1、 in 如何决胜中考英语书面表达如何决胜中考英语书面表达 1谢谢观赏2019-6-17Love at first sight ?2谢谢观赏2019-6-17Love at first sight ?3谢谢观赏2019-6-17Learning goals what makes your writing successful； types of writing styles in Zhongkao, Suzhou, from 2014-2018; what should be included in your writing; how to organize your ideas in writ
2、ing; how to improve your language. 4谢谢观赏2019-6-17What makes your writing successful 5谢谢观赏2019-6-17苏州市中考英语书面表达评分细则苏州市中考英语书面表达评分细则1. 本题总分本题总分2020分，按分，按5 5个档次加分。个档次加分。2. 2. 评分时，先根据文章的评分时，先根据文章的内容内容和和语言语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3. 3. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：评分时，应注意的
3、主要内容为：内容要点内容要点、应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的数量的数量和准确性、上下文的和准确性、上下文的连贯连贯以及以及语言语言的的得体性得体性。4. 4. 拼写与标点符号是语言的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度拼写与标点符号是语言的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5. 5. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。6谢谢观赏2019-6-17各档次给分范围和要求各档次给分范围和要求第五档（第五档（20-1720-17分）：分）：能写明全
4、部要点；基本无语法和习惯用法错误，并有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，行文连贯，语言流畅。第四档（第四档（16-1316-13分）：分）：能写明全部或大部分要点；行文基本连贯，语言比较流畅，但有少量语法和习惯用法错误。第三档（第三档（12-912-9分）分）：能写明全部或大部分要点；语言表达虽有一些错误或不太符合英文表达习惯，但能传达基本要义。（12分为及格分）第二档（第二档（8-58-5分）分）：能写明基本要点，但行文不够连贯；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。第一档（第一档（4-04-0）：）：只写出一、二个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子可读。7谢谢观赏2019-6-17一篇好文的评判标准一篇好文
5、的评判标准Assessment of a successful essayStructure结构结构Is the essay _ into parts? Content 内容内容Are all the details _?Is everything _ the point? Language 语言语言Does the writer use any _ words? Are there any _&_ mistakes?Is there any_ and _ vocabulary?Are there any _ sentence _?Handwriting书写书写Is your _legible
6、 and beautiful? 8谢谢观赏2019-6-17Things that make your writing successfulStructure结构结构The essay is into parts. Content 内容内容All the details/key points are . Everything is the point. Language语言语言Use of linking words. No grammar or spelling mistakes.Use of advanced and varied vocabulary.Complicated senten
7、ce patterns.Handwriting书写书写Legible and beautiful handwriting. 一篇好文的评判标准一篇好文的评判标准dividedcoveredto 9谢谢观赏2019-6-17Conclusion: A successful composition should include: 结构 _; 内容（要点）_; 围绕 _; 词汇_; 句型 _; 语言_; 书写_.合理合理齐全齐全主题主题多样多样丰富丰富流畅流畅漂亮漂亮10谢谢观赏2019-6-17Types of writing styles and themes/topics in Zhongka
8、o, Suzhou, from 2014-2018 近年苏州市中考英语书面表达体裁及主题近年苏州市中考英语书面表达体裁及主题11谢谢观赏2019-6-17Common writing styles in Zhongkao, Suzhou苏州市中考英语书面表达常见体裁苏州市中考英语书面表达常见体裁 A reply to an email 电子邮件的回信；电子邮件的回信； An introduction to介绍词；介绍词； A report of a survey on a certain topic 调查报告调查报告 Etc. 12谢谢观赏2019-6-17Common topics in Z
9、hongkao, Suzhou, from 2014-2018苏州市中考英语书面表达常见话题苏州市中考英语书面表达常见话题 Chinese culture中国文化 School life学校生活 Tourist attractions热门景点 Sports activities体育运动 Influences of the Internet网络影响等13谢谢观赏2019-6-172018年苏州市中考英语书面表达 现在，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化。假定你是苏华，你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷，他想在中秋期间来中国看看。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。14谢谢
10、观赏2019-6-17To: suhua From: Subject: Chinese cultureDear Su Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. As a fan of Chinese culture, Im thinking about going to China during the Mid-autumn Festival. Would you please tell me the following things? How do you usually celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival? Which c
11、ity in China is most worth visiting? Why? What is the best way to travel between cities in China? What gift can I buy for my friends? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Ryan15谢谢观赏2019-6-17注意：1词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Ryan, Im gla
12、d to hear youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.All the best,Su Hua16谢谢观赏2019-6-17 假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。2017年
13、苏州市中考英语书面表达年苏州市中考英语书面表达17谢谢观赏2019-6-17To: suhua From: davidsmith Britain. comSubject: School lifeDear Su Hua， Glad to hear youre graduating from junior high. Im interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things? What do you like best abo
14、ut your school life? Whats the biggest problem as a junior student? Who has helped you most? And why? Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not? I look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best，David18谢谢观赏2019-6-17注意：1词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。D
15、ear David, Thank you so much for your email. Im very happy to tell you about my school life. How about your school life? Write to me soon. Best wishes,Su Hua19谢谢观赏2019-6-17 上海迪斯尼乐园于今年上海迪斯尼乐园于今年6月月16日正式开放，日正式开放，许多孩子打算前往游玩假如你是一名乐许多孩子打算前往游玩假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他提示
16、，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。们文明游园。2016年苏州市中考英语书面表达年苏州市中考英语书面表达20谢谢观赏2019-6-17上海东部，地铁可达。上海东部，地铁可达。由由6个主题公园组成。个主题公园组成。参加活动，欣赏表演，参加活动，欣赏表演，购买礼物，观看烟火。购买礼物，观看烟火。文明游园文明游园不扔垃圾，保持整洁不扔垃圾，保持整洁考试自拟（至少考试自拟（至少2点）点）21谢谢观赏2019-6-17注意：1词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇：
17、theme n主题； firework n烟火 Good morning，children! As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland，Id like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it The park is worth your visitI hope you will have fun22谢谢观赏2019-6-172015年苏州市中考英语书面表达年苏州市中考英语书面表达 为了配合为了配合“足球进校园足球进校园”活动，你们班活动，你们班开展了一次主题
18、班会。请你以足球迷的身开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。梦想。 23谢谢观赏2019-6-17常常 识识历史悠久，深受喜爱历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯世界杯4年举行一次年举行一次好好 处处男生女生皆可参加男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神利于培养团队精神考生自拟考生自拟(至少至少1点点)偶偶 像像梅西，有足球天赋梅西，有足球天赋梦梦 想想考生自拟考生自拟(至少至少1点点)24谢谢观赏2019-6-17注意：1词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总
19、词数； 2短文中包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西 MessiDear classmates, Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. 25谢谢观赏2019-6-17 2014年苏州市中考英语书年苏州市中考英语书面表达面表达书面表达（共1题；满分20分） 假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园高效课堂”活动，最近以“学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案?”为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成,但许多学生反
20、对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点以“Think before you search online” 为题用英语写一篇短文。26谢谢观赏2019-6-17注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，不要遂词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺；3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Think before you search onlineSome students now have a new use for the Internet helping them with their homework. But different pe
21、ople have different ideas about it._27谢谢观赏2019-6-17练一练：练一练： 找出苏州市中考英语近五年书面表达的体找出苏州市中考英语近五年书面表达的体裁及话题裁及话题 （2014-2018）：）： Year 2014: Writing style: _ Theme: _ Year 2015: Writing style: _ Theme: _ Year 2016: Writing style: _ Theme: _An introduction to footballFootballA survey reportOnline influencesAn
22、introduction to DisneylandAn introduction &Visiting rules28谢谢观赏2019-6-17练一练：练一练： 找出苏州市中考英语近五年书面表达的体找出苏州市中考英语近五年书面表达的体裁及话题裁及话题 （2014-2018）：）： Year 2017: Writing style: _ Theme: _ Year 2018: Writing style: _ Theme: _A reply toan emailSchool lifeA reply toan emailChinese culture29谢谢观赏2019-6-17What shou
23、ld be included in your writing文章包含哪些内容文章包含哪些内容30谢谢观赏2019-6-17What should be included in your writingMain/ Key points about the theme/ topic.技巧：技巧： 表格内所列要点表格内所列要点 31谢谢观赏2019-6-17How to organize your ideas in your writing32谢谢观赏2019-6-17How to organize your ideas in your writingTip 1: Divide your writi
24、ng into proper parts. 合理分段。合理分段。Tip 2: Use transition words to make your writing coherent. 使用过渡词使文章连贯、通顺。使用过渡词使文章连贯、通顺。33谢谢观赏2019-6-17Common transition words: 常见过渡词常见过渡词 表时间表时间 time: when; while, before, not until, as soon as, the moment 表并列：表并列：and, or 表条件：表条件：if, unless 表因果表因果 cause and effect : b
25、ecause/as, so, therefore, since/ now that, for34谢谢观赏2019-6-17Common transition words: 常见过渡词常见过渡词 表让步表让步 concession: although; though 表转折表转折 adversative relation: however, but, though 表比较表比较 comparison: better than, as well as, 表结论表结论 conclusion: In conclusion, in a word, to put it in a nut shell35谢谢
26、观赏2019-6-17How to improve your language36谢谢观赏2019-6-17How to improve your language Tip 1： Avoid spelling mistakes 避免拼写错误避免拼写错误 Tip 2: Avoid grammar mistakes 避免语法错误避免语法错误 Tip 3：Use non-finite verbs 使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词 Tip 4：Use as many clauses as possible 使用从句使用从句37谢谢观赏2019-6-17Avoid spelling mistakesCorr
27、ect spellings: interesting; habit; chose; convenient; quite; present remember; impolite history; culture true; advantage38谢谢观赏2019-6-17Avoid grammar mistakesCorrect sentences:1. There are many people celebrating the Spring Festival in China. 2. Joining a football club is really interesting.3. Having
28、 sports not only keeps me healthy but also helps me (to) relax myself. 39谢谢观赏2019-6-17Avoid grammar mistakesCorrect sentences:4. Only by doing this from now on can we protect the environment. 5. With the development of modern technology, we ought to challenge our ability to make money for our future
29、 life. As modern technology develops, we40谢谢观赏2019-6-17Avoid grammar mistakesCorrect sentences:6. Mary loves music while her elder brother loves ball games.7. Ive made quite a few friends by joining in the club.8. China is a country which has a long history and rich culture. /41谢谢观赏2019-6-17Avoid gr
30、ammar mistakesCorrect sentences:9. I hope my school activities will be helpful to/ help me with my future life10. My teachers tells us many ways which can help/ to help us deal with a great deal of problems. 42谢谢观赏2019-6-17Use non-finite verbs使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词 不定式不定式 to do; to be doing. 分词分词 doing; hav
31、ing done; done 动名词动名词 doing; having done43谢谢观赏2019-6-17 1. 放学以后，同学们经常去操场打篮球。放学以后，同学们经常去操场打篮球。 After school, the students often go to the playground to play basketball. 2. 我经常听到有人唱这首歌。我经常听到有人唱这首歌。 I often hear the song sung.Use non-finite verbs使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词44谢谢观赏2019-6-17 3. 我生活中遇到了许多问题，最大的问题就是如何来我生
32、活中遇到了许多问题，最大的问题就是如何来获取学习和业余爱好之间的平衡。获取学习和业余爱好之间的平衡。 I come across/ have a lot of problems in my life, with how to achieve a balance between my study and hobbies being the biggest one. Use non-finite verbs使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词45谢谢观赏2019-6-174.你可以参与各种活动，比如欣赏音乐剧。你可以参与各种活动，比如欣赏音乐剧。 You can join in/ take part in
33、/ participate in many activities, such as enjoying musicals. Use non-finite verbs使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词46谢谢观赏2019-6-17Use as many clauses as possible 使用从句使用从句 1. 足球历史悠久，是深受全世界人民的喜爱的运动。足球历史悠久，是深受全世界人民的喜爱的运动。 Football, having a long history, is a sport which is popular among the people around the world. 47谢谢观
34、赏2019-6-17Use as many clauses as possible 使用从句使用从句 2. 无论何时只要我需要求助，我的英语老师会有无论何时只要我需要求助，我的英语老师会有求必应。求必应。 Whenever I am in need ( of help), my English teacher will come to me. 48谢谢观赏2019-6-17Use as many clauses as possible 使用从句使用从句 3.我喜欢我的学校生活是因为它精彩又有意义。我喜欢我的学校生活是因为它精彩又有意义。 I love my school life becaus
35、e it is not only wonderful but also meaningful. 49谢谢观赏2019-6-17Make better word choices 选择更好的词汇选择更好的词汇1. 迪斯尼乐园位于上海东部。迪斯尼乐园位于上海东部。 Disneyland is / is located / lies in the east of Shanghai. 2.中国有许多城市，但我最喜欢苏州。中国有许多城市，但我最喜欢苏州。 China has a lot of cities, among which I love Suzhou best/ Suzhou is my favo
36、rite. 50谢谢观赏2019-6-17Make better word choices 选择更好的词汇选择更好的词汇3.学生通过网络寻找作业答案变得越来越流行。学生通过网络寻找作业答案变得越来越流行。 Many students search the Internet for answers to their problems in homework is becoming more and more popular/ increasingly popular. 51谢谢观赏2019-6-17A possible version for Year 2017Dear David, Thank
37、 you so much for your email. Im very happy to tell you about my school life. I like the Football Club best because Ive made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, its an excellent chance to learn team spirit. 52谢谢观赏2019-6-17 However, Ive also met some problems over the three years. The b
38、iggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high. 53谢谢观赏2019-6-17 In all, I enjoy my school life because its colorful and meaningful. How abo
39、ut your school life? Write to me soon. Best wishes,Su Hua54谢谢观赏2019-6-17Dear Ryan, Im glad to hear youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. On that day, families get together and have a big dinner. We
40、eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. Its great.A possible version for Year 201855谢谢观赏2019-6-17 Therere many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Suzhou is most worth visiting because of its beautiful gardens. Also, its known as “a land of fish and rice”. Its convenient to travel between cities
41、in China. The best way is to take a high-speed train because its fast and easy. You can buy silk or tea for your friends.56谢谢观赏2019-6-17 I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.All the best,Su Hua57谢谢观赏2019-6-1758谢谢观赏2019-6-17Nothing is impossible to a willing heart!59谢谢观赏2019-6-17
