1、B2U5 Reading for writingMusic appreciationClassical musicPop musicChinese traditional musicVirtual choirWhat kinds of music do you like?ease emotional and physical painbring happiness and powergive hope and a sense of satisfactionheal/touch our soulhelp relieve our pressure How can music help us and
2、 change our life?Music appreciationReading for structure of a speechBeginning(para )Body(para )Conclusion(para )12-34-5Reading for detailed information1.Good morning.My name is Sarah Williams.Its an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.Greet the
3、 audienceIntroduce yourself Propose the topicBeginning(para 1)4.Of course,I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did.At the same time,we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone.During those times,music can help you in the same way that it helped me.I
4、 hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.5.Thank you!Express your hope and adviceThank the audiences listeningConclusion(para 4-5)Reading for detailed informationWriting order:timeBody(para 2)personal experience Reading for detailed informationgo through
5、a medical treatment listen to some music,“Happy”make me feel better Turning pointhelp me recover listen to music all the timeResult had a serious disease body ache felt lonely and discouragedA difficult timeThen one dayFrom then on Two years ago1 1(A)Have you ever faced a time when things looked dar
6、k and you had no hope at all?A rA rhetorical questionhetorical question（设问）（设问）2 2(B)John A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”A A quote（引用）Reading for detailed informationBody(para 2)personal experience Writing order:timeA difficult time The turning pointThe resultl Rhetorical question:
7、Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all?l A quote:John A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”Reading for detailed informationLanguage features：rhetorical devicesBody(para 3)personal Feelings Impact of music:happiness,strength,reliefhope and satisfacti
8、on company and encouragement Reading for detailed informationLanguage features：rhetorical devices3 3(C)Music gave me happiness.(C)Music gave me strength and brought me relief.(C)Moreover,music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.Repitition(重复)4 4(F)It became my best friend.It spoke words of enc
9、ouragement to the deepest part of my being.Personification(拟人)simile(明喻)Metaphor(隐喻)A v.like/as B.A B.5 5(D).it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.6 6(E)It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.rhetorical devicesBody(para 3)personal Feelings Impact of
10、music:Language features：happiness,strength,reliefhope and satisfaction company and encouragement rhetorical devicesl Repitition:Music gave,music gave,music gavel Personification:It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement l Simile:it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.l Metapho
11、r:It was the rockReading for detailed informationRhetorical devices:quote,repetition,rhetorical question,simile,metaphor,personificationReading for retellingWriting tip 1:Appropriate structure Writing tip 2:Suitable personal experienceWriting tip 3:Proper rhetorical devicesWriting tip 1:Appropriate
12、structure Writing tip 2:Suitable personal experienceWriting tip 3:Proper rhetorical devicesSuppose you were Sarah,you wanted to deliver a speech about music.Please rewrite the speech and share it with your classmates.Reading for mini-writing Work in groups and discuss more expression of rhetorical d
13、evices for music.SimilerepetitionMetaphor:personificationRhetorical questionMusic can be my friend/companionMusic is sunshine;Music is like a special language that everyone can understand music has these parts-rhythm,melody and harmony-just like our lives.Music comforts me a lot;music inspires to mo
14、ve on;Music encourages me to relax my mindMusic helps me to face,helps me to overcome,helps me to gain the joy of Have you ever heard a piece of music that recalled your memory?Have you ever faced some tough days?Reading for writingWrite a speech about how music can change your or a persons life by using the structure and the rhetorical devices.And then share the speech with your partners.
