1、文体概述日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。写作三步走：说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺-展开评论事件、赞扬收信人-再次表达良好祝愿。文体概述日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝
2、贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。写作三步走：说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺-展开评论事件、赞扬收信人-再次表达良好祝愿。常用语块1.恭喜/祝贺 _2.实现/成真 _3.很高兴听到 _4.我想表达我对的祝贺 _I would like to express my congratulations onCongratulations oncome trueHow happy I am to hear
3、 5.我为你的成功感到非常高兴 _6.请接受我诚挚的祝贺。_7.祝你一切顺利!_8.祝你心想事成!_ Please accept my sincere congratulation.Wish you all the best!I feel very happy for your success.May all your wishes come true!(二)开头常用语1I want to congratulate you with all my heart.我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。2Congratulations on your winning first prize in the.con
4、test.祝贺你在比赛中获得一等奖。3.I was delighted to learn of your success/achievements in 我很高兴得知你在.的成功/成就。4.I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.我写这封信是为了表达我对你英语演讲比赛获得第一名的祝贺。(三)结尾常用语1Wish you good luck and success in the coming.祝你在接下来的中有好运并取得成功。2
5、I hope you can make every effort to realize your dream.我希望你尽一切努力实现你的梦想。（四）典例剖析四）典例剖析 假定你是李华，你的朋友Jack在第二十六届英语演讲比赛中取得第一名的好成绩，你给他写信祝贺。要点包括：1.得知他取得英语演讲比赛第一名的好成绩，你表示祝贺；2.对他获奖一事的看法和认识；3.希望与他共进晚餐以示庆祝。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,I have learned with great delight that you won the championship of
6、the 26th English Speech Contest.I would like to express my congratulations on your success.I feel very proud of you.And its really good news to your family and teachers.Winning the championship of the English Speech Contest is quite exciting news!You must be very happy and excited at this moment.I k
7、now this is surely the result of your diligence and intelligence.It is a reward you really deserve.With your excellence,I am sure that you will be successful in whatever you undertake.I hope that I can have dinner with you and express my congratulations face to face.Again,please accept my sincere co
8、ngratulations.Best wishes for your further success!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作思路】写作思路】按题目要求，本文是一封祝贺信，可按题目要求，本文是一封祝贺信，可分三段，第一段说明你听到消息，并表示分三段，第一段说明你听到消息，并表示祝贺；第二段可描述祝贺；第二段可描述Jack平时付出的努力平时付出的努力和向他学习的决心；第三段邀请共进晚餐。和向他学习的决心；第三段邀请共进晚餐。另外，你也可根据自己的人生经验和经历另外，你也可根据自己的人生经验和经历适当增加写作内容。写作时注意用比较地适当增加写作内容。写作时注意用比较地道的
9、表示祝贺和邀请的英语表达，并且用道的表示祝贺和邀请的英语表达，并且用适当连接词以使行文流畅。适当连接词以使行文流畅。l范文改错范文改错lDear Tom，l Congratulations for you!Im truly happy to learn that your application to be the volunteer teacher for rural areas has approved and youll come to China this July.l Since this is your first visit to China,and I would like t
10、o list several thing related.First,prepare for the changeable weather in the mountain area.toabeenthingsmountainous Second,children there were poor in English.Third,you might not be accustomed to the local diet.In addition,dont forget to learn about local customs and manner in advance,what will help
11、 you fit in with the new surroundings.Only when you are well prepared will you be able to doing your work better.Best wishes!Yours,Li Huaaremannerswhichdo(六六)课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友Tom通过了来华支教的申请，将于今年七月到边远地区教学。请根据下面的提示给他写一封祝贺信：1表示祝贺；2分析可能遇到的挑战；3告知提前了解当地的风俗习惯。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。中档作文中档作文 De
12、ar Tom，Congratulations to you！You have passed your application to be a volunteer teacher for rural areas.Im more than delighted to learn you will come to China this July.Im writing to tell you some relevant details.There is no doubt that you will face all kinds of challenges during this time.Firstly
13、,the weather there is totally different from the weather of London.You must prepare for the changeable weather in the mountainous area.Secondly,children there are poor in English.You will have difficulty in communicating with each other.Besides,you should learn more about local customs and manners i
14、n advance.It will help you adapt to the new surroundings.You will be able to do your work better only when you are well prepared.Yours，Li Hua巧润色、大升级创高分巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)Dear Tom，(1)_(合并句为一个简单句)Im more than delighted to learn you will come to China this July.Im writing to
15、tell you some relevant details.There is no doubt that you will(2)_(词汇升级)(3)_(词汇升级)challenges during this time.Firstly,the weather there is totally different from (4)_(词汇替换)of London.Congratulations to you for having passed your application to be a volunteer teacher for rural areas be faced withvarie
16、ties ofthat You must(5)_(词汇升级)the changeable weather in the mountainous area.Secondly,(6)_ _(合并句，升级so.that.为状语从句)Besides,you(7)_(词汇升级)learn more about local customs and manners in advance,(8)_ _(升级句为非限制性定语从句）(9)_ _(升级句 为倒装句)Yours，Li Huamake preparations for children there are so poor in English that
17、 you will have difficulty in communicating with each otherare supposed towhich will help you adapt to the new surroundings Only when you are well prepared will you be able to do your work better （七）课后作业（七）课后作业 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：他天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。继续努
18、力，有机会来中国留学。希望见面和交流。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest Dear Li Hua,I have learned with delight that _ _（你获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖）.I would like to _(向你表达对你的成功的祝贺).You must be very excited.And I _.(为你感到骄傲）you received the first prize in“Chinese Br
19、idge”Chinese speech contest.express my congratulations on your successfeel proud of you _（你获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖）is quite exciting news!I know you _（开始不擅长汉语并讲得不流利）.However,_(你坚持天天练习）.It is a reward you richly deserve for your persistent practice._,(正如俗话说得那样)“Everything comes to him who waits”.Final
20、ly,you succeeded!In my mind,this match is very difficult for a foreign student.Your winning the first prize in“Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest were not good at Chinese at firstand couldnt speak it fluentlyyou insisted on practising speaking Chinese every dayAs the saying goes So Im so surprised that _ (你在比赛中获得冠军）.If you _(继续学习)Chinese harder,you _ (有机会来中国留学)._ _(我希望与你见面和相互交流）.My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely,Li Mingyou become champion of this competitionkeep on studyingwill have the opportunity to study in ChinaI hope tosee you and communicate with each other
