1、Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.WritingMy Favorite Music,,,Objectives,To talk about your favorite music and musiciansand the reasons.主语 prefer music that love musicians whoHow to write an article well.,定语从句,Lets enjoy a piece of music.,How do you feel?,happy,excited,Writing: My Favorite Musi
2、c,大家都为了中考而整天努力学习着。但是学习的同时要学会给自己减压，听音乐可是一种不错的方法。请大家写一篇题为“My Favorite Music” 的短文 ，80字左右。适当用定语从句。要点包括： 知道哪些种类的音乐？你最喜欢哪种音乐？2. 谁是你我最喜欢的音乐家？为什么喜欢他/她？3. 为什么喜欢听音乐？4. .5. 愿景：在未来，我希望我可以成为一名歌手。能够像“中国好声音”（The Voice of China)里的歌手一样唱得好。,1a,What kind of music do you know?,Task1,pop music(流行乐),classical music(古典音乐)
3、,What kind of music dou you know?,opera(歌剧）,rock & roll(摇滚乐),swing/dance music(舞曲),Jazz(爵士乐),country music（乡村音乐）,techno(电子音乐）,Blues,I love music that I can sing along with.,Little apple,Do you like the music?,Why?,Pop music,What kind of music do you like?,Task2,yeah yeah yeah,I like music,Do you lik
4、e the music?,Why?,that I can dance to.,dance music,亲爱的你慢慢飞 小心前面带刺的玫瑰 亲爱的你张张嘴 风中话香会让你沉醉 亲爱的你跟我飞 穿过丛林去看小溪水 亲爱的来跳个舞 爱的春天不会有天黑 我和你缠缠绵绵翩翩飞 飞跃这红尘永相随 追逐你一生 爱你无情悔 不辜负我的柔情你的美 我和你缠缠绵绵翩翩飞 飞跃这红尘永相随 等到秋风尽秋叶落成堆 能陪你一起枯萎也无悔,I prefer music,两只蝴蝶,lyrics(歌词),prefer :(like better) 更喜欢,that has great lyrics.,I like the m
5、usic better, because its lyrics are great.,Possible answers for reference:,I like/love/prefer music,that is really loud.,that I can dance to.,that I can sing along with.,that has great lyrics.,that isnt too loud.,that is quiet and gentle.,that is exciting.,What kind of music do you like?,that/which,
6、Pairwork,Why do you like listening to music?,reason,Learn new knowledge,Learn new words,Relax ourselves,Cheer us up,Bring us different feelings,Task3,What kind of musicians do you like?,plays different kinds of music.,who,I like musicians,plays quiet songs.,I like musicians,who,writes their own musi
7、c.,I enjoy musicians,who,sings the words clearly.,I prefer musicians,who,I like musicians,_.,who,who/that,Task4,书面表达六步法,Writing skills,审题,人称,时态,注意,第一人称,一般现在时,1.词数2.适当运用定语从句,一、审题(Examining the topic),My Favorite Musickeypoits future expectations（未来展望）,二、抓要点（catch the key points),kinds of music(音乐类型）,
8、musician（音乐家）,why（理由）,pop music, rock music, classical musicfolk music,jazz,dance music, rap, hit-hop,quiet and gentle, loud,sing along with,dance to ,has great lyrics,relax ourselves,learn some knowledgebring different feelings,cheer me up,.,plays different kinds of music,writes their own music,sin
9、g the words clearly,.,kinds:,why:,musicians:,三、扩展成句(Form sentences),hope：,become a singer ,The Voice of China,brainstorming,1.词与词搭配 ,句与句相连。,4.增加细节 , 呼应首尾(reference)。,2.段落划分,层次分明。,3.简单句、复合句使用,连贯（coherence), 过渡句(transitional sentences),四、连句成文(Form an article),first,second,/so/because/although/but/what
10、s more(而且）/in a word（总之）/however/not onlybut also ,常用关联词:,Tips:巧用关联词，能使文章过渡自然、连贯、流畅！,文章结构,1.Heading 点题，概括性,2. Body 中心记述部分, 层次分明,3. Ending小结，呼应主题,Structure,高分模板,1.Heading:Do you like music?Whats your favorite music?,There are such as, like, for example I like best./ My favorite music is,第一点: 你知道哪些种类的
11、音乐？你最喜欢哪种音乐？,第二点：谁是你最喜欢的音乐家？你为什么喜欢他/她？,My favorite musician isbecauseI like musicians who.,第三点：你为什么喜欢听音乐？,表示顺序的单词：first , second, third, next, then, finally,3.Hope,2.Body,My Favorite Music _,Writing,Writing: My Favorite Music,大家都为了明年的中考而整天努力学习着。但是学习的同时要学会给自己减压，听音乐可是一种不错的方法。请大家写一篇题为“My Favorite Music
12、” 的短文 ，80字左右。适当用定语从句。要点包括： 知道哪些种类的音乐？你最喜欢哪种音乐？2. 谁是你我最喜欢的音乐家？为什么喜欢他/她？3. 为什么喜欢听音乐？4. 我喜欢在空余时间和朋友们一起讨论音乐。5. 在未来，我希望我可以成为一名歌手。能够像“中国好声音”里的歌手一样唱得好。,五、一起来找“茬”Lets correct mistakes.,Write an article,check it with your partners in your group.,Peer Checklist 同伴评价表,Check,背景信息,要点齐全,观点正确,Chinglish,correct coh
13、erence,heading body ending,person tense word order spelling punctuation,nomal （规范） clean beautiful,saying 、idiom(谚语 习惯用语）,文体,中式英语,连贯,标点,书写规范 卷面整洁,六、誉写（Handwriting),卷面潦草一定要扣分!,Lets share.,Choose the best article in your group to share with us.,My Favorite Music Do you like music?Whats your favorite m
14、usic？ I love music and I often listen to music in my spare time. There are different kinds of music in the world, such as folk music, pop music and so on. I prefer music that is quiet and gentle. My favorite musician is Jay Chou.He is the musician who writes his own songs and sings well.,美文欣赏,Why do
15、 I like to listen to music? Now let me tell you the reasons. First, when I am tired, the music will make me relaxed. Second, when I am down, the music will cheer me up and make me happy. Third, listening to music is a good way to learn some new words and some new knowledge. Music is my friend.In the
16、 future, I hope I can become a singer. I can sing like the singer in“ The Voice of China”.,Summary,Topic：My Favorite Music (1) kinds of music (2) my favorite music and musician (3) the reasons,Summary,2. How to write an article?,3. How to check an article.,审题 抓点 造句 成文 改错 誉写,4. Which group is the bes
17、t today?,Assignment,1.Make a summary about how to write an article well.2.Write the article “My favorite movie/book”,send it to me.E-mail:.,Thank you!,Music washes away from the soul(灵魂) the dust（尘埃）of everyday life.-Berthold Auerbach,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
