1、 How to improve your compositionGuessing game She is from China.She looks smart.She has a talent for singing.She is good at English.Although she was born in post 1980,We all like her.She is our English teacher.She gets on well with students.Miss is an English teacher,who looks smart.Not only does sh
2、e have a talent for singing,but also she is good at English.She gets on with students so well that we all like her.Such()A good writingstructureseveral partstopic sentencecontentall points coveredlanguage wordsphrasessentencesvariationStrategies for improving writing For variation of words and phras
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