1、层次一 写正确地道的语句 渐进写作 Section 1 培养两种写作意识培养两种写作意识 想要写好英语作文，就要养成良好的写作意识。 1. 要养成用英语思维写句子的意识。要养成用英语思维写句子的意识。 2. 要养成正确要养成正确使用使用谓语动词的意识。谓语动词的意识。 1. 用英语思维写句子。用英语思维写句子。 英语和汉语句子表达的语序是有区别的。 在汉语中我们一般说： 或 “什么时候，某人在什么地方做了某事。什么时候，某人在什么地方做了某事。” 但在英语中则要表达成：_ _ “某人做了某事在什么地方某人做了某事在什么地方 什么时候。什么时候。” 1. 这个星期五，我们将在阶梯教室（lectu
2、re hall）上汉语课。 _ 2.在过去几年里，这座小镇发生了很大的变化。 _ Well have the Chinese lesson in the lecture this Friday. Great changes have taken place in the past few years. 2. 正确使用谓语动词。正确使用谓语动词。 英语中，一个句子的主干部分是“主语 + 谓语+宾语”， 而“谓语”则是句子的核心，因此，有无谓语不成句之说。 英语写作中，谓语出错都要扣分，故使用正确的谓语 形式成为必然。正确的谓语形式包括： 1）准确的谓语动词 2）正确的时态、语态和主谓一致 1.
3、我突然想起一个好主意。 _ _ 2. 我们可能早点出发，以便我们有更多时间看书和选书 _ _ Suddenly I thought a good opinion. We may start early so that well have more time to choose and read books. In a flash I a good opinion. 3. 从那时起，他就一直住在这个村庄。 _ 2. 几个小时后，他们终于到达了目的地。 _ He has been living in this village ever since. They arrived at the dest
4、ination several hours later. 正确地道的语句 一、谓语错误 谓语是句子的核心成分，谓语错误属于“重大错误”。通常 每错必扣分。谓语错误通常分为以下两类： 1. 谓语动词选用错误 2. 谓语的时态、语态、一致性错误 1. 误：Doing a parttime job can effect your studies. 正：Doing a parttime job can _ your studies. affect/ have an effect on 2. 误：He opened the light after he entered the room. 正：He _
5、the light after he entered the room turned on 1. 谓语动词选用错误 4. 误：He was like ice cream even though in winter. 正：He _ ice cream even though in winter. liked 5. 误：The sports meet will held in our school next Friday. 正： The sports meet _ in our school next Friday. will be held 3. 误：He fond of pop music w
6、hile his brother likes raps. 正： He _ pop music while his brother likes raps. is fond of 2. 误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. are raised bicycled 2. 谓语时态、语态、一致性错误 1. 误：In the morning, we had bicycled to the suburbs to plant t
7、rees. 正：In the morning, we _ to the suburbs to plant trees. 误：Children who _ in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 3. 误： I have a wide range of hobbies, which includes drawing, collecting stamps and so on. 正： I have a wide range of hobbies, which _
8、drawing, collecting stamps and so on. include 主语主语which 指指hobbies,为复数为复数 二、单词拼写错误 很多考生因为基础词汇没掌握好，在写作时经常会出现单 词拼写错误。拼写错误一般是每三个错词扣一分。但拼写错误 过多的考生肯定是得不了好分数的。 误： Compared with others, this country pays little attention to the polution. 正： Compared with others, this country pays little attention to the _.
9、pollution 误：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be geting more and more smaller. 正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be _ smaller and smaller. getting 三. 非谓语错误 写作中使用非谓语动词时要注意非谓语与句子主 语或所修饰名词的谓语关系和被动关系。这是很容易出 错的点。 误： With his attention fixing upon his ce
10、llphone, he didnt notice the teacher was standing by him. 正： With his attention _ upon his cellphone, he didnt notice the teacher was standing by him. fixed fix his attention upon是固定搭配是固定搭配 误： Seating on the bench, she buried herself in her thought. 正： _ on the bench, she buried herself in her thoug
11、ht. Seated 改正下列句子中的错误。1People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river. threw 2Its high time we do something to reduce the number of traffic accidents. 3There have been more and more road accidents happened in recent years. 4Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive by taking an evening flight. did happening is 技能应用技能应用
