1、人教版必修第一册人教版必修第一册 Reading For Writing Unit1 Teenage life 1. 焦焦急急的的，担忧的，担忧的 adj. _ 2.在网上在网上 prep. _ 3.推荐推荐, 建议建议 v._ 4.行为行为 n._ v._表现表现 5.青少年青少年 n._ 6. 一代人一代人 n._ 7.吸引吸引 v. _ n._ adj._有吸引力的有吸引力的 Phrases: 1.对对担心担心_ 2.喜爱喜爱 _ 3.集中注意力于集中注意力于_ _ 4.沉溺于，对沉溺于，对上瘾上瘾_ 5.鼓励某人做某事鼓励某人做某事_ 6.祝祝一切顺利一切顺利_ anxious onl
2、ine recommend behaviourbehave teenager attractattractionattractive generation be worried about be attracted to focus onconcentrate on be addicted to encourage sb. to do sth. best wishes Warming-up Have you met any challenges in your new class? What do you usually do when you are in trouble? Read a l
3、etter offering some advice on page 18 and then solve the questions below. 1) What is Worried Friends problem? He is worried about his friend. What is Susans advice? Talk to his friend about his behaviour. Encourage his friend to try new hobbies. Discuss the problem together with his friend. 2. What
4、expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions? Write them down. I recommend that. I think you should. Why not. ? Skim page 18 and answer the following questions: Reading for structure 1. What type of writing is the text? 2. Whats the structure of a letter? A letter 10 September 2018 Dear Worried F
5、riend, You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not u
6、nusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family
7、life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together? I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend. All the best, Structer of a letter A letter should include the following parts: Date Greeting Body Close Signature Find and mark th
8、e parts of the letter that match the following points. A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s). D. I think my advice will help. Pre-writing How many suggestions can you find in the letter? What are they? Do you agree with all of them? Please gi
9、ve your reasons. What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions? Can you find more expressions of giving advice? Pre-writing Close All the best Good luck Best wishes for you Looking forward to your early reply . . Signature , , , , Pre-writing Language Features l What expressions does Susan Lu
10、o use to make suggestions? Circle them in the letter. l Can you think of more expressions of making suggestions? l What expressions does Susan Luo use to show her understanding? Can you think of other ways to express understanding? More Expressions Making suggestions Why dont you .? It couldnt be be
11、tter if you could . I think it would be beneficial if you could . Id like to propose(建议建议) that you should . Its advisable/ recommended to do . You may/ might as well(不妨不妨) do . You may consider doing. 1. From my point of view(依我看来依我看来), it would be wise(明智的明智的)/ reasonable/ a good idea to do . More
12、 Expressions Showing understanding I feel terribly sorry to hear/ know/ learn that . I know well how it feels to . I know you didnt mean to . I know you have trouble in doing. It happens to everyone. Such problem is normal. Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong.
13、1. Take it easy and things will be better. 01 02 03 A letter of advice Im sorry to know that you are now having trouble ( in) doing sth . 知道你现在在方面有些麻烦, 我很抱歉。 Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on. 很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。 My advice /suggestions are as follows./ The following is my advice. /
14、Here are some tips to help you. 我的建议如下/这里有帮助你的一些建议。 Topic：交代背景：交代背景+写信目的写信目的 A letter of advice First/First of all ，why not.？If you do this，you can. Secondly/Whats more, you should / had better do. Then / That way, . It is also helpful/useful to do., which will Thirdly/ In addition/Besides, it would
15、 be a good idea if. By doing this,. As far as Im concerned/Last but not least, doing . is a better choice. When it comes to this problem, I suggest that you should. Body：介绍详情、提出建议：介绍详情、提出建议 01 02 03 A letter of advice ConclusionConclusion：提出希望采纳建议：提出希望采纳建议+ +感谢感谢+ +盼望回复盼望回复 I hope you will find thes
16、e ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 I believe/am sure that if you follow my advice，youll . 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会。 I would be grateful if you could consider my advice. I would appreciate it if you could take my adice into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。 Looking forward to your early reply. 盼望你的早日回复。 2. Draft
17、your letter according to the outline below. _ Dear_, You wrote that _ _ I understand that_ _ I think_ _ Because_ _ I am sure_ _ Best Wishes, _ 8 October 2019 Dear Xu Ting, You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. I understand how you feel quite well
18、. I think it is a good idea to make some good friends in you class and have fun with them after school. In this way, you will feel less lonely because you can talk to each other about the unhappy things to reduce your bad feelings and have fun together. It is a good idea not to be alone, trying to b
19、e with your best friends. I am sure finally you will be cheerful and get used to your present life. Best Wishes! Yours sincerely Susan 3.Now, please finish your draft and then exchange drafts with your partners. The checklist Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order? Does the writer give reasons for the advice? Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions? Does the writer use commerce and stops correctly? Is the handwriting is easy to read.
