1、英语写作-倡议书I. 范文赏析范文赏析 欣赏以下两篇范文，观察英语倡议书的写作模式及篇章结构，画出文中欣赏以下两篇范文，观察英语倡议书的写作模式及篇章结构，画出文中好的句式。好的句式。 (一一)Dear fellow students, There is a serious enon in our school that many students will crowd in the school store to buy snacks after each class and some students even eat snacks in class. Eating snacks is a
2、 bad habit and also a waste of money. In addition, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too much fat and sugar. Eating snacks imay lead to fatness and illness. Whats worse, some students throw the snack bags everywhere, which e that we shouldnt act like kids any more. We high school stud
3、ents should develoember that three regular meals a day as well as a balanced diet are necessary for us. Lets form good eating habits and say no to snacks. The Students Union (二二)Dear friends, Do you want to study in a beautiful camfortable to study in. To comind. First of all, dont litter about in o
4、ur school. Its smelly and attracts flies, you know. And we should ent by looking after flowers and trees around. Of course, dont yell or shout out so that we can study in a quiet environment. Its also suggested that we should reuse everything recyclable, which is money-saving and environmentally fri
5、endly. Finally, clean and remember there is no drinking or eating in the classrooms. Lets take action now and contribute to building a harmonious environment. Thank you. The Students Union July 1, 2015 II. 英语倡议书的结构：英语倡议书的结构：倡议书属于应用文的一种，由倡议书属于应用文的一种，由_、_、_、_、_五部分组成。常用五部分组成。常用_时或时或_时。题目常会给出标题、时。题目常会给出
6、标题、称呼、结尾、落款这四部分，考生只需完成正文即可。这类写作称呼、结尾、落款这四部分，考生只需完成正文即可。这类写作的正文包括倡议的的正文包括倡议的_、_以及以及_。 标题标题 称呼称呼 正文正文 结尾结尾 落款落款一般将来一般将来一般现在一般现在目的目的 内容内容 呼吁呼吁 1.用一句话引出倡议目的，并以这句话作为文章的开头句，达到用一句话引出倡议目的，并以这句话作为文章的开头句，达到开篇点题的作用。如：开篇点题的作用。如： 为了实行我们环保的义务，我们应该养成以下的环保习惯。为了实行我们环保的义务，我们应该养成以下的环保习惯。 为了帮助外来务工人员子女，我们认为政府应该采取措施，将更为了
7、帮助外来务工人员子女，我们认为政府应该采取措施，将更多资金投入到改善学校现状中。多资金投入到改善学校现状中。In order to fulfill our resent, we are supposed to follow the following ecological codes. In order to/ To offer heligrant kids/ For the igrant kids, we think our government should take measures tooney into improving the present situation of the s
8、chools. 1.用一句话引出倡议目的，并以这句话作为文章的开头句，达到用一句话引出倡议目的，并以这句话作为文章的开头句，达到开篇点题的作用。如：开篇点题的作用。如： 为了更好地使用旧书，我倡议大家捐出自己的旧课本和参考书给为了更好地使用旧书，我倡议大家捐出自己的旧课本和参考书给那些有需要的人。那些有需要的人。In order to make full use of the second hand books, I appeal to all of us to donate our used textbooks and reference books to those in need.we
9、should do we are supposed to doappeal to IV. 即学即练即学即练 2.用三句话分别谈谈倡议的内容。用三句话分别谈谈倡议的内容。 (1)有人建议我们坚持走路上学的习惯。有人建议我们坚持走路上学的习惯。 It is suggested/advised that we stick to the habit of walking to school. (2) 我们应该每天至少吃五种水果和青菜。我们应该每天至少吃五种水果和青菜。 We are required to eat at least five kinds of fruits and vegetables
10、 a day. (3)如果我们循环利用资源并通过捡起垃圾、关灯和关水龙头来爱护校园的如果我们循环利用资源并通过捡起垃圾、关灯和关水龙头来爱护校园的每一寸土地，那就更好了。每一寸土地，那就更好了。 It would be better if we recycle everything recyclable and cherish our schools environment by picking up any litter and turning off the taps and the lights. IV. 即学即练即学即练 2.用三句话分别谈谈倡议的内容。用三句话分别谈谈倡议的内容。 (
11、1)我们应该选择一个既健康又环保的旅游方式，那就是骑车。我们应该选择一个既健康又环保的旅游方式，那就是骑车。 We are suentally friendly way of travelling, that is, bicycle riding. (2) 如果当地的学生能帮忙集资或者给外来务工人员子女捐书，如果当地的学生能帮忙集资或者给外来务工人员子女捐书， 那就是更好那就是更好了。了。 it would be better if the local students heloney or donate books to the migrant kids.(3) 是我们从我做起，通过骑自行车
12、来减少交通压力的时候了。是我们从我做起，通过骑自行车来减少交通压力的时候了。it is high time that we started/ should start from ourselves and reduced / reduce transportation pressure by riding a bike. 参考范文参考范文 Dear friends, Do you want to live in a beautiful world? To fulfill our obligation to ent, we are suoreover, it would be a good id
13、ea if we recycle everything recyclable and cherish our schools environment by e that we should contribute to the other, the earth. Thank you! The Students Union V. HomeworkV. HomeworkDear students, Do you want to keeake use of an extra hour in the morning to im insisting on doing exercises, you are
14、exore, it is suggested that you make sure that you have enough sleee that you took actions to be responsible for your health. The Students Union 学生习学生习作一作一Hello,everybody, I am Lihua. I am a volunteer in the Student Union. We hoe students who want to study or read but havent books. So, we wish have
15、more and more students join us. Thank you!Li HuaDear fellow students,Students Unionsecondhand books/ used bookstextbooks/notebooks/magazines此处give away做主语，需用。为了语言的多样性，可以用donate 来替换 important为元音开头，用-do not have books中式英语Dear fellow students,Hello,everybody, I am Lihua. I am a volunteer in the Student
16、s Union. We hoe students who want to study or read but dont have books. So, we wish more and more students can join us. Thank you! LiHua介绍自己，口头需要，介绍自己，口头需要，书面可省略书面可省略we hope 放在句首不妥，放在句首不妥，放在末段更合适放在末段更合适正式的倡议信中，不能正式的倡议信中，不能出现这样的段落出现这样的段落捐书的意义捐书的意义Dear fellow students,Hello,everybody, I am Lihua. I am
17、 a volunteer in the Students Union. _ ._We think donating the secondhand books is an ime students who want to study or read but dont have books. So, we wish more and more students can join us. We hope the students can give away all the used books to the students who need it, such as textbooks, noteb
18、ooks.Thank you! LiHua介绍自己，口头需要，介绍自己，口头需要，书面可省略。书面可省略。交代背景？交代背景？捐书的意义捐书的意义 语篇结构调整语篇结构调整倡议者的决心和希望倡议者的决心和希望或写出某种建议或写出某种建议？发出什么倡议？发出什么倡议？ 不久我们即将告别高中，成为大学新生。 Soon we are going to say farewell to middle school and become freshmen in universities. 不久我们即将参加高考，高中毕业。 Soon we will attend the College Entrance E
19、xamination and graduate from the high school. 1.用一句话引出倡议目的，并以这句话作为文章的开头句，达到用一句话引出倡议目的，并以这句话作为文章的开头句，达到开篇点题的作用。如：开篇点题的作用。如： 为了更好地使用旧书，我倡议大家捐出自己的旧课本和参考书给为了更好地使用旧书，我倡议大家捐出自己的旧课本和参考书给那些有需要的人。那些有需要的人。In order to make full use of the second hand books, I appeal to all of us to donate our used textbooks an
20、d reference books to those in need.we should do we are supposed to doappeal to sb call on sb to do sth urge that advocateDear fellow students, Hello,everybody, I am Lihua. I am a volunteer in the Students Union. Soon we are going to say farewell to middle school and become freshmen in order to make
21、full use of the second hand books, I ae students who want to study or read but dont have books. So, we wish more and more students can join us. We hope the students can give away all the used books to the students who need it, such as textbooks, notebooks. Thank you! LiHua Hello,everybody, I am Lihu
22、a. I am a volunteer in the Students Union. Hello,everybody, I am Lihua, a volunteer in the Students Union. We think donating the secondhand books is an ime students who want to study or read but dont have books. (非限制性定语从句提升) Donating the secondhand books is an im .捐书的意义： 这样做很重要。这样做很重要。 It is of grea
23、t significance for us to do so . 不但能给有需要的人带来温暖，又能给二手书以新生命。不但能给有需要的人带来温暖，又能给二手书以新生命。 Not only can we bring warmth to ore iment-friendly .3.用一句话引出呼吁的内容。 It is high time that we should contribute to the other, the earth. 是我们人人都为地球母亲尽一份绵薄之力。让我们携手采取行动。 Lets take actions right now hand in hand.毕竟，即使是一个小小的
24、行动也会对世界产生巨大的影响。 After all, even a small kind action can make a great difference to the world. Dear fellow students, Soon we are going to bid farewell to middle school and become freshmen in universities. How to deal with loads of used reference books? I urge that after the national entrance examination, we collect the books and donate them to those who need them. In doing so, we can not only bring warmth to those in need, but also give the second hand books a new life, which is far more environment-friendly than throwing them into the dustbins. Lets act hand in hand! Li Hua
