1、P r e-w r i t i n gWhere did the story happen?01Who were in the story?030204Pre-writingWhen did the story happen?What were they doing in the story?Pre-writingThe story happened at about ten oclock at night,twenty years after Bob went to the West.Pre-writingthe policemanBobcall himself“Jimmy”Pre-writ
2、ingThe man waited for his friend Jimmy,twenty years after he went to the West.Pre-writingWhere did the story happen?01Who were in the story?030204Pre-writingWhen did the story happen?What were they doing in the story?settingscharactersactionstime,location and descriptions of the environment or surro
3、undingssettingsdescribing both appearance and personalitycharactersnot only telling your readers what kind of people they are,but also driving the plot forward and create a particular atmosphere.actionsPre-writingPre-writingPre-writingPre-writingPre-writingComplete the plot line.The man from the wes
4、t waited for _ The policeman _ The policeman _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ A t a l l m a n _ The man from the west found that the tall man _ The man from the west received _ The policeman was _ The man from the west,Bob,was _ his friend Jimmy.asked.left.came and called himself Jimmy.was not Jimmy,but a
5、policeman.a note.Jimmy.a criminal.A happy ending.A sad ending.A surprise ending.An open ending.Pre-writingWhat kind of ending is this?Pre-writingO Henry-American short-story writer-Famous for surprise endings(unexpected but reasonable)Settings,characters and actions prepare for the ending and can re
6、flect the ending.While-writingWrite your own endings to Jimmy and Bobs story,twenty years after Bob was arrested（逮捕）in 15 minutes in group of four.While-writingWhile-writingStepping out of jail（监狱）（监狱）into the cold wind,Bob,now 58,felt lost and helpless(Pay attention to settings,characters and actio
7、ns.)Questions to Help You1)What type of ending will it be?2)Do you want to introduce other characters in the ending?If so,who are they?3)Where will the ending take place?4)What has happened to Bob and Jimmy over the past twenty years?5)How will the story end?Settings:There was now a cold rain fallin
8、g.At the corner stood a shop bright with lights.Characters:a familiar-looking man,scruffily dressed,neatly dressed,well-dressedActions:move along,slow ones walk,walk toward sb.,light a cigar,take a step or two,unfold the note,glare angrily at sb.,glance around,stare atWhile-writingWhile-writing得分得分2
9、1-2521-2516-2016-2011-1511-156-106-101-51-5与所给短文融洽度融洽度高融洽度较高关系较为密切有一定关系衔接较差开头语衔接合理较合理一定程度衔接一定程度衔接衔接较差内容丰富较丰富若干内容一些有关内容内容太少语法和词汇 丰富、准确。些许错误，不影响表达较丰富、准确，些许错误，不影响表达能满足任务，有一些错误，不影响表达单词有限。有些错误，影响表达单词有限，较多错误，严重影响表达连接成分有效使用，结构紧凑较有效使用，结构紧凑简单的连接，内容连贯较少使用，缺少连贯缺乏连接，内容不连贯While-writingStepping out of jail（监狱）（监狱
10、）into the cold wind,Bob,now 58,felt lost and helpless(Pay attention to settings,characters and actions.)P o s t-w r i t i n gCommentPresentation Post-writingS u m m a r yHow to write an ending to a story.Settings,characters,actions.Surprise endings of O Henry.After twenty yearsSummaryH o m e w o r kHomeworkT H A N K Y O U恳 请 各 位 老 师 批 评 指 正！
