1、读后续写-动作，情绪，心理续写语法高级画面感细节丰富紧扣主题生动抒发情感第一部分续写之动作描写第1部分续写之动作描写上车告诉司机目的地上车拦下车扔肉扔出去瞄准狼拿出肉动作链句型1告诉司机目的地上车拦下车She hailed a taxi , got into it and told the driver her destination扔出去瞄准狼拿出肉动作链句型1He pulled out the meat , aimed at the wolf and threw it straight to the fierce animal.句型1：A,B and C抱住儿子冲向前，蹲下来，一把抱住！S
2、he dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms. 动作链 构造练习 2发言他看了一眼奖杯，深呼一口气，说到：“感谢老师”She glanced at the trophy, took a deep breath and said, “ Thank you , teacher”第1部分续写之动作描写动作链 句型2战争结束后，战士回到家中却发现老婆跟别人跑了。Having fought in the war for years, the soldier returned to his home, only to fi
3、nd his wife had gone with someone else.Having done, S+V+O . 动作链 句型2排了三个小时的队伍，他被告知票被卖完了。He queued for 3 hours, and was told that the tickets had been sold out.Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.动作链 句型2哈里收到光轮2000后，哈里高兴的不知所措。Harry receiving the Nimbus 2000 and was
4、 happy that he was at a loss what to do.Having received the Nimbus 2000,Harry was delighted that he was at a loss what to do.第1部分续写之动作描写动作面：语言肢体面部他面带杀气，振臂一挥，大喊：“放箭”构造 动作面Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from withinDoing, 主语+ 谓语， doing他们站在空旷的路边 (
5、肢体)，仰望天空（面部），感受着珍贵的平静（心理）。构造 动作面He was overwhelmed with joy,singing and dancing in the rain主语+ 谓语， doing and doing 他欣喜若狂(心理)，在雨中又唱(面部)又跳(肢体)。构造 动作面Encouraged by the teachers words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering,” I volunteer.”Done, S+ V, doing sth. 被老师的话鼓舞（心理），Lucy举起了手（肢体），小声说（语言），“我来。”构造 动作面With
6、 his arms dropping, Beibei sat beside the pool, wondering whether he was white or black.独立主格（with结构）, S+ V, doing sth. 贝贝坐在泳池边，双臂低垂，思考自己是白熊猫还是黑熊猫。第二部分续写之情绪描写心理Vs 情绪心理心理内隐 有内容情绪外显无内容情绪层次的描写内层直抒胸臆表层眉目传情外层寄情于景内层：直抒胸臆名词形容词副词介词短语01020304内层：直抒胸臆 名词句式Sb felt a great sense of + 情绪 + welling up in sbs heart
7、and surging through sbSunny 感到一股强烈的恐惧在她心中升腾，奔涌Sunny felt a great sense of + horror + welling up in sbs heart and surging through sb某人感到一股强烈的在内心升腾，奔涌内层：直抒胸臆 名词句式Be full of gloom and doom沮丧悲观（押尾韵）A sense of impending doom came upon all of us我们所有人都有一种大难临头的感觉。a mood of doom and discouragement悲观泄气的情绪0输入处
8、理输出外界刺激行为心理/情绪内层：直抒胸臆 名词句式+外界刺激Seeing an ax piercing through the door, Sunny felt a great sense of + horror + welling up in sbs heart and surging through her.A great sense of= a mixture of A and B看到一把斧子 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的在内心升腾，奔涌第三部分续写之心理描写看到Seeing sth,某人感觉好像sb felt as if它在.it had been doing, 并且说：“”And s
9、aying, “_”心理描写句型Seeing the alphabet, I felt as if it had been laughing at me and saying, ” You are too old to study”.98岁的我学读写字母表（the alphabet）受挫，你太老了！废柴少年逆袭Seeing the javelin, I felt as if it had been encouraging at me and saying, “You ve found your talent and Ive found you”看到标枪，我感觉它在鼓励我，并且说：“你找到了天赋
10、， 我找到了你”2017年 浙江高考续写：帐篷Seeing the tent, I felt as if it had been sighing and saying, “I want to experience the outside world”看到帐篷，我感觉它在叹气，并且说：“我想体验一下，外面的世界”2016年 浙江高考续写：女子孤身陷入丛林Seeing the helicopter, Jane felt as if it had been comforting her with its thunderous noise, “ Your waiting pays off.”看到远处的直升机，Jane感觉它在用它的轰鸣声安慰自己，并且说：“你的等待是值得的”感谢您的观看！开学啦！开学啦！
