1、1 1命题探索命题探索2 2教材链接教材链接3 3佳句储备佳句储备4 4三阶攻关三阶攻关5 5写作练兵写作练兵命题探索命题探索 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“优秀品质优秀品质”这一话题，考查角度有：感恩：这一话题，考查角度有：感恩：2019年以年以“什么时候说感谢什么时候说感谢”为为题分别谈谈在家和在学校什么时候说感谢；个人行为规范：题分别谈谈在家和在学校什么时候说感谢；个人行为规范：2018年以图片中男孩和女士的对话谈谈当看到别人随地扔垃圾时，自己年以图片中男孩和女士的对话谈谈当看到别人随地扔垃圾时，自己该怎么做。该怎么做。全国关于这个
2、话题相关的命题角度还有：自律、诚信、独立等。全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度还有：自律、诚信、独立等。教材链接教材链接人教教材中涉及人教教材中涉及“优秀品质优秀品质”这个话题的单元具体如下这个话题的单元具体如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：佳句储备佳句储备1 1角度角度感恩感恩(Gratitude)【好句范例】【好句范例】1.Thank you very much for giving me life and bringing me up.2.Its very kind of you to give me a hand on my homework.3.
3、Whenever I have difficulties,you always cheer me up.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.非常感谢你在我处于困境的时候帮助我。非常感谢你在我处于困境的时候帮助我。_2.你给了我这么多有用的建议，你真是太善良了。你给了我这么多有用的建议，你真是太善良了。_3.不论什么时候我需要支持，你总是站在我身后。不论什么时候我需要支持，你总是站在我身后。_Thank you very much for helping me when I was in trouble.Its very kind of you to give me so much useful adv
4、ice.Whenever I need support,you always stand behind me.2 2角度角度行为规范行为规范(Code of conduct)【好句范例】【好句范例】4.Dont be late for class.You must be on time.人教七人教七(下下)Unit 4 P195.Remember not to throw rubbish here and there.6.Such bad manners like wasting food should be removed from our school.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】4.不要对别
5、人撒谎。你必须做一个诚实的人。不要对别人撒谎。你必须做一个诚实的人。_5.记住不要在公共场合大声喧哗。记住不要在公共场合大声喧哗。_6.像抽烟、打架这些坏行为是坚决不允许做的。像抽烟、打架这些坏行为是坚决不允许做的。_Dont lie to others.You must be an honest person.Remember not to speak loudly in public places.Such bad manners like smoking and fighting mustnt be allowed to do.3 3角度角度自律自律(Selfdiscipline)【句子
6、升格范例】【句子升格范例】7.Selfdiscipline is very important in our life.Selfdiscipline plays an important role in our life.8.I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.My family helped me a lot.With the help of my family,I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.9.Se
7、lfdiscipline brings you a healthier life.Selfdiscipline brings you a happier life.Selfdiscipline brings you not only a healthier life,but also a happier life.【句子升格】【句子升格】7.Managing my free time well is very important in my life.(用用play an important role升格升格)_8.I became selfdisciplined a lot.My frien
8、d helped me a lot.(用用 with the help of升格升格)_9.Doing exercise helps me to be energetic.Doing exercise helps me to be confident.(用用not only.but also.升格升格)_Managing my free time well plays an important role in my life.With the help of my friend,I became selfdisciplined a lot.Doing exercise helps me not
9、 only be energetic,but also be confident.4 4角度角度诚信诚信(Honesty)【好句范例】【好句范例】10.Being honest can help you make more friends.11.No matter what happens,you are supposed to be an honest man.12.Its important to be honest in the exam as students.13.As for students,honesty is the basic rule that should be fol
10、lowed.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】10.诚实能够帮你赢得他人的信任。诚实能够帮你赢得他人的信任。_11.任何时候你都应该遵守你的承诺。任何时候你都应该遵守你的承诺。_12.告诉老师实情是很有必要的。告诉老师实情是很有必要的。_Being honest/Honesty can help you win the trust of others.You are supposed to keep your promise at any time.Its necessary to tell the truth to the teacher.5 5角度角度独立独立(Independence)【好句范例】
11、【好句范例】14.I want you to get into the habit of doing your homework as soon as you come home from school.外研九外研九(全全)Module 6 P4215.Only by trying to solve problems by ourselves can we become independent people.16.The earlier children learn to be independent,the better it is for their future.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】
12、13.我想让你养成自己做决定的习惯。我想让你养成自己做决定的习惯。_14.只有你自己第一次独立完成一项任务，你才会有成就感。只有你自己第一次独立完成一项任务，你才会有成就感。_15.你越独立，你的选择就会越多。你越独立，你的选择就会越多。_I want you to get into the habit of making decisions by yourself.Only by finishing a task by yourself for the first time can you have a sense of achievement.The more independent yo
13、u are,the more choices you will have.三阶攻关三阶攻关一阶一阶 审好题审好题 定方向定方向(2019河北河北)文明礼貌从我做起，从现在做起，从点滴小事做起。文明礼貌从我做起，从现在做起，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以请根据下面的提示和要求，以“When to Say Thank You”为题，写为题，写一篇短文。一篇短文。定主题：标题为定主题：标题为“什么时候什么时候说感谢说感谢”定文体：说明文定文体：说明文提示：提示：(1)When should we say“thank you”at home?(2)When are we supposed
14、to say“thank you”at school?(3).定要点定要点1：在家什么时候说感谢：在家什么时候说感谢定人称：第一人称定人称：第一人称定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时定要点定要点2：在学校什么时候说感谢：在学校什么时候说感谢定人称：第一人称定人称：第一人称定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时定要点定要点3：补充要点：补充要点(参考角度：在图书参考角度：在图书馆、在操场等馆、在操场等)定人称：第一人称定人称：第一人称定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时要求：要求：(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。可适当发挥。(
15、2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)参考词汇：参考词汇：wash,encourage,open When to Say Thank YouIts polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us._开篇：引开篇：引出话题出话题(已给出已给出)正文：分正文：分别陈述在别陈述在家、在学家、在学校以及其校以及其他需要说他需要说感谢的情感谢的情况况说谢谢的原说谢谢的原因因(poli
16、te)列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升Its polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.1.在家什在家什么情况下么情况下应该说谢应该说谢谢谢(at home）Mom or Dad washes the clothes.We should say“thank you”to them.We should say“thank you”to them when Mom or Dad washes the clothes,cleans the room,coo
17、ks for us.我来写：我来写：_ 二阶二阶 谋布局谋布局 写好句写好句正文：分正文：分别陈述在别陈述在家、在学家、在学校以及其校以及其他需要说他需要说感谢的情感谢的情况况2.在学校在学校什么情况什么情况下应该说下应该说谢谢谢谢(at school)When someone lends us a pen,please say“thank you”to him.When someone lends us a pen or hands us something,its nice to say“thank you”我来写：我来写：_ We should say“thank you”to our
18、teacher.If a teacher says“well done”to encourage us,we are supposed to say“thank you”.我来写：我来写：_ 列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升正文：分正文：分别陈述在别陈述在家、在学家、在学校以及其校以及其他需要说他需要说感谢的情感谢的情况况3.其他说其他说感谢的情感谢的情况况Say“thank you”if someone holds the door open for us.Whenever someone holds the door open for us,we
19、 should say“thank you”to express our thanks.我来写：我来写：_ 记得说感记得说感谢谢（thank you）We need to be polite and remember to say“thank you”Be polite and always remember to say“thank you”我来写：我来写：_ 结尾：重结尾：重申主题申主题列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升三阶三阶 巧衔接巧衔接 成篇章成篇章【高分范文】【高分范文】写作练兵写作练兵万唯原创万唯原创 随着年龄的增长，我们都想成为独立的、
20、负责任的青随着年龄的增长，我们都想成为独立的、负责任的青少年。请根据下面的提示和要求，以少年。请根据下面的提示和要求，以“Being an Independent Teenager”为题写一篇英语短文。为题写一篇英语短文。提示：提示：(1)Why do you need to be an independent teenager?(2)How to be an independent teenager?(3)What are the influences of being an independent teenager?要求：要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。短文须包括所有提示内
21、容，可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数：词数：80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)参考词汇：参考词汇：responsible(负责任的负责任的)Being an Independent TeenagerIts necessary for every student to become independent._ _ As a famous saying goes,“Give a man a fish,and you feed him for a day.Teach a man to fis
22、h,and you feed him for the rest of his life.”We must stop depending on our parents and learn to be independent.Firstly,we should try our best to deal with various situations independently.Besides,we should be responsible for others and be strict with ourselves.If we become independent,we will take good care _of ourselves when we go out so that our parents will not worry about us too much.The earlier we learn to be independent,the better it is for our future.
