1、 好作文要求好作文要求1.内容完整无疏漏。2.语句流畅不拼凑。3.语法正确无错误。4.书写规范不潦草。请你请你评分评分I am 15-years-old.I like play basketball.I like eat health food,such as vegetable,fruits.they can make me keep health.I favorite subject is math and Chinese.I very like math.Because it interesting.My math teacher usually patient with me.I do
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6、ery muchIts is usually patient It s difficult for me some friends Do want to friends 易错点1.名词的单复数问题。2.主谓一致问题。3.词类误用问题。4.Chinglish 问题。5.时态、语法问题。1.天下大雨，他没赶上校车。天下大雨，他没赶上校车。A.He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.B.It rained heavily,so he didnt catch the school bus.2.我们应当保护环境。我们应当保护环境。A we s
7、hould protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.3.我希望你能帮我我希望你能帮我A.Im looking forward to your help.B.I hope you can help me.4.我不吃垃圾食品。我不吃垃圾食品。A.I dont eat junk food.B.I stay away from junk food.5.我们应该努力取得好成绩。我们应该努力取得好成绩。A.Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.B.We s
8、hould work hard to get good grades.My best friend My best friend is Peter.He is 15 years old.He is of medium build.He has short black hair.He loves playing pingpong.He is good at math.He often helps other people.I like my friend.Try again 1.写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议健康生活，从三个方面说明保持健康。food a blanced diet,vegetables,fruit,less meatexercise do more exercise,take a walk,play ball gameshappiness keep happy,make friends,smileGood Ways to Keep HealthyIt is very important for us to keep healthy.But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?2.请就你喜欢的宠物，如猫、狗等写一篇70-80字的短文，为什么喜欢它，介绍大家认识你的宠物。My PetBest wishes to you
