关情况； 2.劝慰该生不要压力太大并提出合理建议（至少两条） 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） spare no effort， due to， tak
6、e things easy， analyze the mistakes， because of your casualness， recap， do some exercise，enhance your weak points，enlist，encounter，offer sb. practical solutions 等 等 第三步：连词成句 1. From your letter, I can see that you spare no effort in your academic pursuit, but somehow, you fail to attain ideal scores
7、 due to your carelessness. 2.I suggest you take things easy and unload your mental pressure. 3.Were they really committed simply because of your casualness, or you had some loopholes in your subject knowledge? 4.If the reason is the latter, you need to recap what youve learnt and do some targeted ex
8、ercise to enhance your weak points. Secondly, enlist help from teachers, parents and peers. 5. They may have encountered the same problems before and will likely offer you some practical solutions. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定
9、要规范清晰， 【点睛】高分句型 1 Firstly, after each exam, carefully analyze the mistakes youve made.（使 用了定语从句） 高分句型 2 If the reason is the latter, you need to recap what youve learnt and do some targeted exercise to enhance your weak points.（使用了 if 引导的条件状语从句，what 引导宾语从句） 江苏省南京市鼓楼区统考 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期中试题 第一节（满分
10、 15 分） 46. 假如你是李华，你从报纸上看到中学生 Jennifer 为了减肥，经常不吃晚饭，决定给她写 一封信，内容包括： 1. 说明不吃晚饭的危害 2. 对保持身材的建议。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信的开头已为你写好。 Dear Jennifer, _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jennifer, Id like to have a talk with you about your health. Im told that you often skipped supper in order to ke
11、ep slim. I think that it is understandable for a girl to pay attention to her figure. However, it is not good to skip your meals. As you know, our body needs enough energy to support us. Now if you dont eat, you will have no enough energy to study, to work or even to live on. Whats worse, you may be
12、 weak and easy to catch diseases. Therefore, from my point of view, you should have some food but not too much every evening. Besides, you should do some exercises to keep slim. Only in this way can you become more attractive as well as energetic. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给中学生 Jennife
13、r 写封信，说明不吃晚饭的危害和对保 持身材的建议。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 要求： 1. 说明不吃晚饭的危害 2. 对保持身材的建议。 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） keep slim； pay attention to； skip meals； support； no enough energy； catch diseases； from my point of view；do some exercises；more attractive 第三步：连词成句 1. Im told that you often skipped s
14、upper in order to keep slim. 2. I think that it is understandable for a girl to pay attention to her figure. 3. However, it is not good to skip your meals. 4. As you know, our body needs enough energy to support us. 5. Now if you dont eat, you will have no enough energy to study, to work or even to
15、live on. 6. Whats worse, you may be weak and easy to catch diseases. 7. Therefore, from my point of view, you should have some food but not too much every evening. 8. Besides, you should do some exercises to keep slim. 9. Only in this way can you become more attractive as well as energetic. 根据提示及关键词
16、（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表并列补充关系：Whats more, Besides 2.表转折对比关系：However 3 表因果关系：Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 I think that it is understandable for a girl to pay attention to her figure.运用 that 引导宾语从句。 高分句型 2 Only in this way can you become more attractive a
17、s well as energetic.运用倒装句。 高分句型 3As you know, our body needs enough energy to support us.运用 as 引导的非限定性 定语从句。 江苏省盐城中学 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期中试题 第六部分 书面表达（满分 15 分） 66. 假设你是高一新生李华，你们学校要开设英音课程和美音课程，但你对要学英音还是美 音很是纠结，自己比较喜欢英音，但是怕美音难学。同时，美音在年轻人中比较普及，所以 你在某英语网站论坛发帖(post)，征求网友们的建议。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词
18、数); 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Li Hua Post at 13-11-2020 15:30 Hi, everyone. I am writing to ask for some advice on a question that has been bothering me for a long time. _ _ _ 【答案】Li Hua Post at 13-11-2020 15:30 Hi, everyone I am writing to ask for some advice on a question that has been bothering me for
19、a long lime. Recently, our school is going to offer British English courses and American English courses, I dont know which course I should take. Actually, I am more likely to choose British English. On the one hand, it is usually recognized as a noble language. If I can speak it well, I will be pro
20、ud of myself. On the other hand, knowing British English is difficult to learn, I am afraid I wont be able to master it very well. Compared to British English, American English is more popular among the youths. I am struggling with which one to choose. Id appreciate it if anyone can give me some pro
21、fessional advice. Look forward to your reply. 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在某英语网站论坛发帖， 就自己选择学英音还是美音一 事的困惑向网友征询意见。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在进行时、一般将来时和现在完成时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 讲述自己不知学英音还是美音一事的困惑； 2. 自己对英音和美音的各自看法； 3. 希望他人提出建议。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） 【范文中重点词组】 be go
22、ing to do sth.; be likely to do sth.; be recognized as sth.; be proud of sb.; (be) compared to sth.; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. Recently, our school is going to offer British English courses and American English courses, I dont know which course I should take. 2. Actually, I am more likely to choos
23、e British English. 3. On the one hand, it is usually recognized as a noble language. 4. If I can speak it well, I will be proud of myself. 5. Compared to British English, American English is more popular among the youths. 6. Looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
24、 表转折对比关系：On the one hand, On the other hand 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 高分句型 1 Recently, our school is going to offer British English courses and American English courses, I dont know which course I should take. 用了 which 引导的宾语从句。 高分句型 2 On the other hand, knowing British English is di
25、fficult to learn, I am afraid I wont be able to master it very well. 用了现在分词短语作状语。 江苏省扬州中学 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期中试题 第四部分 书面表达（满分 20 分） 86. 假定你是李华，在英国学习，打算向校报建议增设中国文化栏目，请根据以下要点给主 编 Mr. Black 写一封信。 1.自我介绍； 2.开设栏目的原因。 参考词汇：栏目 column 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Mr. Black, How is it going?
26、I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am writing to tell you that I have got a great idea for the school newspaper. We can set a column named Chinese culture. On the one hand, China is one of the four ancient countries in the world with a long history. It has rich culture, such as printing,
27、 paper cutting and so on. We can all benefit a lot from Chinese culture. On the other hand, it will be a good chance for exchange students to offer their help to the column. If you think this is a good idea, we can make a start now. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，
28、李华在英国学习，打算向校报建议增设中国文化栏目，要求根据 以下要点给主编 Mr. Black 写一封信。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.自我介绍； 2.开设栏目的原因。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） have got a great idea, set a column, Chinese culture, with a long history, benefit a lot from, a good chance, offer help
29、. 第三步：连词成句 1. I am writing to tell you that I have got a great idea for the school newspaper. 2. We can set a column named Chinese culture. 3. On the one hand, China is one of the four ancient countries in the world with a long history. 4. It has rich culture, such as printing, paper cutting and so
30、on. 5. We can all benefit a lot from Chinese culture. 6. On the other hand, it will be a good chance for exchange students to offer their help to the column. 7. If you think this is a good idea, we can make a start now. 8. Looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1
31、.表转折对比关系：On the one hand,On the other hand 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】高分句型 1 I am writing to tell you that I have got a great idea for the school newspaper.(运用了 that 引导的 宾语从句和不定式表目的) 高分句型 2 I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China.(运用了同位语) 江苏省镇江市九校 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期中联考试题 76. 假定你
32、是李华，你的外国朋友 David 发邮件向你询问你刚刚参加的全国诗歌节的情况。 请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.活动时间和地点：2020 年 11 月 17 日；开幕式成都；闭幕式重庆； 2.活动参与者：来自全国各地的诗歌爱好者； 3.活动内容：诗歌创作比赛；舞台朗诵表演。 4.活动感受。 注意：1.词数 80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇：开幕式 opening ceremony；闭幕式 closing ceremony Dear David, _ _ _ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】Dear David, Im glad to hear tha
33、t youre interested in Chinas national poetry festival which Ive just participated in. The event, with the opening ceremony held in Chengdu and the closing ceremony in Chongqing, appealed to over 1,000 poetry lovers throughout our country from November 1 to November 7. There were various activities d
34、uring the festival, including creating new works, stage performances, poetry club activities, seminars and visiting some historical sites to honor ancient poetry masters. I felt so lucky and inspired by those who devoted themselves to promoting our traditional culture and determined to spread people
35、s strong spirit by sharing Chinese poems with more people. I hope you can come to China to experience activities like the poetry festival. Best wishes, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文， 要求考生给外国朋友 David 发邮件， 给他介绍全国诗歌节的情况。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时，少量过去完成时。 结构：总分法 要求： 1.活动时间和地点：2020 年 11
36、月 17 日；开幕式成都；闭幕式重庆； 2.活动参与者：来自全国各地的诗歌爱好者； 3.活动内容：诗歌创作比赛；舞台朗诵表演。 4.活动感受。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） participate in；the opening ceremony；historical sites；devote oneself to；the poetry festival 第三步：连词成句 1. Im glad to hear that youre interested in Chinas national poetry festival which Ive just participated in. 2. Th
37、e event, with the opening ceremony held in Chengdu and the closing ceremony in Chongqing, appealed to over 1,000 poetry lovers throughout our country from November 1 to November 7. 3. There were various activities during the festival, including creating new works, stage performances, poetry club act
38、ivities, seminars and visiting some historical sites to honor ancient poetry masters. 4. I felt so lucky and inspired by those who devoted themselves to promoting our traditional culture and determined to spread peoples strong spirit by sharing Chinese poems with more people. 5. I hope you can come
39、to China to experience activities like the poetry festival. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Second And then, Finally（供参考） 表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover（供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 Im glad to hear that youre interes
40、ted in Chinas national poetry festival which Ive just participated in.运用宾语从句和 which 引导非限定性定语从句。 高分句型 2 I felt so lucky and inspired by those who devoted themselves to promoting our traditional culture and determined to spread peoples strong spirit by sharing Chinese poems with more people.运用 who 引导定
41、语从句和动名词作宾语。 江苏省盐城四县 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期中联考试试题 第三节第三节 应用文写作（满分应用文写作（满分 20 分）分） 76. 假设你是李华，近日你收到你的美国好友 Alex 的邮件，他询问你的减肥效果和其它方 面的近况，请你根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件： 1.你减肥成功，变得阳光、自信； 2.你加入了校足球队，与同学关系融洽，学业也有了进步； 3.询问 Alex 的生活近况。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Alex, _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Al
42、ex, Im glad to receive your email. Id like to tell you something about my recent life. First of all, I work out a lot and have succeeded in losing weight. Because of this, I become optimistic, confident and outgoing. Besides, I have become a member of my school football team. Apart from taking regul
43、ar training, we also often take part in football matches. Whats more, I get on well with my classmates and have made progress in my studies, which put me in a better mood. Would you like to share your recent life with me? Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用
44、文，要求考生给美国好友 Alex 写封邮件，告诉他你的减肥效果和其 它方面的近况。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在完成时。 结构：总分法 要求： 1.你减肥成功，变得阳光、自信； 2.你加入了校足球队，与同学关系融洽，学业也有了进步； 3.询问 Alex 的生活近况。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be glad to; recent life; first of all; optimistic; take part in; get on well with; would like to do sth.; look forward to 第三
45、步：连词成句 1. Im glad to receive your email. 2. Id like to tell you something about my recent life. 3. First of all, I work out a lot and have succeeded in losing weight. 4. Because of this, I become optimistic, confident and outgoing. 5. Besides, I have become a member of my school football team. 6. Ap
46、art from taking regular training, we also often take part in football matches. 7. Whats more, I get on well with my classmates and have made progress in my studies, which put me in a better mood. 8. Would you like to share your recent life with me? 9. Im looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Apart
