1、应用文写作 日记I.I.文体指导文体指导 (1)日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情,所以要用_人称。(2)日记多是记述当天发生过的事情,因此常使用_时态,但使用时必须灵活掌握。(3)日记格式:日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记的书端由日期、星期和天气构成。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况如:Sunny,Fine,Rainy,Windy,Snowy,Cloudy的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。日记的正文一般由三部分构成。第一第一一般过去式一般过去式II.II.写作步骤写作步骤第一部分:开门见山,介绍日记中要讲述的主要事情。第一部分:开门见山,介绍日记中要讲述的主
2、要事情。1.How time flies!Its already a week_(自我上高中的第一天以来).2.I had_(一次难忘的经历)in my new school this week.3.This afternoon I_(参加了一次有组织的活动)with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”in the science museum.4.We have just finished our military training.I have to admit that I _(有那么多要表达)!5.Today,
3、our science teacher_(教我们如何制作)paper lanterns.since my first day at senior highan unforgettable experiencetook part in an organized activityhave so much to expresstaught us how to make 第二部分第二部分:进一步描述事情发生的过程和人物的心理变化,指出印象深刻的地方。进一步描述事情发生的过程和人物的心理变化,指出印象深刻的地方。6.During the training period,I_(受了很大的苦)due to
4、the hot weather and severe trainers.7.The foreign visitors were very surprised_(看到我们说英语说得那么出色)and we talked a lot about the Great Walls history.8.I got up early and_(帮助我的父母做早饭).Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room.9.Although we suffered several setbacks,_(我们谁都没有放弃).10.We watched the teacher
5、 attentively and then we started to_(亲自尝试).11.But,at first,I_(不敢尝试)because I was afraid that I couldnt make it.experienced/suffered great hardship to see that we speak English so excellentlyhelped my parents cook breakfastnone of us gave uphave a try ourselvesdared not have a try第三部分第三部分:总结人物的感受及收获,
6、或者表达对未来的美好期待。总结人物的感受及收获,或者表达对未来的美好期待。12.It was_(不仅)an experience,_(而且)a helpful class!13.From the activity,I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of peoples harmful activities,_(这导致了野生生物的减少).14.All in all,I_(从中受益很多)todays activities.15.Now that the training is over,I have
7、 learned a lot which can_ (有益于我未来的生活).16._(虽然我们觉得累),we had a good time in helping others.not onlybut alsowhich causes a decrease of wildlifebenefited a lot frombenefit my life in the futureAlthough we felt tiredIII.III.素材积累素材积累 【开头】1.It was a fine/nice day.天气晴朗。2.Today is.今天是.3.It is a week since Ie
8、ntered the senior high.The new school leaves a deep impression on me.我升入高中已有一个星期了。新学校给我留下深刻的印象。【中间】1.What we learn in class covers more than that in the class of jouior high school.我们在课堂上所学的比初中课堂上所学的还要多。2.We all take serious attitudes towards all the subjects.我们对所有的学科都持认真的态度。3.Our teachers give us c
9、areful instructions in class.我们的老师在课堂上给我们认真的指导。III.III.素材积累素材积累 【结尾】1.I had a good time today./I enjoyed myself today.我今天玩得很高兴。2.What a warm and meaningful day!多么温暖而有意义的一天啊!3.I will never forget the memorable day!我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天!4.Although everyone was very tired,we felt very happy because we had done
10、 a meaningful job.虽然大家都很累,但我们很开心,因为我们做了一项有意义的工作。5.All in all,I think that my first week at senior high is a very good experience.总之,我认为我在高中的第一周是一段非常好的经历。.书面表达书面表达假定你是李华,今天是你上高中的第一天,请你根据以下提示写一篇英文日记,记录高中生活第一天的情况。1.学校的总体情况;2.同学和老师的情况;3.你的感受。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Thursday 1 September Sunny Its T
11、hursday today.Its my first day at senior high.My new school is_(large)my previous one,and the classrooms are equipped with one computer in each.My classmates are all friendly and helpful.Whats more,I 2._(impress)my teachers different teaching methods.At the first lesson,I 3._(nervous),but I soon felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to 4._(introduce).I like my new school verymuch.I think I can 5._(progress)in this school.much larger thanwas very impressed by/withwas/felt nervous at firstintroduce ourselves to each othermake great progressThanksThanks