1、译林版选择性必修第一册 Unit 2 单元写作 本单元的写作任务是描写你最喜欢的一位歌手或一个乐队， 这是一种描述性的作文。 写 描述性的作文应该注意以下方面： 1开头要介绍一下你最喜欢的歌手或乐队的基本信息。 2主体部分介绍这位歌手或这个乐队的作品的特点及影响力，简要说明你喜欢他/她/它的 原因。 3描述一下你和他/她/它的接触经历。这部分的位置较为灵活，可以放在文章的开头。 常用表达： 1Of all the singers/bands I have known，I like.best. 2He/She is not only.，but also. 3I first came across
2、/got to know him/her/them on occasion/by accident. 4It is the best song that I have ever heard. 5He/She expressed his/her.through his/her music. 6In his/her music，I can get comfort/encouragement/inspiration. 7In this way，he/she can also be referred to as. 8As far as I am concerned，no one has ever ha
3、d a greater influence on me than him/her. 假如你是高二(一)班学生李华，你决定在英语口语展示课上向你的同学们介绍你最喜欢 的歌手迈克尔杰克逊，内容包括： 1出生于 1958 年 8 月 29 日，美国著名歌手，被称为“流行音乐之王”。 2积极参与慈善活动，曾创立儿童基金会。 3代表作 Heal the World，用音乐表达了对和平世界的向往。 注意： 1词数 80 左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是写一个自己最喜欢的歌手或乐队，写作时应注意下面几点： 1确定文体：这是一篇描述性的说明文，写作时注意说明文的写作特
4、点。 2主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3主体人称：由于是写关于自己最喜欢的歌手或乐队，所以人称应该以第一、三人称为主。 谋篇 第一部分：首先说明自己喜欢的歌手或乐队的名字，介绍其基本信息。 第二部分：重点介绍这位歌手或这个乐队的作品的特点及影响力。 第三部分：简要介绍你与这位歌手或这个乐队的接触经历以及他/她/它对你的影响。 第二步遣词造句 核心词汇 1邂逅_ 2被称为_ 3代表作_ 4全世界_ 5对有极大的影响_ e across 2 be referred to as3masterpiece4all over the world5have a great impact o
5、n 连词成句 1他出生于 1958 年 8 月 29 日，被称为“流行音乐之王”。 _ 2他的代表作之一是拯救世界 ，他在其中表达了自己的愿望：让世界成为一个和平的地 方，供人们生活。 _ 3他曾经创立了一个儿童基金会，目的是帮助全世界的贫困儿童。 _ 4就我而言，迈克尔杰克逊给了我最大的影响。 _ 1 He was born onAugust 29,1958 and is referred to as “King of Pop” 2 One of his masterpieces is Heal the World.In the song he expressed his wish to m
6、ake the world a peaceful place for people to live in. 3 He once founded a Children Foundation，and its purpose is to help poor children all over the world. 4As far as I am concerned，Michael Jackson has ever had the greatest impact on me. 第三步句式升级 1用“介词关系代词”引导的定语从句改写句 2。 One of his masterpieces is Heal
7、 the World，in which he expressed his wish to make the world a peaceful place for people to live in. 2用 whose 引导的定语从句改写句 3。 He once founded a Children Foundation，whose purpose is to help poor children all over the world. 3用“否定词比较级结构”改写句 4。 As far as I am concerned，no other singers have ever had a gre
8、ater impact on me than Michael Jackson. 第四步组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇 80 词左右的英语 短文。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 Of all the singers I have come across，I love Michael Jackson best.He was born on August 29,1958 and is referred to as “King of Pop” Michael Jackson was a person loving peace.One of his m
9、asterpieces is Heal the World，in which he expressed his wish to make the world a peaceful place for people to live in.He once founded a Children Foundation，whose purpose is to help poor children all over the world. I usually sit down in my bedroom，listening to his songs alone.In his music，I can get comfort， encouragement and inspiration.As far as I am concerned，no other singers have ever had a greater impact on me than Michael Jackson
