1、 谓语动词在写作中谓语动词在写作中 上.mp4 By the end of the class, students are able to 1.Learn how to choose suitable verbs in writing. 2. Learn how to combine words into a sentence. What goes around, comes around Sarah Billy writing criteria accuracyabundance 他七岁了。他七岁了。 她很美。她很美。 我在北京。我在北京。 你高寿呀？你高寿呀？ 1.我是Whatsapp的常
2、规用户。 I was a regular user of Whatsapp. 2.这对我们来说很难。 It was really difficult to us. 3. 孩子们在学校。 The children were at school. 4.有个男人生病卧床。 A man was sick in bed. There was a man sick in bed. 1 迅速锁定be动词 “很”、 “是”、 “在” be +表语 （名/形容 词/介短） “有”There be + n. It was clear that we got lost. 很很显然我们迷路了。正显然我们迷路了。正在在
3、我们绝望的我们绝望的 时候，时候，有有一个微弱的声音从远处传来，一个微弱的声音从远处传来， 是是Paul叔叔。叔叔。(浙江卷续写浙江卷续写) 1 迅速锁定be动词 Obviously, we were lost. 很很显然我们迷路了。正显然我们迷路了。正在在我们绝望的我们绝望的 时候，时候，有有一个微弱的声音从远处传来，一个微弱的声音从远处传来， 是是Paul叔叔。叔叔。 1 迅速锁定be动词 Just as we were at the point of desperation, there was a faint voice from the distance. As we were de
4、pressed, a weak voice came from the distance. It was Uncle Paul. How to choose suitable action verbs? 2 行为动词准确选 Specific a vs.mp4 Skill1：choose specific action verbs not general ones action verbs: dash rush. General action verbs: run , move . Skill1：choose specific action verbs not general ones acti
5、on verbs: scream yell. General action verbs: shout cry . Skill1：choose specific action verbs 1. The duck _ 2. The boy _ Skill 2： The two dogs circled each other and looked for the right moment to attack. The two dogs were ready to fight. Convey emotions by coherent actions Skill 2： wire fence Convey
6、 emotions by coherent actions pull, bite, push, stand . . posts The polar bear pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. (浙江2020.7续写) Skill 3：Show, not tell Example1: She was extremely happy. Two spots of color brightened her face . She couldnt help dan
7、cing to the music. Skill 3：Show, not tell Example 2: He was sad. He tried to fight back his tears, but in vain. She was extremely happy. brighten spots of color cant help dancing He was sad. fight back his tears Skill 3：Show, not tell abstract words concrete actions Skill 3：Show, not tell Example 3:
8、 The girl asked if Id had lunch. I felt very hungry. (八省联考续写八省联考续写) My stomach answered in a delighted grumble. My stomach was growling. How to choose suitable action verbs? 2 行为动词准确选 Skill1:choose specific action verbs Skill 2:Convey emotions by coherent actions Skill 3：Show, not tell 雪.mp4 Bucks f
9、eet sank into something that was white and soft like mud. He jumped back with a bark. More of this white stuff was falling through the air. He shook himself, but more of it fell upon him. He sniffed it curiously, then licked some up with his tougue. -The Call of the Wild 1.经理经理深表同情深表同情但却但却无能为力无能为力。
10、3 拐弯抹角巧妙译 非常同情非常同情 什么也做不了什么也做不了 be sympathetic can do nothing The manager was sympathetic, but he could do nothing. 2.我住在机场附近，过往飞机日夜不 绝于耳。 I live near an airport and passing planes can be heard night and day. 3拐弯抹角巧妙译 能听到能听到 1. 熊怒吼着向湖里跑去。熊怒吼着向湖里跑去。 The bear ran to the lake, with an angry roar. 4 次要动
11、作with填 with + n. = V + adv. 2. 费了好大劲儿，他爬进了商店. With a great difficulty, he climbed into the shop. 4 次要动作with填 Summary : 1 迅速锁定be动词 2 行为动词选准确 3 拐弯抹角巧妙译 4 次要动作with填 What goes around, comes around Assignment : Sarah Billy What goes around, comes around Putting the ring back to his pocket carefully, the
12、man changed his mind. _ _ Assignment : Putting the ring back to his pocket carefully, the man changed his mind. He was determined to find Sarah Darling. Billy walked out of the pawn shop and looked all around for her. Suddenly it hit him that /he recalled that she worked across the street. Therefore
13、, the man looked for her door after door. To his great delight, Billy found Sarah eventually. He gave her the ring back, which made Sarah moved deeply. Tears filling her eyes, Sarah expressed her sincere gratitude to the man. Both of them hold the belief that what goes around, comes around. (Final Version) 下.mp4 What goes around, comes around.
