1、情景介绍情景介绍2011年陕西卷年陕西卷假设你是中学生李华。在一位名叫假设你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容，请你根的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容，请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。Im the mother of a fourteenyearold.I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another.She has been doing very w
2、ell in school，but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her.Am I wrong？【模板模板】Hi，_.What puzzles you is _.My idea is that _.Although _，development in _ should _.There are _.Some _ turned out not to be as _ as _.The reason is often that _.Furthermore，_.So I suggest that _
3、.More importantly，let her _；let her _；and let her _.范文范文今日选读今日选读满分作文满分作文Hi，TigerMom，What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universi
4、ty admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as suceessful in society as they were expected.The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them alm
5、ost no time for other activities.Furthermore，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friendsadvice.More importantly，let her live like a lovely girl；let her have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.点评点评说明问题存在的普遍性。说明问题存在的普遍性。阐明自己的观点阐明自己的观点不支持。不支持。陈述自己的理由。陈述自己的理由。引出下文中的例子。引出下文中的例子。举例证明自己的观点。举例证明自己的观点。帮助对方分析问题。帮助对方分析问题。进一步分析问题。进一步分析问题。为对方指明改正的方向。为对方指明改正的方向。提出具体的改正措施。提出具体的改正措施。Unit 1Women of achievement 本部分内容讲解结束本部分内容讲解结束按按ESC键退出全屏播放键退出全屏播放
