1、外研()英语必修二-unit3-A-Game-for-the-World-概要写作课件Can you guess what it is according to the following description?It has a long history.It is beneficial to our body health.It is not very big,whose weight is between 396g and 453g.People all over the world like it very much.It is a circle with white and blac
2、k.Sometimes we play it with our head but usually we play it with our foot.2022-11-7understand and analyze the passage(its style,structure,etc)summarize the main idea and topic sentence of each paragraph of the passagelearn how to write a summary and write a summary of the passage A Game for the worl
3、dAfter this class,I will be able to Feeding the worlds population is a big challenge,and it is going to get bigger.Right now,a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet.By 2050,some scientists estimate,the world population may reach 9 billion.Summary:It is a bigger and bigger challenge to
4、 feed the worlds population.Reading for the main idea1.To talk about the history of football.2.To express his/her love of football.3.To explain why football is such a popular game.4.To prove that he/she is a professional football fan.Fast reading for the styleWhat is the style of this passage?Narrat
5、ion Argumentation Exposition (记叙文记叙文)(议论文议论文)(说明文说明文)A AB BC CPara 1Para 2Para 3Para 4Reading for the structureAnother factor isWhats moreHow many parts can we divide the passage?key/supporting pointsmain ideaconclusion Reading skill for structure:Pay attention to the coordinating conjunction(并列连词)F
6、ind the main idea and key pointsPara.Topic sentence12345 Reading skill for topic sentence:the first/last sentence/join them togetherexposition 说明文说明文List the main idea and key pointsPara.Key points1Football is one of the most popular sports in the world.It dates back to Ancient China.It dates back t
7、o Ancient China.2That football is such a simple game to play is perhaps the basis of its popularity.It is also a game that is very cheap to play.3Another factor is the creativity and excitement on the field.4Football has become one of the best ways for people to communicate:it does not require words
8、,but everyone understands it.5 Football is very important.Examples of rewriting the key pointsPara 1Football is one of the most popular sports in the world.It dates back to Ancient China.rewrite combine sentences(合并句子合并句子)2022-11-7Examples of restating the key pointsPara 4Football has become one of
9、the best ways for people to communicate:it does not require words,but everyone understands it.rewrite It is a great way for people to communicate without words.delete/summarize detailed information(删除删除/概括细节概括细节)change the sentence structure(句型转换句型转换)2022-11-72.use synonyms(同义词的运用同义词的运用)bine sentenc
10、es(合并句子)3.delete or summarize the detailed information and example (删除或概括)4.change the sentence structure(句型转换)How to rewrite?Use proper transitions(衔接词衔接词)to polish(修改修改)the summary.For example:(表并列或递进表并列或递进)besides,in addition,furthermore；(表转折表转折)but,however,though,although (表列举表列举)firstly,secondl
11、y,finally.Football enjoys popularity all over the world,which dates back to Ancient China.(main idea)The reasons why it is popular are various.First,it is easy and inexpensive to play.(key point1)Though some audience are unprofessional,they can understand it for its creativity and excitement.(key po
12、int2)Finally,people can express themselves just through football.(key point3)In conclusion,football is a sport of vital importance.(conclusion)(61词)Step threeRewrite the main idea and key points in your own words.Step twoFind the main idea and key points in each paragraph;Step oneRead the passage to
13、 find the structure and divide it into several parts;bine sentences(合并句子合并句子)2.use synonyms(同义词的运用同义词的运用)3.delete or summarize detailed information and example(删除删除/概括细节概括细节)4.change the sentence structure(句型转换句型转换)Use proper conjunctions(连接连接词词)to polish your passage.Self-Evaluation2022-11-71.under
14、stand and analyze the passage(its style,structure,etc)2.summarize the main idea and topic sentence of each paragraph of the passage3.learn how to write a summary and write a summary of the passage A Game for the worldAfter this class,I can Homework1.Polish(修改修改)your summary writing by using the skil
15、ls and the standard;2.Draw a mind map of another passage by using what we have learned.1.1.高考作文不同于高考作文不同于“自由写作自由写作”高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要“根据要求写作根据要求写作”，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚。，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，
16、畏手畏脚。2.2.而要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。而要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。3.3.一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要。一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富
17、有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要。4.4.出现大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的缺点出现大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的缺点。5.5.空洞乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅无力空洞乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅无力。6.6.段落中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏说服力段落中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，
18、论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏说服力。7.7.这是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出这是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出“你们你们”成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁。成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁。8.8.在运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。在运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。
