1、主要问题主要问题 1.审题不清，时态、人称用错。审题不清，时态、人称用错。2.没分段，结构不清晰。没分段，结构不清晰。3.字数不符合要求（字数不符合要求（100词左右）。词左右）。4.抄完形、阅读。抄完形、阅读。5.书写，卷面不整洁书写，卷面不整洁writing To:J Subject:Summer vacation plan Dear Jeff,Thinking of the approaching summer vacation makes me extremely excited.So valuable is it for me that I cannot let it pass me
2、aninglessly.It is arranged as follows:The first few days will see me on a journey with several friends to refresh myself.Then experiencing the daily routine of my mother,who has been doing a lot for me,is to be a must.Meanwhile,Ill spend time improving my skill at painting.Additionally,Ill take advantage of the time to take a swimming course.In short，whatever I do,the goal is to gain necessary experience,acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons.What is your arrangements of the vacation?Yours truly,Li Hua 作文作文作文作文作文书写卷面整洁 字如其人
