1、北师大高中英语选修六unit16communicationworkshop课件选修6Unit16CommunicationWorkshopUsethefollowinggivenwordstomakeupashortstoryWarm-upbus,wait,walk,hot,teacher,remind,competition,prepare,last,tearReadingReadthethreedraftsofastudentscompositiononthetopicADayWhenEverythingWentWrong.Decidewhichoneisthemostinterestin
2、g.Thinkabouthowthewriter:attractstheattentionofthereader.showstheorderofevents.sharesfeelingswiththereader.usesvividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinteresting.May24thwasabadday.Thedayeverythingwentwrongwasmay24th.May24th,2005willliveinmymindforever.HowthewriterattractstheattentionofthereaderHowthewrite
3、rshowstheorderofeventsBecausetheschoolbusdidnotFirst,Ihadtowait30minutesfortheschoolbusThedaystartedtogowrongtheinstantIlefthome.Atschool,Mr.fanThenextproblemhappenedwhenIarrivedatschool.Butthetroublewasonlyjustbeginning.WhenIgotintobedthatnight,IThelastproblemofthisterribledayhappenedwhenIgotintoEv
4、enthen,mytroubleswerenotover.AsIgotintobed,Thiswasabigmistake!andyoucanimaginehowIfeltbythetime.Whataclumsyendtoanawfulday!HowthewritersharesfeelingswiththereaderHowthewriterusedvividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinterestingItwashotandtiresome.Thedaywashotandtiring.ThesunwasalreadyboilinghotMr.fan,the
5、EnglishteacherremindedmeoftheThissurprisedmeMr.fan,theEnglishteacher,alargebutfriendlyman,gavemeanastysurprise.HeremindedmeinhisloudvoicethatAsIclimbedupthestairstotheclassroom,Iheardaboomingvoicebehindme.Ifeltawkwardandhadtolookdownatmybookduringthecompetition.TherewasonlyalittleapplausewhenIleftth
6、estage.TherewasnotimetopracticeatlunchtimeandIreadfrommybookinsteadofrecitingthepoems.AsIleftthestage,therewasonlysomequietapplause.IwasnotsurprisedwhenIcamelastinthecompetition.Itried,andfailedtopracticeduringthelunchbreak.Theresult?Icouldntrememberanyofthepoemsandhadtokeeplookingdownatmybook.Themo
7、reIlookeddown,thereddermyfacebecame.Ifelttenseanddizzy.WhenIleftthestagepeopledidntapplaudveryloudlyanditcameasnosurprisethatIwaslastinthecompetition.layoutintroductionbeginningofthenarrativeconclusiondevelopmentofthenarrativeMakedraftAandBmoreinterestingbyreplacingsomephraseswithmorecolorfullanguag
8、e.1.reallysleepy2.wasaterribleshock3.burningwithshame4.Thefirstsignofthingstocomewas5.mytroublesonlygotworse6.thefinalhorrorcamePredictanswersbeforelisteningEurydiceandOrpheuslovedeachother.Oneday,theywentout,andEurydicefellasleepunderanappletreeThekingofFairiestookheraway,andOrpheusfeltsadandleftthepalacewiththeharp.oneday,hefollowedagroupofpeopleinthewoods,andcametothepalaceofthekingofFairies.HeplayedtheharpandthekingofFairiespromisedhimanything.HetookEurydiceawayandlivedahappylife.
