1、【版本：人教册别：必修二】 Reading for Writing: Write a speech Learning Objectivesu 语言目标： 1）理解、记忆并运用重要的词块，如treasure、a sense of satisfaction等; 2）理解话语标记在演讲中的作用：有助于演讲的连贯性与条理性； 3）引导学生加深对文章结构的理解； 4）关注常见修辞手法在表达中的重要作用。u 能力目标： 1）分析和把握演讲的语言特征； 2）能够就音乐在人们生活中的积极作用，写一篇比较有感染力的演讲稿。u 情感目标：理解和体会音乐给人们带来的积极影响。contentsLeading-inWr
2、itingReadingAssignmentIIIILeading-in Suppose you are going to attend China Daily “21st Century Cup” National English Speaking Competition, whose theme is “the power of music over words”. Please write a speech.A competitionReading1. share with2. face a time3. get through those hard times4. a sense of
3、 satisfaction5. words of encouragement6. the deepest part of my being7. go through various periods8. treasure1. Read and Find (words, lexical chunks, collocation&discourse markers)1 share with2 face a time3 get through those hard times4 a sense of satisfaction5 words of encouragement6the deepest par
4、t of my being7go through various periods8treasureWords and lexical chunks分享分享经历经历的时光的时光度过那些艰难的日子度过那些艰难的日子满足感满足感鼓励的话鼓励的话心灵心灵/ /内心内心深处深处经历经历的时光的时光珍惜珍惜voice ones views oncomfort/gratitudebe grateful forfeelingssurvive 熬过to tell to others your ideastwo years ago 两年前两年前and thus 因此因此then one day 后来后来有一天有一
5、天sothat 如此如此以至于以至于from then on 从此之后从此之后it is true 的确如此的确如此moreover 不仅如此不仅如此；而且；而且These discourse markers are used to show how the text is connected and organized.1. Read and Find (words, lexical chunks, collocation&discourse markers)a. Its an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how
6、music has had an impact on my life. 非常非常荣幸荣幸来到来到在这里在这里与大家与大家分享音乐是如何影响分享音乐是如何影响了我的人生。了我的人生。Lexical chunks (collocation) I feel it an honour to I feel honoured to 如何表达如何表达“很荣幸做某事、有幸做某事很荣幸做某事、有幸做某事”? Music is the language of the mind. 音乐是心灵的语言语言。b. Music is the medicine of the mind. 音乐是心灵的良药良药。Lexical
7、chunks (collocation)Paragraphthe contextPara. 1Para. 2 & 3 Para. 4greeting and self-introductiontopic of the speechthe experience with music the feelings that music gives youconclusion of the speechRead and ThinkStructureA Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all
8、? B “Music is the medicine of the mind.” C Music gave me. D .it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. E It (Music) was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.F It became my best friend.（rhetorical question） (quote)(repetition)(simile)（metaphor） (personificati
9、on)2. Read and Think (structure & rhetorical devices)How to write a speech?Language featuresStructureUseful expressions(rhetorical question） (quote)(repetition)(simile)(metaphor）(personification)two years ago 两年前两年前and thus 因此因此then one day 后来有一天后来有一天sothat 如此如此以至于以至于from then on 从此之后从此之后it is true
10、的确如此的确如此moreover 不仅如此不仅如此；而且；而且share with分享分享face a time经历经历的的时光时光get through those hard times度过那些艰难的度过那些艰难的日子日子a sense of satisfaction满足感满足感words of encouragement鼓励的话鼓励的话the deepest part of my being心灵心灵/ /内心内心深处深处go through various periods经历经历的的时光时光treasure珍惜珍惜Writing Suppose you are going to atten
11、d China Daily “21st Century Cup” National English Speaking Competition, whose theme is “the power of music over words”. Please write a speech.A competition Two years ago and thus Then one day from then on truly moreover1. I feel it a great honor to voice my views on2. gone through some periods3. wor
12、ds of comfort4. the deepest part of my being5. music is the language of the mind6. a sense of satisfaction7. be grateful for8. survive those hard times9. treasure3. Reading for Writing (A Draft)Practise rhetorical devices l Realizing that she was gone forever made me sad. I felt I was surrounded by
13、an ocean of sadness.1. You may have gone through some periods when words fail you. (rhetorical question) Have you ever gone through some periods when words fail you?2. Realizing that she was gone forever made me sad. (metaphor)l Realizing that she was gone forever made me so sad that I felt I was su
14、rrounded by an ocean of sadness.知道她走了，永远地走了，我很悲伤，知道她走了，永远地走了，我很悲伤，感觉自己沉浸在悲伤的海洋里感觉自己沉浸在悲伤的海洋里。 Then one day, I accidentally heard a piece of classic music by Eric Satie called “Gymnopdie No 1”, which is as gentle as my grandmothers whispering words of comfort to the deepest part of my being. Practise
15、 rhetorical devices 3. Then one day, I accidentally heard a piece of classic music by Eric Satie called “Gymnopdie No 1, which is very gentle. (simile) 后来后来有一天，我偶然听到了有一天，我偶然听到了Eric Satie的的古典音古典音乐乐“Gymnopdie No 1”。它的曲调非常温柔，它的曲调非常温柔，就像就像奶奶奶奶在我耳旁呢喃，抚慰我的心灵。在我耳旁呢喃，抚慰我的心灵。Sample Writing Hello！My name is D
16、avid, and I feel it a great honor to voice my views on the power of music over words. Have you ever gone through some periods when words fail you? (rhetorical question) Two years ago, my beloved grandmother passed away. Realizing that she was gone forever made me so sad that I felt I was surrounded
17、by an ocean of sadness. (metaphor) I tried to express my sadness, but my throat was tight (喉咙哽咽) and thus I couldnt form the words. Sample Writing Then one day, I accidentally heard a piece of classic music by Eric Satie called “Gymnopdie No 1”, which was as gentle as my grandmothers whispering word
18、s of comfort to the deepest part of my being. (simile) So from then on I began to listen to music because I realized music is the language of the mind. Just as Hans Christina Andersen once said, “Where words fail, music speaks.” (quote) Music can truly describe what we are feeling deep inside.Sample
19、 Writing Music helps me remember how much I miss my grandmother. Music helps me remember all the great times we had and gives me a sense of satisfaction. Music also helps me be grateful for that time together. Moreover, music eventually helps me (repetition) survive those hard times. If you struggle to find the words to help you, music can be your guide and friend (personification). So lets treasure the expressive power of music! Thank you!Assignment 1. Read and recite Davids speech emotionally.*2. Write another speech on “how music impact your life”. (optional)
