1、1 1命题探索命题探索2 2教材链接教材链接3 3佳句储备佳句储备4 4三阶攻关三阶攻关5 5写作练兵写作练兵命题探索命题探索 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“经历及感经历及感受受”这一话题，这一话题，2020年以看图写作的形式描述了年以看图写作的形式描述了“李硕的妈妈在李硕的妈妈在疫情期间去武汉抗疫的事情疫情期间去武汉抗疫的事情”；2011年以年以“介绍他人的经历以及介绍他人的经历以及对自己的影响对自己的影响”这一角度考查了这一角度考查了“介绍李宝元的故事以及从故事介绍李宝元的故事以及从故事中学到了什么中学到了什么”。分析全国近年真题可知
2、，全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度分析全国近年真题可知，全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有：有：自己的亲身经历及感受自己的亲身经历及感受等。等。教材链接教材链接人教教材中涉及人教教材中涉及“经历与感受经历与感受”这个话题的单元具体如下这个话题的单元具体如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：佳句储备佳句储备1 1角度角度介绍经历介绍经历【好句范例】【好句范例】1.It was really a hard job,but I kept telling myself to stick to the end.2.The next day,Peter went to so
3、ccer practice with courage rather than fear in his heart.人教人教 九九(全全)Unit 11 P863.Attracted by the beautiful scenery,I quickly climbed up the mountain to enjoy the natural view.4.Whenever I was in trouble,they would give me a hand as soon as possible.2019北京书面表达北京书面表达5.Hearing the news that I was aske
4、d to give a speech on behalf of our class,I felt very nervous because I was afraid that I might not do it well.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.这确实是很艰难的时刻，但是我一直告诉自己世上无难事，只这确实是很艰难的时刻，但是我一直告诉自己世上无难事，只 怕有心人。怕有心人。_2.第二天，我充满信心而不是充满抱怨地去面对困难。第二天，我充满信心而不是充满抱怨地去面对困难。_It was really a hard time,but I kept telling myself that not
5、hing is impossible if I put my heart into it.The next day,I faced the difficulties with confidence rather than complaint.3.被她甜美的声音所吸引，我不由自主地跟着她唱起歌来。被她甜美的声音所吸引，我不由自主地跟着她唱起歌来。_4.无论什么时候我需要她的帮助，她都会尽可能快地来到我的身无论什么时候我需要她的帮助，她都会尽可能快地来到我的身 边。边。_Attracted by her sweet voice,I couldnt help singing along with h
6、er.Whenever I need her help,she will come to me as soon as possible.2 2角度角度介绍感受介绍感受【好句范例】【好句范例】6.How excited I was!7.That day we were tired but happy.8.In a word,it was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.2018长沙书面表达长沙书面表达9.Through this experience,I deeply understand the power of knowl
7、edge and technology.2019淄博书面表达淄博书面表达10.I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their owners faces.人教人教 八八 (下下)Unit 2 P1111.After seeing all the things the girl did,I recalled this proverb “helping others is to help ourselves”【句子仿写】【句子仿写】5.
8、多么有趣的一天啊！多么有趣的一天啊！_6.学英语很难但是很有用。学英语很难但是很有用。_7.总之，对我们来说，这真的是既有趣又甜蜜的一天。总之，对我们来说，这真的是既有趣又甜蜜的一天。_What an interesting day it was！/How interesting the day was!Learning English is difficult but useful.In a word,it was really a funny and sweet day for us.8.通过这次经历，我深刻地理解了友谊的重要性。通过这次经历，我深刻地理解了友谊的重要性。_9.当我看完这部
9、介绍我家乡的电影后，我有一种强烈的自豪感当我看完这部介绍我家乡的电影后，我有一种强烈的自豪感。_Through this experience,I deeply understand the importance of friendship.I got such a strong feeling of pride after I saw the film about the introduction of my hometown.3 3角度角度他人经历对自己的影响他人经历对自己的影响【句子升格范例】【句子升格范例】12.His story taught me a lot.I should ne
10、ver give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.(用用teach sb.not to do sth.升格升格)His story taught me not to give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.13.Being an independent child is very important in our daily life.I have learned this point.(用用I have learned that升格升格)I have learned
11、that being an independent child is very important in our daily life.2018台州书面表达台州书面表达14.His experience of helping others was so moving.It benefited me a lot.(用用so.that.句型升格句型升格)His experience of helping others was so moving that it benefited me a lot.15.We all act like the young woman and think more
12、of others.I think our world will be a much more beautiful place.(用用if引导的引导的条件状语从句升格条件状语从句升格)If we all act like the young woman and think more of others,I think our world will be a much more beautiful place.2019天津天津书面表达书面表达【句子升格】【句子升格】10.His story taught me a lot.I should never lose heart in dealing
13、with difficulties.(用用teach sb.not to do sth.升格升格)_11.I have learned something.Healthy lifestyles can help us get good grades and live happily.(用用I have learned that升格升格)_His story taught me not to lose heart in dealing with difficulties.I have learned that healthy lifestyles can help us get good gra
14、des and live happily.12.My friend was brave to accept the challenge.He had a great influence on me.(用用so.that.句型升格句型升格)_13.The drivers want to be safe on the road.They have to follow the traffic rules strictly.(用用if引导的条件状语从句升格引导的条件状语从句升格)_My friend was so brave to accept the challenge that he had a
15、great influence on me.If the drivers want to be safe on the road,they have to follow the traffic rules strictly.三阶攻关三阶攻关一阶一阶 审好题审好题 定方向定方向五定审题：分析河北近五定审题：分析河北近10年中考真题书面表达可知，河北书面表达可年中考真题书面表达可知，河北书面表达可从以下几方面审题：从以下几方面审题：定主题：根据题干或者标题来确定该作文的主题；定主题：根据题干或者标题来确定该作文的主题；定文体：根据题干中定文体：根据题干中“写一篇短文写一篇短文/演讲稿演讲稿/发言稿
16、发言稿/邮件邮件/一封信一封信”再再结合主题来确定该作文的文体；结合主题来确定该作文的文体；定要点：根据所给提示或表格内容定该作文的要点；定要点：根据所给提示或表格内容定该作文的要点；定人称：根据所给的每个提示以及标题定该作文相应要点所使用的定人称：根据所给的每个提示以及标题定该作文相应要点所使用的人称；人称；(2020河北河北)李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉汉。请根据。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。写一篇短文。定人称：第三人称定人称：第三人称 定时态：一般过去时定时态：一般过去时定主题：描述疫情期间妈妈支援武汉定
17、主题：描述疫情期间妈妈支援武汉的相关事情的相关事情定文体：看图叙事应为记叙文定文体：看图叙事应为记叙文定时态：根据所给的每个提示定该作文相应要点所使用的时态。定时态：根据所给的每个提示定该作文相应要点所使用的时态。定要点定要点1 1：在机场送别妈妈的描述：在机场送别妈妈的描述定要点定要点2 2：在电视上看见妈妈的描述：在电视上看见妈妈的描述定要点定要点3 3：当妈妈完成任务回到家乡时：当妈妈完成任务回到家乡时的描述的描述定要点定要点4 4：妈妈回到家的描述：妈妈回到家的描述注意：注意：(1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；提示
18、词语供参考；(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；(3)词数词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Li Shuo is a fiveyearold boy.One Sunday afternoon,his mother was going to Wuhan to help the patients there._开篇：引开篇：引出话题出话题(已给出已给出)正文：介正文：介绍事情的绍事情的经过经过(结合结合已给出的已给出的图片图片)介绍事情的介绍事情的起因起因(help the patients)One Sunday af
19、ternoon,his mother was going to Wuhan to help the patients there.1.机场送机场送妈妈妈妈(say goodbye）Li Shuo and his father said goodbye to his mother at the airport.Li Shuo,together with his father,said goodbye to his mother at the airport.我来写：我来写：_ _二阶二阶 谋布局谋布局 写好句写好句列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升列框架
20、列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升正文：介正文：介绍事情的绍事情的经过经过(结合结合已给出的已给出的图片图片)2.亲吻电亲吻电视上的妈视上的妈妈妈(kiss)Li Shuo saw his mother on TV.He ran over and kissed her.When Li Shuo saw his mother on TV,he ran over at once and kissed her deeply.我来写：我来写：_ _3.妈妈受妈妈受到了热烈到了热烈欢迎欢迎（warm welcome）His mother came back and r
21、eceived a warm welcome.His mother came back and received a warm welcome as a hero.我来写：我来写：_ 正文：介正文：介绍事情的绍事情的经过经过(结合结合已给出的已给出的图片图片)4.给了妈给了妈妈一个大妈一个大大的拥抱大的拥抱(hug)Li Shuo and his father gave her a big hug.Both Li Shuo and his father gave her a big hug.我来写：我来写：_ 表达感受表达感受（happy）They were happy to be toget
22、her again.How happy they were to be together again!我来写：我来写：_ 结尾：一结尾：一家人团聚家人团聚后的感受后的感受列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升三阶三阶 巧衔接巧衔接 成篇章成篇章【高分范文】【高分范文】写作练兵写作练兵(2020泰州改编泰州改编)假如你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了，假如你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了，你和好友你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语给分别在即，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语给Mike写一篇留言。写一篇留言。提示：提示：(1)Tell a
23、n unforgettable experience between Mike and you.(2)Talk about your feelings.(3)Your advice on Mikes future study or life.要求：要求：(1)留言须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥。留言须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥。(2)留言中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。留言中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)Dear Mike，How time flies!Its time to say goo
24、dbye._ _ But I will remember all the happy moments we spent together.Do you remember last year we went hiking together?At first,we both walked fast.But I gradually felt tired and started to breathe heavily.All I wanted to do was to go home and enjoy a shower.When I thought about giving up,you encour
25、aged me.You asked how I felt and let me have a rest for a while.Then you told me not to give up,because I can get what I want only if I hold on.In the end,we both reached the top.I felt grateful not only for your encouragement,but also for the lesson you taught me.I think you should always work hard in your study.But at the same time,you need to learn to relax.I hope you can realize your dream in the future._ Yours，Li Hua
