1、北京市部分区 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期末试题分类汇编书面表达书面表达专题专题北京市海淀区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末调研英语试题第四部分：书面表达（共一题，共第四部分：书面表达（共一题，共 15 分）分）45. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的美国笔友 Jim 对你校社团的近期活动非常感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封信，向他介绍你们社团为边远地区的学生提供在线课程的情况。具体内容包括：1. 该活动的目的；2. 该活动涉及的内容；3. 你参与该活动的感受。注意：1. 词数不少于 50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：在线课程 online coursesD
2、ear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua北京市丰台区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷43. 根据题目所提出的具体要求, 在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于 60。假设你是红星中学高一学生李华, 你的英国好友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣, 请你给他介绍一个对于中国人具有重要意义的传统节日。请你给他回复邮件, 内容包括1. 节日名称;2. 节日意义;3. 庆祝方式。注意开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。Dear Jim,I am glad to know that you are interested in traditional C
3、hinese festivals._YoursLi Hua北京市西城区 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期末测试题72. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。 你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体，计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.推荐的运动；2.推荐的理由。注意：1.词数不少于 50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua北京市东城区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷46. 假设你是红星中学的李华， 你的美国笔友 Jim 正在上海留学。 请根据他的邮件给他回信。Dear Li
4、Hua,Im doing well in Shanghai. This semester is almost over. I m considering traveling toBeijing during the winter vacation. I can stay in Beijing for three days. I want to visit one culturalheritage site in Beijing, but I havent decided where to go. Could you suggest one place?By the way，what is yo
5、ur plan for the winter vacation?Looking forward to seeing you in Beijing!Yours,Jim注意：1.词数不少于 60；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua北京市顺义区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷8 （20 分）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Eric 发来邮件，向你询问你和家人是如何欢度春节的。请参考以下提示给 Eric 回复邮件，并谈谈你对春节的感受。字数 50 个左右。由 B 件的开头和结尾已为你写好。 go to grandparents house
6、attach Fu to the front door talk about the past year make jiaozi watch fireworksDear Eric，I am glad that you are interested in Chinese Spring Festival. I will share my experiencesduring Spring Festival with you._I hope you will come to China someday and experience Spring Festival in person. I amlook
7、ing forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua参考答案北京市海淀区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末调研英语试题【答案】Dear Jim,How is it going? Im glad to know youre interested in the activities of our student clubs.Frankly, the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle schoolstudents in rural areas in China
8、.Our courses cover a wide variety, including Chinese, English,math, physics, history, and so on. We also organize some students to answer questions onlineevery Saturday afternoon. I have been part of this activity since the beginning of the term andenjoy it a lot. Hearing the studentssincere words o
9、f appreciation, I feel the joy of helping others.Do you have anything similar in your school? Write back and share with me!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友 Jim 写封信，介绍社团为边远地区的学生提供在线课程的情况。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时及少量现在完成时等。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 该活动的目的；2. 该活动涉
10、及的内容；3. 参与该活动的感受。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）online courses; help middle school students in rural areas; cover a wide variety; organize somestudents to answer questions online; be part of this activity; feel the joy of helping others第三步：连词成句1. Im glad to know youre interested in the activities of our student club
11、s.2. Frankly, the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle schoolstudents in rural areas in China.3. Our courses cover a wide variety, including Chinese, English, math, physics, history, and so on.4. We also organize some students to answer questions online every Satu
12、rday afternoon.5. I have been part of this activity since the beginning of the term and enjoy it a lot.6. Hearing the studentssincere words of appreciation, I feel the joy of helping others.7. Do you have anything similar in your school?8. Write back and share with me!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第
13、四步：连句成篇（衔接词）如：表并列补充关系：including 等连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型 1 Frankly, the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer tohelp middle school students in rural areas in China.（限制性定语从句的运用）高分句型 2 Hearing the studentssincere words of appreciation, I feel the joy of helpin
14、g others.（现在分词作状语）北京市丰台区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷【答案】Dear Jim,I am glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. I would like tointroduce one of them to you.Mid-autumn Festival, also known as Mooncake Festival, is held on the 15th day of the eighthmonth in the Chinese lunar
15、 calendar. On that day family members will try their best to go backhome and get together with their family. People usually have a big dinner. Of course mooncakesare a must.After dinner, people usually go outdoors to appreciate the moon and enjoy the beautifullanterns in the streets and parks. Mid-a
16、utumn Festival, a time of family reunion, is highly valuedby all the Chinese.Hope you can come and celebrate the festival with me someday.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。 要求考生给英国朋友 Jim 写信介绍一个中国的传统节日。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad delighted尽某人最大努力：try ones best do ones best通常：usually normally对感兴趣：be interested
17、in be keen on2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mid-autumn Festival, also known as Mooncake Festival, is held on the 15th day of theeighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.拓展句：Mid-autumn Festival, which is also known as Mooncake Festival, is held on the 15th dayof the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.【点睛】
18、 【高分句型 1】I am glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.（运用了 that 引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2 Mid-autumn Festival, a time of family reunion, is highly valued by all the Chinese.（运用了 a time of family reunion 作同位语）北京市西城区 2020-2021 学年高一英语上学期期末测试题【答案】Dear Jim,I am glad to learn that you
19、would like to exercise to keep fit. I believe running is the bestchoice. My reasons are as follows.First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increasethe bodys flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces therisk of diseas
20、es. Whats more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes onlya pair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule. Last but not least,running can improve ones mood and particularly provide relief from pain or tension. Therefore,you can also achieve ment
21、al well-being if you take up running as a hobby.All in all, Id like torecommend running as a sport that you can do regularly.Why not give it a try? Just put on your trainers and get started. Then keep going. Im sure youwill get a lot out of running.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是红星中
22、学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他想强身健体， 计划选择一项可以长期坚持的运动并向你征询建议。 请你给他回复邮件。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。内容包括：1.推荐的运动；2.推荐的理由。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）keep fit；as follows；benefits from；whats more；last but not least；take up；all in all第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少 3 句）1.First of all,
23、the physical benefits from running have long been recognized as it helps increase thebodys flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune system and reduces the riskof diseases.2. Whats more, running can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only a pair ofrunning shoes and
24、can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule.3. Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby.4. Why not give it a try?根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least2.表并列补充关系：What is more3.表因果关系： Therefore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连
25、词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】 高分句型 1 First of all, the physical benefits from running have long been recognized asit helps increase the bodys flow of blood and oxygen, which thus strengthens the immune systemand reduces the risk of diseases.句中含 as 引导的原因状语从句和 which 引导的非限制性定语从句。高分句型 2 Whats more, runni
26、ng can certainly become a long-term hobby, since it takes only apair of running shoes and can easily and flexibly be added to your schedule.句中含情态动词的被动语态和 since 引导的原因状语从句。高分句型 3 Therefore, you can also achieve mental well-being if you take up running as a hobby.句中含 if 引导的条件状语从句。北京市东城区 2020-2021 学年高一上
27、学期期末考试英语试卷【分析】高分句型一：He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man.译文：不到长城非好汉。分析：这句话使用 who 引导定语从句修饰 he。高分句型二： As for my winter vacation，Im planning to take part in an English winter camp，where I can improve my English with more practice.译文：至于我的寒假，我打算参加一个英语冬令营，在那里我可以通过更多的练习来提高我的英语水平。分析：这句话使用 wh
28、ere 引导非限制性定语从句。【解答】Dear Jim，Im so happy that we will meet in Beijing soon! Its a good idea to come to Beijing during thewinter vacation. I believe you will have a great time here!（写信目的）Since you are visiting a cultural heritage site， I suggest you go to the Great Wall. He whodoesnt reach the Great W
29、all is not a true man. 【高分句型一】The world famous ancientbuilding is sure to leave a deep impression on you and help you increase knowledge andappreciation of Chinas ancient cultural heritage.（建议）As for my winter vacation， Im planning to take part in an English winter camp， where I canimprove my Englis
30、h with more practice. 【高分句型二】When youre here， I hope I can talkwith you in English more fluently!（寒假计划）Yours，Li Hua【点评】开放类作文的特点1）文章扣题：描述有的放矢，突出主题；2）思维活跃：发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。3）内容健康充实：内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。北京市顺义区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷【分析】高分句型一Before the Spring Festival eve， we must attach
31、 Fu to the front door to recieve good luck.分析：句子里，动词不定式 to recieve good luck 作目的状语。翻译：除夕前，我们必须把福挂在前门，以获得好运。高分句型二On the eve of the festival， family members get together， talking about the past year andwatching the Spring Festival Gala in TV.分析： 句子里， 现在分词talking about the past year和watching the Spring
32、 Festival Gala in TV.作伴随状语。翻译：在春节前夕，家人聚在一起，谈论过去的一年，在电视上看春节联欢晚会。【解答】Dear Eric，I am glad that you are interested in Chinese Spring Festival. I will share my experiences duringSpring Festival with you.（点明书信主题）During the 15 days I often go to grandparents house with my parents. Before the SpringFestival
33、 eve， we must attach Fu to the front door to recieve good luck. 【高分句型一】 On theeve of the festival， family members get together， talking about the past year and watchingthe Spring Festival Gala in TV. 【高分句型二】Whats more， we also make jiaozi and watchfireworks.（介绍春节期间的活动）I hope you will come to China s
34、omeday and experience Spring Festival in person. I am lookingforward to your reply.（提出邀请）Yours，Li Hua【点评】书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语基础，发扬个性、关注环境的设题理念仍将是未来几年高考书面表达的基本思路。 试题设置均为半开放式，给考生一定提示的同时，也给考生提供了更为宽广的思维空间，使考生留有很大的自由发挥的余地， 这样更能全面和客观地考查考生的语言组织 和书面表达的能力。要写出一篇好的文章， 考生不仅要精炼地表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，要有自己独到的见解。
