1、读后续写练习与赏析：父亲默默关注的爱 There is nothing more wonderful than the smell of the Adirondack air! It fills your lungs with purity and freshness that motivates a love for living. Every weekend in the summer, my father would plan a trip from our home in upstate New York to one of the splendid lakes nestled amo
2、ng the tall pines and thick forests of the Adirondack Mountains. There were no favorites; instead, each lake was an adventure to explore and enjoy. One trip that I will never forget was a visit to Oneida Lake at the foothills of the mountains . After arriving at the lake beach area, we emptied the c
3、ar of our picnic supplies, towels, blankets and beach chairs, carrying them through a wooded path that seemed like a forever distance. Once we located the perfect picnic spot, my dad, sister and I ran into the splashing waves with our beach ball, leaving my mother behind to “set up”. In the lake, we
4、 immediately played “monkey in the middle” for at least an hour, and then after retiring the ball, my father let us dive from his knee, throwing us up in the air and turning us over like thick pancakes on a grill. This timeless game went on and on as our begging for “more, more” never stopped . When
5、 we were finally tired of our games, my dad stopped to watch my older sister. She loved synchronized swimming (花样游泳) and started practicing skills that her team used in competition. My father, being an athlete himself, was absorbed in her show. I was sad that no one was playing with me; no one was w
6、atching me. I became bored and jealous watching her show off. I was in sulk (愠怒) and decided to swim by myself and try some of my sisters skills on my own in deeper water, far from both of them. The waves were getting stronger, but I didnt care. I just wanted to do what my sister could do so that I
7、could catch my fathers attention. Paragraph 1: As I took a breath to try a dive, a huge wave swallowed me._ _ Paragraph 2: It was my dad!_ _写作素材1.A ripple/wave of fear ran/surged through him/his body. 一阵恐惧席卷他全身。2.Devi sat on the side on a bench, paralyzed with fear.Devi 坐在一长凳的边上，吓坏了。3.Tremors wracke
8、d my body, and cold sweat trickled down my back.我被吓得身体抖个不停，冷汗直流背下。4. She was struck/ consumed/ overcome with fear when 她被吓到了。5.I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.我吓呆了，僵在那里动不了。6.I felt a wave of fear wrap around me. 我感到一阵恐惧包围了我。7.Paula was seized by fear and was rooted to the floor. Paul
9、a无比恐惧，双脚好像钉在了地上。8.She was frightened out of her wits. 她吓得魂不附体。9.He looked at the robber, his legs trembling/shaking. 他看着那劫犯，双腿抖个不停。 10.His face turned pale with fright. 他的脸吓得都白了。11.His hair stood on end as he thought he saw a white figure coming towards him. 当他看到一个白影朝他走过来，他吓得头发都竖了起来。12. The horrible
10、 scene made my blood run cold and struck fear into my heart.那可怕的场面使我毛骨悚然，胆战心惊。参考范文1 As I took a breath to try a dive, a huge wave swallowed me. I choked and then a huge undercurrent swept me deeper beneath the waves. The very thought of dying filled me with a mad panic. I kicked my legs wildly, losi
11、ng any hope for a breath. I remember trying to stand up, but the sandy bottom had disappeared. As I came up searching for the surface, struggling for oxygen, sputtering to clear my lungs, I felt a firm grasp on my arm and a pull to safety. It was my dad! He hugged me tightly and carried me back to a
12、 place where I could stand. There was no scolding, just a big hug and smile because he knew I was all right. He had been watching me all along! He had never taken his eye off me, even as he had the other eye on my sister. He had protected me. Being told by someone that you are loved is great, but ex
13、periencing that love is awesome. Without his watching over me, without his loving me, I would not be the strong woman I am today.当我深吸一口气尝试潜水时，巨浪将我吞没。我窒息了，然后一股巨大的暗流将我卷入海浪之下。一想到要死，我就充满了疯狂的恐慌。我拼命踢腿，连喘口气的希望都没有了。我记得我试图站起来，但沙底已经消失了。当我上来寻找水面，挣扎着吸氧，呼吸着清肺时，我感到自己的手臂被牢牢抓住，被拉到了安全的地方。 是我爸爸！他紧紧地抱住我，把我抱回到我能站立的地方。没
14、有责骂，只是一个大大的拥抱和微笑，因为他知道我没事。他一直都在看着我！他的目光从未从我身上移开，就像另一只眼睛盯着我姐姐一样。他保护了我。有人告诉你你被爱是很棒的，但是体验那种爱是很棒的。如果没有他的照顾，没有他的爱，我就不会成为今天的坚强女人。 参考范文2 As I took a breath to try a dive, a huge wave swallowed me. The wave seemed to be getting stronger and stronger, attempting to pull me deeper to the bottom of the lake. S
15、truggling hard to keep myself floating, I kicked my legs desperately, but it didnt work. I tried to call dad for help, but it was far away and my cry was swallowed by the roar of the wave. Every luck seemed to be going against me! Thinking that my life might end up here in the lake, I felt like a ti
16、ny broken at the mercy of the frightening wave. However, just as I was about to give up, I felt something warm took hold of my hand and held up my body. It was my dad! “Dont panic! Here I Am.” dad comforted. He held me tightly and carried me to safety. Making sure that I was all right, all my family
17、 heaved a sigh of relief. Guilty about what I had done, I didnt dare to look up to meet their eyes, but down at the ground, waiting for my fathers scolding. However, what greeted me was his warm hug and smile. I felt really blessed to be alive to smell the Adirondack air and well aware that dads lov
18、e was actually always showered on me and stayed with me though sometimes he was not watching me. 当我深吸一口气尝试潜水时，巨浪将我吞没。波浪似乎越来越强，试图将我拉到更深的湖底。努力让自己漂浮起来，我拼命踢腿，但没有用。我试图打电话给爸爸求救，但距离很远，我的哭声被海浪的咆哮吞没了。每一个运气似乎都对我不利！想到我的生命可能会落入湖中，我感觉自己就像一个被可怕的海浪摆布的小碎骨。然而，就在我准备放弃的时候，却感觉有什么温暖的东西握住了我的手，扶住了我的身体。是我爸爸！“不要恐慌！我来了。”爸爸安慰道。他紧紧地抱着我，把我带到了安全的地方。确保我没事，我的家人都松了一口气。我为自己的所作所为感到内疚，不敢抬头看他们的眼睛，而是蹲在地上，等着父亲的责骂。然而，迎接我的是他温暖的拥抱和微笑。我真的很幸运能活着闻到阿迪朗达克的空气，并且很清楚父亲的爱实际上总是倾注在我身上并一直陪伴着我，尽管有时他没有看着我。
