1、LOREM IPSUM DOLOR1CONTENTS目录 各档次的给分范围和要求各档次的给分范围和要求.第五档(很好)；(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的.第四档(好)：(16-20分)完全完成了试题规定的任务 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 应用简单的
2、语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的提分小贴士提分小贴士：不确定的词汇或句子不用；斟酌词汇，使用更高级的词汇、句型；首段、第二段段首用出彩的句子.第三档(适当)：(11-15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的提分小贴士提分小贴士：使用有把握的词汇，使用更高级的连接词，分段（3段），草稿要详列提纲，首段、第二段段首用高级句型 第二档第二档(较差较差)：(6-10(6-10分分)未恰当完成试
3、题规定的任务未恰当完成试题规定的任务漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容无关内容 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限语法结构单调、词汇项目有限有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解对写作内容的理解较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者信息未能清楚地传达给读者提分小贴士提分小贴士：词汇的加强；长句子先在草稿纸上写好；基本的连接词的正确使用；开头、结尾、第二段段首不出错第一档第一档 1-1-5 5分分未完成试题规定的任务未完成试题规定的任
4、务明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求语法结构单调、词汇项目有限语法结构单调、词汇项目有限较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯信息未能传达给读者。信息未能传达给读者。提分小贴士提分小贴士：审题，内容一定符合提示，扩充提示，例子恰当；多背诵范文与美文美句；打好草稿再誊写到卷子；有效使用连接词 不得分：（0分）未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容
5、无法看清。写作步骤写作步骤 一、审题 写作要求、审文体、审关键词、审写作时态及语态和审人称等；（2011）请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group,and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to 对作出反应d
6、ifferent people.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为100左右。二、拟点二、拟点：拟出写作的基本的重点，找出五六个动词或动词短语；还可构思一些句型、句式。It is well-known that teamwork is extremely important in.,through which we can.efficiently.example：Take myself as an example，.具体的例子 fail、have much difficulty、have troub
7、le、advise、cooperate with、communicate with、realize、improve、succeed、conclude、play the role三、连句三、连句 将上一步列出来的要点逐句表达出来，要注意：要用最有把握的短语或句型 尽可能多地运用高级的词汇和语法结构，如复合句、倒装句、并列句、强调句和分词结构等 选择正确的人称、时态、语态 记叙文，写明时间、地点和人物四、成文四、成文 将写好的句子组织起来，形成段落。恰当使用连接词：并列、递进、让步、转折、因果、总结，以增强连贯性。11年范文年范文Years of school life has taught me
8、 a lot of things,of which teamwork is the most important for me.In fact,I didnt realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school.At first,I did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities.As a result,I was tired out and d
9、epressed.Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others.Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class.It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my workmore efficient.衬出文章衬出文章层次感层次感的那些的
10、那些连接词连接词1.表示方向相反的词和词组：表示方向相反的词和词组：转折关系：but,yet,however,while,on the contrary,on the other hand,nevertheless（不过）,otherwise让步关系：although,though,despite,in spite of2.表示方向相同的词和词组表示方向相同的词和词组并列关系：and,as well,bothand,as well as,neithernor,eitheror递进关系：in addition,besides,moreover,furthermore,above all,wors
11、e still,not onlybut also,whats more/worse/better,to make things worse因果关系：because of,for,so,as,as a result,due to,owing to,thanks to,on account of,therefore解释关系：for example/instance,that is(to say),in other words,such as总结关系：in a word,in short,in general,on the whole,to summarize,to conclude,in brie
12、f3.顺序关系词顺序关系词时间顺序：at first，to begin with ，Second,next,then,later，the next moment,after that,since then,shortly after，At last,in the end,finally,eventually空间关系：on the right,to the left,on one side of,on the other side,in the middle/center of,at the foot/top/end of五、润色五、润色 低级词汇 高级词汇 简单结构 高级结构 平庸句子 高大上
13、句子 制造亮点，赢得加分制造亮点，赢得加分1 1、词汇的逆袭、词汇的逆袭 think 、believein my opinion、in my view、consider、suppose I hold the opinion that、It is said/believed/supposed that 、.is said/believed/supposed to be、It occurred to me thatfrom my perspective观点,as far as I am concerned屌丝级屌丝级平民级平民级高富帅级高富帅级Good beneficial marvelous非凡
14、的Bad negative discouraging沮丧But however neverthelessImportant vital indispensable不可或缺 Problem issue dilemma(crisis)困境devote替换spendHe spends all his spare time reading.He devotes all his spare time to reading.appreciate 替换thankThank you very much for you help.We appreciate your help very much.be supp
15、osed to 替换shouldHe is supposed to(should)have driven more slowly.due to替换because ofHe arrived late due to(because of)the storm.contribute to替换 be helpful/usefulPlenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.the majorit
16、y of替换mostThe majority of(Most of)the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the e up with替换think ofJack is very clever.He often comes up with(thinks of)new ideas.refer to 替换talk about/of,mentionThe professor you referred to(talked about)is very famous.consist of替换be made up ofOur class
17、 consists of(is made up of)50 students.spare no efforts to do替换try ones best to domeanwhile替换at the same timeas a matter of fact 替换in fact2 2、打破全篇人做主语的窘状、打破全篇人做主语的窘状1.动词的名词化 动词变成名词 +there be More and more people accept the importance of A.There is a growing acceptance of the importance of A.Someone
18、knocked at the front door.There is a knock at the front door.2、形容词的名词化 形容词变成名词，+there be We felt very excited/joyful/delighted.There was great/tremendous/enormous excitement/joy/delight.3.原因状语从句的名词化 把because,as,since等引导词去掉 把状语从句中的主语去掉，动词变成名词作主语 用表因果关系的动词短语,如lead to,result in,bring about,account for,
19、contribute to做谓语Because people fail to realize the importance of our environment,water and air are seriously contaminated污染.Failure to realize environmental preservation保护 brings about severe water and air contamination.Because people emphasize too much on economic development,our environment is ser
20、iously pollutedEmphasis on economic development leads to severe environment pollution.3、常用的高大上句式、常用的高大上句式 It句型 It will be+some time+beforeIt wont be long before humans visit the Mars.It is+adj.+for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well,because it has changed our life so muc
21、h.It is+被强调部分+that It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.the morethe more The more books we read,the more learned we become.more than any other 表示最高级 Among the optional courses,spoken English and computer study are more popular than any one else.比较级表最高级Nothing is+形容词比较级+than to do
22、sth.Nothing is more important than to receive education.（非限制性）定语从句 It was quite an experience for us both,which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.分词结构 Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV,playing games,and meeting people.Hearing this,a few people began to run after him.Born in
23、American,Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.with结构A terrible accident happened yesterday,with nine people killed and almost eighty injured.倒装句Only in this way can weNot until then did I realize that直到那时我才意识到There is no doubt+that 从句 毫无疑问 There is no doubt that we will win.开放式作文写作攻略开放式作
24、文写作攻略一、步骤第一段：引出话题 开头第一段引出话题，点出观点，可用到主语从句和定语从句 It is well-known that smile is the most pleasant expression in life,from which we can benefit a lot,for example,getting encouragement and building up confidence.运用谚语格言的方式引出话题 There is a saying that goes,“life is much like a mirror.If you smile upon it,it
25、 smiles back upon you.”,with which you can get along well with others.第二段：举例第二段：举例，记叙文段落，注意连接词连接词的使用Take myself as an example,When I first learned English,I found it was not as easy as I had thought before.Disappointed,I decided to quit.At this time My English teacher came to me,saying,“I believe yo
26、u can do it.After that,she gave me a big shining smile.Suddenly,I was full of confidence again.Since then,a confident smile has always been on my face whenever a challenge comes to me.第三段：总结观点第三段：总结观点，议论文段落 结尾部分，重申话题和观点，回应开头，对好的方面提倡，利弊都有的合理把握开放式作文枝干开放式作文枝干 一、首段：议论 引出话题，点明观点 teamwork/smile is importa
27、nt 二、第二段：记叙 举例子 举例：当班长 足球队长的例子；别人的微 笑给自己鼓励的例子 三、第三段：议论 总结升华观点，提倡/反对 teamwork是至关重要的，要注重团队合作；微笑可以带来很多正能量，生活中要对身边的人报以微笑开放式作文模版开放式作文模版第一段 It is well-known that.is the most.in life,from which we can.for example.第 二 段 Ta k e m y s e l f a s a n e x a m p l e,W h e n I f i r s t .Disappointed.Suddenly.Fina
28、lly.Since then.第三段 In conclusion,.can bring us.with which.It is advocated that we should Only with can we 即学即练：即学即练：teamworkIt is well-known that teamwork is the most important way of solving problem in life,through which we can complete the task efficiently.Take myself as an example,I was the leade
29、r of a football team.Once in a match,our team failed although all the members had tried their best.Later the coach told us the with key point was teamwork,which means we should cooperate with each other.Realizing the importance of teamwork,finally we succeed.In conclusion,teamwork can help us play the role of every member at best.Only with teamwork can we make our complicated work easier.
