1、新高考二轮新高考二轮 作文提出建议作文提出建议 & 咨询请教专项训练咨询请教专项训练2021景德镇市高三第三次质检假定你是李华，你的美国交流生朋友Lucy发邮件给你，希望你能帮助她使用筷子，因为她要参加学校为交流生举办的比赛活动。请你给她发送一封邮件，内容包括：1表达理解和安慰；2提出建议；3表示祝福。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_满分作文第一步：“五定”审题“三段”谋篇定体裁定人称定时态定要点、定结构建议信第一、二人称为主一般现在时、一般将来时三段谋篇第一段点名写信目的、提出建议第二段建议的具体内容第三段表达祝愿满分作文第二步：斟酌词句设计亮点1我很高兴得知你们
2、将参加我校为交换生举办的关于中国文化知识的比赛。(1)Im very happy to know that you will compete in a contest about the Chinese culture for you exchange students. It will be held by our school.(2)高频词汇/ 高级句式：Im _ to know that you will _ a contest about the Chinese culture _ for you exchange students.(不定式作定语升级)2对于你这样的初学者来说可能有点
3、困难，但我相信你在我的指导下会表现得很好。(1)It may be a little difficult for the beginners like you. I believe you can perform well under my guidance. (2)_， I believe you can perform well under my guidance. (升级为让步状语从句)more than delightedparticipate into be held by our schoolAlthough it may be a little difficult for the
4、 beginners like you3首先，我们通常用右手拿筷子，这样更方便拿起食物。(it作形式主语，非限制性定语从句)To begin with, _4使用筷子时，你最好注意手指的协调性。(省略句)Youd better pay attention to the coordination of your fingers _5我强烈建议你尽可能多地练习使用筷子。(1)I strongly suggest that you should practice using chopsticks as much as possible. (2)_，I strongly _ that you can
5、practice using chopsticks as much as possible.(增加名言，词汇升级) it is common that we hold the chopsticks in the right hand, which is more convenient to pick up the foodwhile using chopsticksAs the old saying goes that practice makes perfectrecommend满分作文第三步：巧妙过渡完美成篇Dear Lucy，Im delighted to know that you w
6、ill participate in a contest about the Chinese culture to be held for exchange students. Although it may be a little difficult for you, I believe you can perform well under my guidance. My suggestions are as follows：To begin with, it is common that we hold the chopsticks in the right hand, which is
7、more convenient to pick up the food. Whats more, as the old saying goes that practice makes perfect, I strongly suggest that you can practice using chopsticks as much as possible.I wish you a good result in the competition.Yours，Li Hua一、建议信建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力
8、。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议。(一) 谨记写作范式(二)充盈写作语料库吸引阅卷人开头句12021陕西省西安中学高三模拟Im writing to give you some tips/suggestions on how to get along well with your parents.我写信是想给你一些关于如何与父母和睦相处的建议。22021湖北八校联考Knowing that you are reall
9、y into Chinese culture, Im writing to advise you to participate in a Chinese Reading Contest.得知你对中国文化很感兴趣，我写信建议你参加中文阅读比赛。吸引阅卷人篇中句12021湖北八校联考First of all, by reading Chinese poems or essays, you can improve your knowledge of Chinese culture.首先，通过阅读中国诗歌或散文，你可以提高你的中国文化知识。2Whats more, I am convinced tha
10、t reading Chinese poems or essays will also be great fun and beneficial to your language learning. 更重要的是，我相信阅读中国诗歌或散文也会很有趣，对你的语言学习有益。3Last but not least, having a face-to-face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice最后但同等重要的是，心平气和地与父母面谈并耐心地倾听是一个更好的选择。吸引阅卷人结尾句1I ho
11、pe my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I hope you will find these suggestions useful.我希望我的建议对你有益。/我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。2Personally/In my opinion/As far as Im concerned，it would be wise to take the following actions.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。一题一练保高分(一)(注意卷面书写哟)2021浙江省五校联考假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Leo准备来中国学习，他来信向你咨询有关学习汉语的建
12、议。请用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括：1表示欢迎；2提出建议；3表达期望。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考范文：Dear Leo，Delighted to know that you are coming to study in China, I am writing this to discuss with you on how to learn Chinese.First, its essential to enlarge your vocabulary to overcome your reading difficulties. You should al
13、so take any opportunity to communicate in Chinese. Plus, getting to know the culture and history of China will help you learn Chinese better and increase your interest in learning this language.I hope my suggestions are helpful to you and feel free to drop me a line if you have any other questions.Y
14、ours，Li Hua二、咨询请教咨询信，又称询问信，是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。(一) 谨记写作范式(二)充盈写作语料库吸引阅卷人开头句12021湖北武汉五月供题Im writing to you to ask about how you spent your May Day holiday.我写信给你是想咨询你是如何度过五一假期的。2Im more than delighted to join in a poetry recitation competition to be held in our school. But I feel pu
15、zzled about how to make a good preparation for it. So Im writing to consult you about something relevant to it.我非常高兴参加在我们学校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛。但如何做好准备，我感到困惑。所以我写信是想咨询您一些与之相关的事情。吸引阅卷人篇中句1First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?首先，课程什么时候开始，每周有多少课时？2As for the money you char
16、ge, Im wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? 关于你收取的费用，我想知道它是否包含了参观所列景点的入场费？吸引阅卷人结尾句1Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. 我期待着尽快收到您的来信。2Id appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. 如果您能在方便的时候尽早回复，我将不胜感激。2021秦皇岛高三质检假定
17、你是李华，你的英国朋友Terry一行人要来你市体验元宵节，她请你帮他们预订酒店。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，要点如下：1表示欢迎；2询问到达时间；3询问具体要求(价位、房间数等)。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考范文：Dear Terry，Im delighted to learn that you will taste the Lantern Festival in our city. Please give me some detailed information about your schedule, so I can reserve a hotel fo
18、r you in advance.Firstly, when will your flight arrive at the airport? Besides，prices of a hotel room range from $399 to $999，so which kind of rooms do you prefer？And more importantly，how many rooms do you exactly need？Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.Looking
19、 forward to your early coming.Yours，Li Hua2021山东省实验中学一模临近毕业，你的英语老师布置了一篇作文，请以“My Career Plan”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括： 1.你的专业选择和职业规划； 2.陈述你的理由。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。My Career Plan_参考答案：My Career Plan In my plan, after graduating, I will start my career as a teacher in my hometown. So far, I think tea
20、cher is the most suitable job for me since I am not sensitive about either business or government affairs. Most importantly, I am quite sure about my favor and patience towards young people. I enjoy staying with those youthful lives. Id like to be a companion to them. I really hope that I can become
21、 an excellent teacher. This is my career plan.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。2021辽宁省名校联盟3月联考 I worked from the time when I was four and raised seven children, all of them college graduates. It seemed Id done everything Id ever wanted to do in my life, but I had one regret. I was born in 1898,
22、the oldest of five kids. Papa couldnt spare me to go to school, so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old. Everywhere I went, I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who even cant read the alphabet(字母表). People cheat you out of wages. They sell you a ticket to one ci
23、ty, take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else. By 1928, Id been wandering(漂泊) for nine years. I met a woman named Elzenia. We fell in love, married and moved to Dallas, where I got workfixing roads for the city. When Amelia, the oldest of our seven children, first went to school, I too
24、k my wife aside. “Elzenia，” I said. “I dont want the kids to know I cant read or write.” In 1938, one day my boss called me in. “George，” he said, “no one knows those machines like you do. Id like to promote you.” But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said, “Fill out this application and
25、 well get you a raise.” I couldnt admit the truth. I thanked him and walked out of his office. I did stay right where I was, until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire. But I didnt stop working. For the next 25 years, I lived a happy life, but it still seemed to me like something was missing. One
26、day, a young fellow handed me a piece of paper. Its information about adult education classes, where people can learn to read and write. Now Im 98. I thought of my friends and neighbors and what they might think if they found out I couldnt read. After all these years, my secret would be out. But all
27、 my life Ive wanted to read. It was high time for action. 参考答案： The young man drove me to an old building. I knew it wellit was where all my children had gone to school. I looked into the classroom to get a look at who I would be going to school with the next day. The students all looked like babies
28、 to me. There was a lady in her fifties but most of the rest were in their twenties and thirties. I went back to the school the next day. Id been inside the building so many times before with my children. That old building looked the same, and it smelled the same. But this time it was different beca
29、use this time it was going to be my school. First came learning the alphabet, then words. Three months later, I could read something. It was not very exciting, but I loved it. Im still going to school. I didnt stop there. After all, now I know why Im here. Im here to learn. Im here to tell the students its never too late to learn.
